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With my toes on the edge it's such a lovely view,Don't cry
I never loved anything until I loved you
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ColubrineDeuce [2014-06-24 04:24:26 +0000 UTC]
I like it.
I wonder, what are you using to capture this? The blacks aren't solid enough, and the lens puts some distortion to it. Cell phone? If that is the case, I might suggest you use gimp or shop or something to correct these things. It goes from really white to yellow and I just think that with these kinds of adjustments, your work could garner more attention.
Things to consider is the lighting, and therefore white balance that leads to these subtle differences.
Did you mean for there to be black lines around it? Then maybe a crop would suffice?
There being patches where it is blurry might indicate a dirty lens maybe?
I say these things because I have taken on a task of photographing my friends artwork, and had no real idea of the difficulty of doing it well so that you have an accurate representation of the work to transfer to another medium, so these kinds of things stick out to me now.
That said, I love the idea. Your lines all look solid, and the overall execution turned out really nice. I think the different kinds of black kind of take away from it, maybe ballpoint pen vs sharpie? Might be worth going back in and using a sharpie fine point just so that it has a uniformity possibly. But again, it might be the way that the lighting makes it look, especially fluorescents have a tendency to show things that eyes wouldn't really have noticed before hand.
Great work all in all. Thanks for sharing!
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tagakain In reply to finiteInfinityQ [2014-06-17 12:43:29 +0000 UTC]
you are very much welcome!
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finiteInfinityQ In reply to MatthewWilliams777 [2014-06-14 15:40:54 +0000 UTC]
thank you
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MatthewWilliams777 In reply to finiteInfinityQ [2014-06-15 14:36:42 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome
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AngieAvadaKedavra [2014-06-11 19:59:43 +0000 UTC]
krΓ‘sne! lalala...uΕΎ sa nato dΓvam asi 8 minΓΊt a eΕ‘te stΓ‘le objavujem novΓ© vzori! krΓ‘sny styl! uplne
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finiteInfinityQ In reply to AngieAvadaKedavra [2014-06-12 16:11:40 +0000 UTC]
dakujem, som rada ze sa ti paci
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paplon [2014-06-11 16:36:28 +0000 UTC]
Velmi pekny styl, paci sa mi. Dobre sa na to pozera a je tu toho naozaj vela na videnie. Podla mna mas dobry cit pre to kde kolko detailov dat. Ten kontrast cistych miest ako okolo stromu(velmi ladne vyzerajuci mimochodom) a detailnych miest vyzera uzasne. Ach vyzera to proste skvelo Moj osobny fav detail momentalne su pery a fuziky na chlapcovi/muzovi.
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finiteInfinityQ In reply to paplon [2014-06-11 19:13:35 +0000 UTC]
Jeej, tak vidno ze si si to pozrel naozaj ^^
Ja som rozmyslala ako to spravit tak, aby tam ostali niektore crty tvare, ale aby sa zachovala ta myslienka.. Myslim ze sa mi to celkom podarilo, aj ked vacsinou teda so svojimi dielami nie som uplne spokojna.
Kazdopadne dakujem za koment
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paplon In reply to finiteInfinityQ [2014-06-12 16:17:51 +0000 UTC]
Myslim ze toto si zasluzi dlhsi cas na pozretie. Urcite sa k tomu este vratim pozriet neskor.
Ja som na tom podobne. Vacsinou nie som, ale sem tam sa podari nieco s cim som. Β Β
Rado sa stalo
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finiteInfinityQ In reply to paplon [2014-06-12 18:33:50 +0000 UTC]
Budem len rada Kazdy postreh potesi!
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icemaidenArt [2014-06-11 01:13:41 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous! I love the concept of the two bodies being different worlds,each unknowing of each other,sums up love quite well.
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finiteInfinityQ In reply to icemaidenArt [2014-06-11 06:04:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
For me it's like I know (more or less) what is in my head.. But it's so difficult to understand others, to know what they really mean and feel. Especially men.
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icemaidenArt In reply to finiteInfinityQ [2014-06-12 13:34:27 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome,it's beautiful!
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finiteInfinityQ In reply to imclod [2014-06-10 13:33:32 +0000 UTC]
naozaj? som velmi rada.
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imclod In reply to finiteInfinityQ [2014-06-10 13:43:37 +0000 UTC]
Naozaj. Len nemam dost casu na to, aby som to docenil ako by sa patrilo.
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finiteInfinityQ In reply to imclod [2014-06-10 18:37:04 +0000 UTC]
ved nikam neujde. casu mas dost.
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IrisTechn [2014-06-10 09:38:33 +0000 UTC]
I have never seen a picture like this! Great!
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