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Published: 2013-03-27 19:39:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 928; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 6
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So, I still can't believe I'm uploading this.This is the first pony I've ever drawn.
People said they wanted to see, so here she is. Blossomforth!
I guess the question now is, do I keep drawing?
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Comments: 10
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The only way to get better is to keep practicing!
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Keep trying man ;], You have a good eye for shading!, You can only get better /)
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Thank you. I'll certainly try to draw some more when I get some free time.
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Yup, you'll do better than me when it comes to procrastination and you'll keep drawing
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You'll come along, quicker, seeing the community you chill with. So, here is what I think and if you get to know me more, you'll find I am always honest, but never mean.
Good
- Pony design, particularly in the mane and shoes.
- The stance and pose are very nice.
- The paper look is always good to see.
Bad
-Perportions are a bit off & the rear-left hoof is too far up.
- The lines seem a little undefined.
Suggestions
-Use references.
-use very sharp pencils and make the first pass very light, then darken on 2nd pass, erasing the less perfect of the lines.
-Place your ponies in a place of action, talking, eating, sleeping, doing something to evoke a look of personality.
- Most importantly: KEEP DRAWING!!! You will get better, we all do.
In no time at all you will have a large portfolio of art and a little following, just like the majority of the Deviants on here.
Welcome to the club, Fifth!
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This is very good for a first try! Her face is precious!
The shading is nice too. Keep drawing!
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What Light said, definitely keep drawing! You've got the artist's touch. ^w^
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Of course you keep drawing! Good way to improve.
I should get to that as well, actually.
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