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Published: 2018-08-26 23:55:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1445; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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The first page of Equilibrium~!


...(I so totally didn't spend six hours just staring at the paper.... nope... toooooottally not what happened.... XD)


But yeah, we're starting out with Sans and Papyrus from the original Universe, Undertale. (Classic and Orange)


Outertale is gonna show up next... its only the first page that only has one au in it... XD


Hey look!


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..I still can't draw backgrounds! XD


Last page (Cover)


Next page


Undertale : Toby Fox

Art and comic storyline : me

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Comments: 5

Cl1M4t1K4 [2020-11-13 07:41:04 +0000 UTC]

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Akystaracer [2019-01-28 05:29:29 +0000 UTC]

*EXCITED SCREECHING INTENSIFIES*

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GhostLiger [2018-08-27 18:49:20 +0000 UTC]

It's a good start ^^ The only thing I would suggest is when putting multiple speech bubbles in the same panel is make sure you put the one that's intended to be read first above the others.


For example in panel four, the positioning of the bubbles means that Pap's response is the first thing your eyes are naturally drawn to, meaning that it'll be read before the comment it was replying to.

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FidgetFrenzy In reply to GhostLiger [2018-08-27 22:56:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks~!


ah... yeah, I realized that once I finished it, but by the time I was done with the page, I was a bit too tired to care.... I might fix it at one point...


maybe....


a bit busy with the other pages and doodles rn...


I'm stuck in a drawing mood today for some reason... XD


Thanks for pointing it out tho~! (tbh I had completely forgotten that I did that until u pointed it out... XD)

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GhostLiger In reply to FidgetFrenzy [2018-08-30 15:38:06 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough XD Can't say I've never had moments like that.


And NP ^^

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