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Description EDIT: Alright, I've fixed Jazz's and Danny's eyes! nowwillyouquitpokingme >.<;;

Also, I have decided what I will be doing with the Dash/Dani issue so I don't need any feedback for that anymore. Hopefully, it will satisfy everyone when ou guys finally read it That goes for people who like the idea to people who want it never to happen. What is it? Well, I ain't gonna say xD You'll have to read it when it comes out Or ask me on aim for those who talk to me there *cough* xDDD

Also, as of a loooong convo I had with my sis last night, I have named the working title 'Yin Yang' for now. Also, she might join me in writing it. And lastly, there might already be a sequel >.<;; While I already have a big idea for Vlad, I don't think there will be any room for him in this fic. The villainous presence is already filled by someone in a completely different league than Vlad and I think it would just bring down the magnitude of this fic having Vlad's issues in there. So no Vladdeh... till the possible sequel.

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The finished product of [link]

4. DAYS. STRAIGHT.

*SPOILERS FOR SEASON THREE IN EXPLANATION*

You have been warned!

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So, this is from an idea still in the making for a post-series DP fic. This will be Team Phantom in the fic, summer before Senior year of high school for Danny and a few others. To give some background on the pic, I'll give a little 'heads up' as to where everyone is at the beginning of the fic.

Danny: Still teen hero of the world, has been dating Sam for two years now. He's picked his grades up thanks to her and pretty much his high school life is similar to that in his Frightmare dream (though I haven't decided yet whether or not to make him quarterback of the football team... technically now he could "unfairly" use his powers since there wouldn't exactly be a rule against it yet xD > Give me your thoughts on this please! I'm open to suggestions though I'm leaning away from quarterback position.) He is also recognized as an extremely powerful ghost now, however that hasn’t made his ghost fighting any easier. Luckily with the government on his side now, the Guys in White take care of most of the unwanted crowds around ghost fights and the human ghost hunters or enthusiasts out to get him.

Sam: Dating Danny (duh), she's still her unique self. Her life sans-Danny is mostly hanging out at her favourite book store and her participation as an activist. She's relatively sour towards Tucker for his continuation of Vlad's 'out with the old and in with the new' campaign, however she tries to keep her political side away from the personal when they're simply hanging out (which is continuously less and less for other reasons...)

Tucker: Tucker has dropped out of school as he continues his career as a politician. He is slowly learning and becoming a great politician, however with an upcoming election, he's busier and busier, and he sees less and less of his old pals. However, with a buried jealousy still towards Danny (Fm reference) and an already strained friendship between the two, their friendship is heading towards dire consequences...

Jazz: Back from her first year of college, Jazz is as peppy as ever. Her brother's heroism has followed her as well to her new school, leading her to popularity amongst peers she's not used to and a little daunted by. She has a boyfriend going on almost 8 months but for the moment, she’s enjoying her life back at home and with her family.

Dani: Danielle was introduced to the Fentons shortly after PP took place. Since then, Maddie and Jack have adopted her as one of their own. While she sometimes misses being the free-roaming spirit she had been before, she’s settled into life with the Fentons and, more importantly, life in high school. She tends to stay more often than naught in ghost form as it is her original and thus most comfortable form.

Dash: After an incident with Dash attempting to help his hero, Danny, fight ghosts, Dash and Danny set aside their past history and have been working on a new friendship. With Dash as a new member of Team Phantom, Danny has been helping him become a better person, using his energy he used to put towards bullying towards ghost fighting instead. While Dash continues to try to portray his tough persona, the rest of Team Phantom get glimpses, on occasion, of his softer side.

Valerie: Finally having accepted Phantom as ‘good’ in D-S and PP, Valerie was shocked but understanding when she learned about Fenton and Phantom being the same. Ever since, she has joined up with Danny and the rest of the gang to fight ghosts, seeing the value in learning everything they knew, and the stronger ghost hunter she could be by working in a team, rather than on her own. While she still has to earn extra money for her family, she’s able to balance everything much better, allowing her to pull her grades up as well.

And there you have it! Explanations are open to change before I finalize the fic. Like I said, it’s still in the ‘ production stages’ in my mind xD;; The actual pic here is similar to a photo taken at the pier in August before Danny’s (and Sam, Val and Dash’s) senior year in high school, which is around the time I want to start the fic.

By the way, I’m gonna throw this out there because I want feedback on it. My mind has been considering introducing the pairing Danielle/Dash in the fic. But, is that just TOO weird? Would it scare people off? I’ve been considering it for a number of reasons, and I would do my very best to keep them in character. Of course, Danielle will be 14 going on 15 in the fic (since Danny estimated her at 12 in the show and I’m going by that estimation) so she will be a little more mature than she has acted in the show (yes, it’s about that time for her to start being interested in boys xD). Anyways, it comes down to this… due to a sister/sister bonding moment between her and Jazz, Dani will have a crush. Should I make it on Dash (or someone else but have Dash crush on her) or should I just have it as a completely different boy and have nothing between them altogether? Too weird or interesting enough? All opinions welcome!

Anyways, tis all. PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK!!! This is one of the few times I will ask for general public opinions on forming a fiction and I want to hear what you guys think!

All characters © Butch Hartman
Fic idea and pic © Fey
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Comments: 345

4nim3-Sg-1-fr34k In reply to ??? [2007-09-06 01:43:43 +0000 UTC]

ah! thx^^

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swordbunny4486 In reply to ??? [2007-08-26 07:20:50 +0000 UTC]

cool

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FeyPhantom In reply to swordbunny4486 [2007-09-05 22:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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aireon4 In reply to ??? [2007-08-25 19:36:01 +0000 UTC]

I Love this pic and I can't wait to see the fic...i think the Dani/Dash thing sounds like a great idea... it would be funny if she had a crush on someone else but her and dash kept being thrown into ackward situations...smiles anyway awesome work....me

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FeyPhantom In reply to aireon4 [2007-09-05 22:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and you'll just have to wait and see what we have in store for Dani and Dash

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shaunre In reply to ??? [2007-08-13 03:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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FeyPhantom In reply to shaunre [2007-08-13 21:04:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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hidingxinnocence In reply to ??? [2007-08-06 02:21:44 +0000 UTC]

If somebody, in the future, tells you that you have no talent, let me know and I'll personally beat him.
Because he will deserve it (:
I love this, I really do. I think is pretty awesome, mostly because we're able to see the DP characters in a totally new light...
And, let's be honest, Danny looks just... Stunning *-*
By the way, looking forward for that fanfic
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand, adding this to favorites. Congrats ^^

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FeyPhantom In reply to hidingxinnocence [2007-08-08 06:30:06 +0000 UTC]

lol Thank you very much, but I'll take care of anyone who tries to put me down personally But, THANK YOU for all the kind words! I'm glad you like this piece

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DeviantArtRAWKS In reply to ??? [2007-08-02 17:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! It looks like a screenshot I love Samantha's hair and outfit!

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FeyPhantom In reply to DeviantArtRAWKS [2007-08-08 06:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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ChroniclesOfKitten In reply to ??? [2007-08-01 20:34:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow. They all look so cool, especially Danny x] I want Danny's baaabies but Sam is having them..

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FeyPhantom In reply to ChroniclesOfKitten [2007-08-08 06:44:24 +0000 UTC]

xD Err, okay then. lol Thanks

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peterg142 In reply to ??? [2007-07-30 05:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, what a bleak and awful future for Tucker. Not that he dies or anything, but it sounds like he won't have any friends. And he drops right out of school and becomes a politician. He just doesn't seem like that type of guy. I think he'd at least be home schooled to get his GED if he's not in school. What people got against The Tuck? Everytime I see his future, he's always separated from Sam and Danny. Like he was a poison in there relationship or something...

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FeyPhantom In reply to peterg142 [2007-08-01 23:26:22 +0000 UTC]

To be honest, I have absolutely nothing against Tuck. Actually, I belong to a fanclub for him. Just, Tucker has made comments about not liking school in the series, and while he is portrayed as the typical Techno Geek, he doesn't have the grades that usually come with that role. In fact, in Teacher of the Year, we see he does pretty poorly in school. Tucker's ambitious. If, at 14, he's already achieved a stable job, not to mention one that comes with a lot of responsibility and power, I could see him not caring about his education. High school doesn't teach you very often about current affairs and politics, but about generalized subjects that Tucker wouldn't need to know in his position - or at least, I could see him believing he doesn't need to know.

In the story, Tucker will go through a tough time because of his ambitious nature. His choice to stick with politics will put immense pressure on his relationship with Danny. As we see in Frightmare, I believe Tucker's still jealous of Danny, and that will also have its repurcussions in this story. In fact, Tuck's dream is the reason why I even have this strain in his and Danny's friendship - because he's obviously not gotten completely over his jealousy, which in my opinion is a poison in the relationship, introduced in the canon.

Yes, Tuck will have difficulties in this story, but I hope with the way things develop, I'll be able to write it so it seems as a natural progression. But I also don't plan on leaving poor Tuck friendless forever. Think of it as a rough patch that will lead to a lesson and a better life and stornger relationship to those Tuck holds dear.

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rhiannyn In reply to ??? [2007-07-30 00:42:47 +0000 UTC]

I love what you've done with Sam's character design!

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FeyPhantom In reply to rhiannyn [2007-08-08 06:45:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AlterEgo911 In reply to ??? [2007-07-26 22:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Hey, they each have a logo somewhere on their person

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FeyPhantom In reply to AlterEgo911 [2007-08-08 06:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes they do XD

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AlterEgo911 In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-08-08 22:54:47 +0000 UTC]

cool, shows unity

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Hyperknucklesgc In reply to ??? [2007-07-16 14:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Simply Amazing!! Awesome work!

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FeyPhantom In reply to Hyperknucklesgc [2007-08-08 23:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Silbido-Phantom In reply to ??? [2007-07-15 21:37:12 +0000 UTC]

I love jazz!
and, I would like a DanniXDash o.O

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FeyPhantom In reply to Silbido-Phantom [2007-08-08 23:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Hee, thanks!

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KaliPhantom In reply to ??? [2007-07-07 23:08:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice crisp lines here, and awesome digital colours! It is digital, right? I think it is... Anyway, I can't wait to read the story/see more sketches, though I hope Yana knows what she's getting into volunteering to start writing again... And are you sure you want her doing timelines and whatnot for you? Not that I don't want to see a collab, but still...

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FeyPhantom In reply to KaliPhantom [2007-08-08 23:10:25 +0000 UTC]

Digital, yes XD Photoshop. And we were kinda bouncing ideas off each other a lot. We work well that way... developing ideas through talking it out. I think I'll probably be doing most of the writing, but I can talk through the scenes with her to make up the basic storyline... which at this point is coming alon nicely.

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KaliPhantom In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-08-11 16:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I can see that. She's a good bouncer. I've used her for that too. Glad to hear it's progressing nicely and that neither of you have killed the other yet.

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Coronadofwb In reply to ??? [2007-07-06 02:56:46 +0000 UTC]

I love all of the designs! They all look so awesome and definitely more grown up. I especially love how you did Sam Wonderful work! This look like it took a while to do <3

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FeyPhantom In reply to Coronadofwb [2007-08-08 23:08:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you muchly

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lilimimi [2007-07-02 15:25:06 +0000 UTC]

the pic looks GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ... but sam kinda scares me.

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FeyPhantom In reply to lilimimi [2007-08-08 23:08:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! XD

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Timmy-22222001 In reply to ??? [2007-06-30 21:52:02 +0000 UTC]

Whoa talk about a ton of talent, you got some incredible artwork FeyPhantom, most fabulous! *applauses*

Wow that must have taken quite a while to get done, I love your style with Dani, she's way cool!

Good luck on your fic too, if its like your work here it sounds to be very well done!

*covers eyes for spoilers* Must catch that last episode still!!!! ^0^

Hats off to you again FeyPhantom, keep up this stylish work!

Later,

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FeyPhantom In reply to Timmy-22222001 [2007-08-08 23:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! ~

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Timmy-22222001 In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-08-09 06:08:31 +0000 UTC]

Welcome Fey. ^_^

Later,

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Shibby-One In reply to ??? [2007-06-29 18:49:25 +0000 UTC]

Hey, that's so cool! They all look awfully awesome. ^_^ And, like everyone else, I like the added touch of them all sporting the DP logo.

It's obvious you put a lot of time and effort into this, and it really paid off!

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FeyPhantom In reply to Shibby-One [2007-06-29 19:08:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Kurachika In reply to ??? [2007-06-29 18:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Is the story up somewhere?

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FeyPhantom In reply to Kurachika [2007-06-29 19:06:44 +0000 UTC]

Nope. Will be up in a long while. Most likely not yet for months. When it is put up, it will be here and on ff.net.

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Kurachika In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-06-29 19:38:27 +0000 UTC]

D: aww got me all fired up bout it with this awesome fanart. U is evil! >.< jk, can't wait to read it when it's up.

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CommodoreGC In reply to ??? [2007-06-28 22:40:46 +0000 UTC]

I really like all the new outfits for them, it makes it like we are seeing them in a whole new light Jazz's and Sam's new hairstyle rocks and the guys look perfect in their new duds! Fantastic work!

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FeyPhantom In reply to CommodoreGC [2007-06-29 18:32:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Well, they certainly are different people than they were, but of course, designing new outfits is always fun Thanks so much ^^

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airbender22 In reply to ??? [2007-06-28 00:58:05 +0000 UTC]

That is awesome! I don't think that Dani and Dash will make it, but I ♥ the pic!

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FeyPhantom In reply to airbender22 [2007-06-28 03:09:03 +0000 UTC]

lol Thanks

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Fulcon In reply to ??? [2007-06-27 04:54:49 +0000 UTC]

Alright, this is good. Just a couple of questions.

1: Does future Team Phantom know that Dan Phantom still exists? Does Danny even know? (I would prefer it if they didn't, as it would be cool for them to be suprised about him existing, and finding out EXACTLY who Dan is. I can already see the look on Dani's face...)

2: Has Vlad come back from space? Or is he lost in space for good?

3: Last question, Are you going to post this fic on Fanfiction.net? It looks like it will be really good!

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FeyPhantom In reply to Fulcon [2007-06-27 20:06:15 +0000 UTC]

1. Phantom actually isn't in the fic thus far. There is a possibility that he will show up in the sequel, but it isn't planned yet. As of right now though, since I will not have him in the first fic, he will not be brought up in conversation so I haven't decided who will know about Phantom. Off the top of my head, probably just Sam, Tucker and Jazz, since they met him and Danny would've probably told them what happened.

2. Vlad is not going to be in the first fic either so it won't be disclosed until the second fic that he has been residing in the ghost zone for the past couple years

3. This fic will be posted at fanfiction.net and here at dA. However, I still have Mercy, Schism of the Soul and Of Age and Era to finish before I work on this (with the possibility of doing Innocence Incarcerated and Craving Freedom as well). So it won't be for a little while till you see this

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Fulcon In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-06-27 20:44:50 +0000 UTC]

Gotcha. I thought Danny would be clueless enough to forget to tell anyone about Dan, and it never came up again, as he thought that he doesn't exist. But its your fic.

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FeyPhantom In reply to Fulcon [2007-06-27 23:36:34 +0000 UTC]

Well, Sam and Tucker remember going to the future and meeting him, and Jazz remembers seeing him in her house, so I'm sure they would have poked Danny about what exactly happened xD At least, that's my opinion on what might have happened after the episode.

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Fulcon In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-06-27 23:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm...maybe, or they (Sam and Tucker) could have tried to poke Dan when he was impersonating his younger self, and he gave them a satisfactory answer, but Jazz... I don't know. She might've decided that Danny would tell her all about it when he was ready, but I don't know. Once again, your fic.

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Mean-girl05 In reply to ??? [2007-06-26 23:47:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow i like the clothes really cool.

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FeyPhantom In reply to Mean-girl05 [2007-06-27 23:54:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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