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Description If Aklamos, the Judge of the Blessed and ruler over the afterlife Phantom's Paradise, would choose a mate she would bond with this mate in a very special way.
They would meld and "become one".
Aklamos would be able to feel the mate's every heartbeat and sense if something is wrong.
And if something is wrong...like someone tries to kill her mate......
Then the Mistress of Death would feel it at once and in less than a second she would teleport to the aid of her mate and show why you don't mess with Death.
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Finjix In reply to ??? [2016-04-09 08:28:35 +0000 UTC]

This is a "what if" pic xD
Nothing decided x)

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Montiessor In reply to Finjix [2016-04-09 13:49:19 +0000 UTC]

Then you should put a "what if" man, you almost scared the creativity out of me! XDXD
Not yet…

By the way I love the design of Impeldron's shadow disguise. Very fitting

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GShepherd17 In reply to ??? [2016-04-09 04:58:27 +0000 UTC]

what kind of plans?

Ya sure Imp succeeded foiling Emphasis? Cause looks like he's about to get it hard

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-04-09 13:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Plans
Like construction plans
Design Plans
Wedding plans
Some boomerangs

Ha! And you said attack surprises did not work on him. Cause this much damage was done in a sneaky way, or else both would be bleeding and not only Emphasis

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-04-09 14:06:49 +0000 UTC]

Boomerangs?

If we must go there. May I remind you emphasis is a very kind being who refuses violence at nearly a 98% scale? Plus always exhausted by his unfathomable work ( gshepherd17.deviantart.com/art/Impossible-Formula-601905002 can't even imagine how much energy and effort this takes).

So I would say imp's fight to be one sided. But you can garuntee if he pulled this stunt, if emphasis lives, imp now has a ticket back to humanville for sure.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-04-10 03:04:53 +0000 UTC]

It's a long story… You wouldn't get it.

Well true, you compare him to a Water Buffalo last time we touched this subject. So is Impedron, and believe me forging all day takes away strength, but gives you awesome stamina and resistance, but his work often involve just preparing materials for the Guardians, or creating tops for the agents (and in some occasions help redecorate or redesign some parts of he Phantom Zone, cure you have to keep expanding so more souls can live there, and besides he loves that after finishing his job enjoy a cup of tea with Aklamos and talk with her, while watching the Sunset.)Β 

First Emphasis would have to find him, and finding monsters was Imp's job… So it will take him a long time finding Imp's many hiding shadow hideouts, and which is where he is and fish is a deadly trap (cause spider likes putting traps)Β 

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-04-10 03:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Montie, Imp would not be allowed in the phantom's paradise to redesign anything- its made to hold all souls. He can go into like the courtyard or something, but he is not allowed into the very realm itself. And trapping monsters technically was Emphasis' job for the first years he worked with them- until he got injured. And technically an Azarehen named Strey is in charge of finding the monsters as well- so Imp has to answer to him before anything else.

If Imp did this treachery, Emphasis wouldn't have to do anything. The guardians will find him and he'll not only be stripped of ranking but also be sent to hell for all eternity. Attacking a fellow agent for something such as jealousy would seal his fate to something that'd be hell.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-04-10 03:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, as I said, he would only enter to expand the Phantom Zone so make accommodations for the new souls. Wait, when was it that Emphasis was injured, and who is this other informer?

Remember that Impeldron has "befriended" Aklanarok, thus if he is sent to hell, he would most likey use his skills to favor his new "friend" in exchange for not getting punished. If the Guardians send Impeldron to hell they will be giving Aklanarok one of the greatest crafters in the Universe, thus he would give the allen Lord the tools he needs to exact vengeance.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-04-10 04:02:25 +0000 UTC]

Emphasis has been doing this operation way before Imp came into the picture cause he's been dead longer then Impeldron. Emphasis, doing his work on his own, led to a injury to his side that left a permanent limp. Strey is his partnerΒ  Β the guy who runs the show in monster hunting. He's been doing this for years, he's never been an informer. Β And he's Emphasis' best friend.

I don't think Aklanarok would really care. But regardless, Imp is in for a world of trouble if he even attempts a strike on Emphasis' life. On a being who has a no fight in him, not a mean bone in his body. Impeldron needs to learn his place, as Emphasis has done.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-04-10 04:09:43 +0000 UTC]

Why I am he last one to know this details XP

Oh he has learn it, he has been quite a responsible, trustworthy and successful agent. Always getting information and material to his fellow agents as well as a great pupil of the Guardian Crafter. Impeldron is not a fighter either, he prefers to watch and learn and hide, before ever attacking… However as I said his jealousy get's the best of him… Specially since that jealousy is fueled by fear… the fear of losing those he loves… a fear none of us wants to experience.Β 

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-04-10 04:15:37 +0000 UTC]

Uh, this has been a fact for like a year lol

Yet he plans to assault and possibly kill an agent who's knowledge is extremely critical to curing thousands, if not millions, of victims because he is jealous Aklamos might pick him? That's not trustworthy.Β 
Emphasis leaves people alone, he focuses everything he has into his work. Every blood, sweat, tears, and breath he draws is put into those cures so people don't have to suffer. Cures that Imp has made attempts to sabotage or neglects Emphasis' instructions and inflicts insubordination on someone who's incharge of the operation he's allowed to assist in. That's not responsible.
And he let's his emotions get the better of him. While this can forgivable and a character flaw, it can lead him to violence and possibly murder. That's not successful either.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-04-10 16:04:47 +0000 UTC]

Sis, remember that I study every single day, I even have troubles remembering if I went to the bathroom.

Well, there is some wrong in there. Impeldron's jealousy sure can put in doubt his trustworthiness. However he has helped Emphasis with the cure, gathering and delivering several monsters including wild spider kin, the only spiders he doesn't want to be cure are his daughter and son. But he has never sabotage any of Emphasis cures, he even tried to help him, even thought Emphasis is too stubborn to do accept it.Β 
I meant successful in the job he carries, cause he guy already failed in life.

Besides not every character you encounter is in a quest for redemption or is perfect like you are making Emphasis look

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-04-10 16:29:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm aware. But you weren't last to know. Its all on finjix's page to.

Emphasis is far from perfect, first mistake. He just became kind and aware of everything. That is all. But it is not him being stubborn, Imp hasn't given him a reason to trust him.
Emphasis is a loner who doesn't put into consideration of his own health. He stays optimistic because it's all he has. His emotions are skewered, he has to manually tell things apart. He doesn't know what people are feeling unless he sees their facial expression. He never had emotions, being born a blank slate made him have to learn EVERYTHING that humans are born knowing how to do. You think that's easy for him? It's easier to stay positive then negative.

But Impeldron reminds him of his mistakes, beating him down all the time when emphasis already knows what he's done. You said it yourself Imp always reminds him. And emphasis is new to suddenly having emotions, he doesn't want to feel pain or grief. He never had emotions before, he didn't expect the vast responsibility there was to having these feelings. It was shocking to him.
It is because of this they cannot work together. And why he singles himself out all the time. Because those cures are his version of making things right. It's all he has and all he can do.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-04-10 17:17:53 +0000 UTC]

As I told you, I don't remember ever seen that character.

But every time we talk you always make him look perfect. I am aware of his flaws and his relationship to Imp. But still every time we discuss you always make him look like he is Jesus or a God, that he has an answer for everything, knows everything (except emotions), and even thought he still has flaws and all, but like I said every time I say something about Impeldron you immediately come up with a counter argument, and give him always the advantage, making look over powered, (Like I did with Impeldron, until I change him). And I know this flaws are not easy yet you made him look like he is never ever had a problem in life, that he knows everything that he will always get what he wants no matter what. Meanwhie I try to put Imp i Β various jobs so he can et experience and abilities and always try a way he can relate to others, and he is a being that suffer a lot too. He lost everything when he was to young and force into slavery, every second of his human life he suffered and suffered and suffered. And now even as an agent he keeps suffering because he is always in Emphasis shadow, every time I try to develop Impeldron, Emphasis already won on every term and every scale possible.

Look Heather… I am extremely tired that every time we discuss about our characters it is always become ike a duel that only shows me that Emphasis is superior in every way, and that no matter what I do to develop him you always smack him down and put Emphasis in the golden pedestal, showing that he is basically Jesus….

Look let's just never discuss this stuff again, cause I fear that this wil damage our friendship and I don't want that to happen again.Β 

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-04-10 17:48:53 +0000 UTC]

But you always make impledorn stronger and make emphasis look weak or he tries to over power him. Like emphasis is just some mirror to spit on and imp is this badass of multiple talents.
Montie imp is not in emphasis' shadow because there is no shadow to begin with. You always want imp to do these things that he just can't do. He doesn't have the ability to expand heaven. I'm trying to help you simplify him but you keep adding this extra things that are crazy.
That's why I let Impeldron use emphasis' story to give him a proper entrance.

I only counter argument against imp because your doing the exact same thing to my character. You wanted a rivarly, I never said anything about that. Emphasis just wants to be left alone, but you keep putting up these events that make imp keep on challenging emphasis.
Liek he's higher ranking then emphasis and always trying to outwit emphasis or outsmart him. Making emphasis look inferior.

Emphasis has his job and that's it. He is not Jesus for God sakes. You keep making imp suffer, making his problems worse.
Emphasis hasn't done a THING to imp. You keep wanting imp to fight him when there is no need.

We can end it after this is understood so we both understand. I am not trying to torment imp, but I don't want imp tormenting my character either

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-04-11 02:12:16 +0000 UTC]

Because I have make people notice him, or else he will never be actually known by anyone.
Wha I do is that I do what I call a: What if test
In wich I just say stuff and learn what can and cannot do. And since neither you or Simon with to explain Emphasis, Aklamos and this ne Universe full story, I am blind and I have to do this questions.

Like I said, those are what if situations, cause I am curious. And my curiosity is never answered. Unless I do this questions. I am not trying to make Emphasis inferior (and if I did I am sorry) I just want to know his full extend and power, since this a new version that I donΒ΄t know.

Technically he turned him into the first Spiderkin (which Imp holds a small grudge, but he is actually enjoying his "Curse" cause his curse is what freed him). And as I said Imp, is not a real fighter, more like a Supporter, but he will go mad with jealousy.

Β 

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-04-11 02:32:59 +0000 UTC]

Ok. Well montie, we do explains things to you. We gave imp a story that can fit and a job he can do. That's it. There's no more needed.

We gotta keep everything more silent on their side because they're not main characters. That's why they can't do anything that's to overly excessive

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-04-11 03:04:33 +0000 UTC]

Well, the info is not for Imp, is for me... The better I know a Universe, the better I can work on it. To know where my boundaries are.

That is why I try to give Imp, minimal jobs, like forger or just a simple spy. I am not putting him in charge of an army. Besides you know forgers and spies are even more reserved than scientist. The only ones Imp interact are this agents who seek material or any tool for a mission, the only one Imp truly loves to make contact is with Aklamos. As because his appearance most agents avoid him.

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RagingDroidX [2016-04-07 21:50:14 +0000 UTC]

She is behind Me. Isn't She XD

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GShepherd17 [2016-04-07 19:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh shit. Just one word. RUN!!

Kk I ain't messing with her mate. Ever! XDD'
hear that ? Best something to keep in mind

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-29 22:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Sorry couldn't hear you?
What's up?

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-29 22:41:33 +0000 UTC]

um, responding to quit an old comment eh?

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-29 22:54:32 +0000 UTC]

YAY YOU FINALLY RESPOND!
Wow, we need some catching to do Heather.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-29 23:05:16 +0000 UTC]

well i'm extremely busy as of late, with my summer job now starting and the novel near to completion. Gotta a lot to juggle.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-29 23:10:41 +0000 UTC]

I suspected as much... So are you still working in the hating house or the cloth store?

Nice, the novel is really going to happen how cool is that!
I think of writing one of my own, that will not actually affect the Universe, like a spinoff or alternative Universe, like what will happen in Impeldron cross the line.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-29 23:17:59 +0000 UTC]

hating house? lol have no idea what that is.

Yep, canon friendly and everything. Its going to be awesome lol
-shrugs- have at it. As long as people know it's an alternative universe.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-29 23:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Goddamit with this autocorrect! I mean Haunting House

Canon friendly?
Yeah one problem... I suck at developing characters.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-29 23:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Nope just a summer job. Lol not a haunted house.

Means Canon, friendly to Canon plot.
Weoo writing a serious novel ain't easy. Takes a long time worths of planning.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-29 23:58:02 +0000 UTC]

But swear you once told me you worked on a Haunted House at one time... Maybe my memory is still playing tricks.

I don't get...
I have the story already planned my problem is developing the characters... I am not good at make them feel human, you know relatable to the reader.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 00:01:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, no I said one day I'd like to work at a haunted house. I have some in mind.

Don't get what?
Ah well, I can't explain. When I write, I just.mm automatically do it. Difficult to explain.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-30 00:05:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so what's this summer job about? Where are you working?

Canon Friendly... I really don't get it...
Yeah, lucky you... I only have that, but when developing the myth or the world around the characters, but the characters themselves, I really suck at it, I make them feel like you are reading another Twilight book.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 00:08:16 +0000 UTC]

Grocery store, delivery driver, etc.

Means Canon basically. Not a part of the main plot but a side story that's also Canon.
Lucky me? It just takes years of practice. I've been writing since kindergarten. So, just takes practice.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-30 00:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Huh, I never knew there is a service that delivers groceries. Cool!

Basically a side story that is related to the main story... I see.
I actually had a bigger and brighter imagination until my own family and friends find it weird and told me to stop, also it got me many bullies... So actually never been able to develop that kind of talent to write but my talent to create villains and monsters improve a lot.Β 

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 00:28:20 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to America lol

Well, just involves a few official characters. Not related to the plot at all.
Well that's why I keep my joys to myself. I love being alone, other people kinda drain me. So easy to not share it. More time to improve my own works rather then listen to other people.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-30 00:33:40 +0000 UTC]

North, Central or South America?

Huh, spinoff then.Β 
Yeah I learned all the hard way. But hey I have my own ideas just check this ideas and tell me what you think:

- The Serie E-Motion
- The Call of Redemption
- Battle Scars
- Dark Eclipse (did I ever sent you that mythology?)
- Sharma Tales
- My Grave Keeper (actually this idea is here in my deviations, you should read it)
- Plague.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 00:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Just America. Different everywhere.

Yea guess so. It's gonna be self published when I finish it. But I had permission to make it Canon, Simon had to confirm all details before I carried on. So I would advise caution before doing an actual novel/Novel.

Well they all sound interesting. Be a hard choice heh

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-30 02:07:00 +0000 UTC]

The North America.

Yeah... Guess I should ask him first what he thinks.

Just pick a random one.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 02:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Idk lol. Just some parts of America do it, other don't. Just depends, not really a 'central, north' thing. More or less what state.

Well we've discussed this novel for... quit a few years. So um, less problems there. I'd think more before diving into another story without careful discussion when involving other characters belonged to other people.Β 

Alright, probably Plague or Battle Scars.

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-30 02:20:44 +0000 UTC]

Okay. Cause here in Guatemala we have it.

Could you give some other advices?

Well Plague is about: A plague that is transforming everyone into monsters, thus a new military forces is born called "The Vulture Vanguard" that are equipped with every new weapon provided by their funders which is the Overgloom Company controlled by Victor Von Overgloom. The main Character Richard is attack by some sort of monster werewolf that is stopped by a beautiful girl name Lilith who is revealed to be the daughter of Victor Von Overgloom, she offers to reveal all info about this plague to Richard, but he must first past a test and then out of nowhere she bites him. He enters into a coma in which he suffers from horrible nightmares. But will he able to survive this nightmares and know the truth about this new Plague?

Battle Scars is waaaaaayyyy to large to just tell it here. I mean is a story I have been working since 2008.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 02:37:41 +0000 UTC]

Aha okay i see.

Well you can do whatever story you want for a novel. But if you're going to do one involving Impeldron and the others, i'd recommend doing that one more for fun.Β 

Ooh wait, i think i misunderstood. I thought you were asking me what titles you wanted to use for the imperldron novel idea on if he steps over the line.Β 

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-30 02:41:08 +0000 UTC]

Yep ^^

Yeah mostly this novel only consists of Impeldron's relation with Aklamos and Aklanarok and how he is drive to the dark side in order to free Aklanarok... This is a what if scenario.

Oh, no. The story title is another, I have yet to think of what.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 02:46:09 +0000 UTC]



Yes i know that. But as said, i went through many protocols and careful inspection before i was given permission. Novel is a big project, money involved etc. While i encourage you to write, i'd double take on turning it into an actual novel you'd publish. As said, all of us have different ideas etc on what's proper and what not, so that might cause a problem. Plus this novel, if actually published, might screw up the comic's plot. My novel is entirely separate from the comic, as in does not involve Aklanarok because currently Aklanarok is main villain for the main comic. This novel has NO impact whatsoever on the comic, it can be canon without hurting the main thing.Β 
That idea of yours can harm the main plot because its a different angle trying to show a different side that goes against Monova's efforts. See where i'm going with this?

oh okay lol my bad

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-30 02:50:47 +0000 UTC]



Hmmm... Yeah, perhaps better not do it...

XP

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 02:52:07 +0000 UTC]

You can still do a story on your take, that's fine. But for a novel idea might not be the best option.Β 

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-30 02:57:24 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it will be better.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 02:58:27 +0000 UTC]

what will this story consist of

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-30 05:05:46 +0000 UTC]

Well... Impeldron is disgusted that Emphasis is "healing" his children... He constantly argues that this is wrong why save humans when they are a virus that only destroy each other and everything they come in contact. Emphasis still reminds him that he should not question him and tha every cursed being is in constant pain. Impeldron tells him that will find a better way to control his children, and he reminds him that this spider kin is the closets thing Impeldron has to a family, but Emphasis just apologies and continues to work... Disappointed Impeldron then proceed to do his own plans as he begins to acquire DNA samples from uncured spider kin members. Impeldron is not medic nor psychologist but he manages to clone a spider subject, one that was sentient and he raised him as his own son. He then proceed to show the Guardians that he can help his children, that this could be the birth of a new race, a race that will succeed were the humans failed, but the Guardians dismiss him as this creatures are not natural and nothing more than monstrosities Impeldron attempts to argue more, but his is silenced and dismissed... He feels abandoned as not even his own mentor would support him... As years go on he then proceed to do the unthinkable and he will develop the spider kin anyway. Thus he forge a spacial spaceship made of an unknown metal he develop and so he proceed to clone more spider kin in this new lab, that in order to go undetected by the Guardians it will teleport to a different part of the Galaxy and random ways... However the cloning is not going well as impeldron is a forger and to manipulate flesh and blood is more harder in the end he has to finish to build the spider kin using technology creating cyborg beings that because they are cloned they are born with no soul, they are just walking husks... this greatly enrages Impeldron, but still he wishes to see this new family he created grow and develop but he knew the guardians will massacre them if he sets them in a planet in their territory, thus he decided to transport them to the Shadow Realm a realm he discovered by accident in a search for special minerals. However when he was setting the coordinates to open the portal Emphasis helper (who's name escapes me at the moment) found him and calls him he is under arrest for crimes against the Guardians and life itself. Impeldron tries to insists that his children mean no harm and that he is taking them to a safe place, but the agent does not listen and proceed to arrest Impeldron, a nearby cyborg spider kin sees this and tries to safe his father, but the agent quickly kills the cyborg, enraged Impeldron proceed to battle him, and he mortally wounds him, returning to his normal self Impeldron is scared in seeing what he has done, and in that moment the Guardians found and take him and the first spider clone to be judge... In the court Impeldron is sentenced to be exiled from the Guardians domain as well as to confiscate and destroy the abominations he created. He pleaded that his children be spare but with with a single move the Guardians destroy Impeldron's ship and all his children... Impeldron is left devastated, however his son is enraged and jumps in to attack the Guardians and he is easily killed as well... That, that was the last drop for impeldron... And thus he grabbed hi s dark hammer (the one made with souls and powers of the demons that wanted to rebel against Aklanarok and the Guardians) and throws it to the face of a distracted Guardians, crushing his head and killing him... The whole court was shock to see this... Impeldron scream at the top of his lungs "You Bastards! I was not hurting anyone I was trying to give life a chance, he was not hurting anyone! He just wanted a family, he just wanted to not be alone, he just wanted to be loved" but this snaps the Guardians and condemn him to death, before his executing he could only see Aklamos crying and Emphasis in a sad state... but then Impeldron screams "It was all your fault Empahsis! I don't care what it takes or how many he has to kill, he will make sure that feels his pain, he will get his revenge for he knew it was him who revealed his project and he is responsible of ruining his life" and just then he is executed, his soul send to Oblivion...

In Oblivion Aklanrok's shadow greets him and comforts him, assuring that he will not be hurt, because he was just another victim of the Guardians misjudgments, also because he is a friend. In Oblivion Impeldron becomes a member of Aklanarok's court, where he upgrades his forces. But Aklanarok knows that eve thought Impeldron is in high position and has all he could want except 3 things... His love, his family and his revenge... Thus he begins to manipulate Impeldron that he deserves to get vengeance upon not only the Guardians and Emphasis but all other life forms as they are only destroy and the Guardians feed on the misery on others thus why never do anything to stop this conflicts... Impeldron agrees and that he was found a way to create the most vile weapon, a weapon that even the Guardians will grew to fear, he calls it "The Defiler" Aklanarok uses his shadow to gather the materials Impeldron needs to craft such weapon, and thus Impeldron gets to work, for years he forged it using his dark hammer (which can only destroy thing not create them, until it was blessed of Aklanarok's power) and thus he finish it, and he tries to test it on breaking Aklanarok free, but it does not work, even thought the weapon is strong enough to kill Guardians even destroy their attacks, the prison is made by a magic that far more ancient than the Guardians thus the sword can not break it and Impeldron can replicate the Mineral... However Aklanrok decides that he will possess Impeldron's body and in secret steal some of his essence, thus they combined evil use Impeldron ability to make portals and now amplified by the swords demonic powers, they managed to get into the Guardians dimension... There Impeldron begins a massacre screaming "The Guardians were going to kill you anyway, and I'm just grating you freedom from their tyranny". As Impeldron begin to destroy the dimension itself Aklamos and Emphasis arrive trying to snap him out, but it does not work, as Aklanarok has driven mad any little reason Impeldron had left... Aklamos decides to attack him with everything she got, but the sword simply deflect the impact, as both Impeldron adnAklanrok do not wish to harm Aklamos, they open a portal that transport Aklamos to a distant part of the Galaxy and even if Aklamos uses her powers it will take her time to return. Thus only Emphasis and Impeldron stand there, Emphasis believing Impeldron killed Aklamos, he attacks him with one of his lighting that basically just has not effect on him... Impeldron then hides his sword and just tell to Empahsis "You do not deserve a quick death..." he the proceeds to jump on Emphasis and start clawing him, but Emphasis fights back, but he is not fighter and even thought he manages to block and dodges some attacks, but not all... Em phases is badly beaten, but not dead... Emphasis begins to talk "Impeldron just finish me off and be done with your petty revenge" and at that moment Emphasis children Shred'R and his brother Surg'N arrived ready to save their father, Impeldron just gives and disturbing evil smile at Emphasis, and he knows what's coming... Emphasis try to warn his children, but before he can do anything, Impeldron jumps on them, he kicks Shred'R into a wall,and the proceeds to gran Surg'n and he slowly brekas both of his arms, Surg'N screams in pain, Emphasis tries to help his children, but his wounds are to great he can not even move and jet watch in horror, as he watches he sees Impeldron bites Surg'n throat and proceeds to rip it off and let Β Surg'N drowns in his own blood... Shred'R comes out of the rubble and see his dead brother on the floor, he screams in rage and proceeds to attack Impeldron, but Impeldron dodges and grabs Shred'R and he proceeds to tear off his jaw and then he impales him in a nearby rubble pile, as Shred'R is in pain an unable to properly scream, Impeldron then punches him in the badges eye that he was and proceeds to ripc off Shred'R brain... Then all feel quietly as Empahsis barfs because of the carnage and begins to cry... Impeldron approaches him, and grabs him by his head and whispers "Now you feel my pain...", he then proceeds to drag Emphasis by the head toward the Guardians Sanctum... Impeldron uses Emphasis to break down the door, and he throws Emphasis body in from of the Guardians. As Impeldron walks in, a Guardian decides to attack him, but Impeldron quickly grabs the Defiler and blocks the attack and he proceeds to horrifically kill the Guardian... The Guardians are horrified at this and Impeldron begins to talk... "Well well well... How is it feel to de at the other edge of the sword you cowards?" as the Guardians were prepare to attack him Impeldorn interrupts them " I suggest you don't do that, or else I would have no one left to tell me speech and I worked so hard on it" the Guardians knew that if they attack him they will a be killed, instead they decided to make time for their last hope, Aklamos to arrive, and so they decide to hear Impeldron. " I have to say, your whores you call agents, but a great fight, to bad they can not killed something that wields a power far superior... Now I wish to know why it is okay to kill my children, children that would have grown and develop in a special Universe I found that lacks in life, a place were they could not harm anyone? How is it okay that his abomination *as he points at Emphasis* to live, knowing that he is not natural and that he cause a lot of misery and that all that is happening right now is because of him? Or how is it fair that you give this beast a soul after all that he has done, but decided to kill me because I only did what every father would do, protects his children?" the head Guardian tells him "What are you trying to say" Impeldron respond "That you suck so much in being Gods... You show favouritism toward a race that will eventually destroy themselves and hat every day they make fun of them, you are supposed to treat all equally, to prevent all evil, but instead you escalate war and unnecessary conflicts and and already favor a disgusting race" "Cause we are only following nature and that his children are no natural begins" "And is this bitch natural! The only thing you gave him a soul was to clean a mess you could so easily prevent" a Guardian responds "How dare you-" but before he could finish Impeldron fires a beam blowing off the head of the Guardian... "Well it does not matter anymore... I am here to fix your biggest mistakes... Keeping yourselves alive" but just then something slashes impeldron in half, revealing to be Aklamos with a huge anger building inside her. But because of AKlanarok's shadow being inside Impeldron he simply puts his puppet back together "Ah, my beloved, glad to see-" "SILENCE!" and Aklamos shoots a power beam leaving a hole in Impeldron's chest "YOU ARE A MONSTERS, HOW CAN YOU DO ALL FO THIS!?" and she continues to blast him "HOW COULD YOU!?" and she begins to cry while continue to blasting Impeldron... "I care for you Impeldron" "LIES!" Impeldron screams as he quickly assembles himself up "You only took PITY on me, you never cared for me! But I would have given everything for you Aklamos, cause I love you and I always will! But instead you distant yourself from, you constantly shoot down every opportunity to be together, just for what a being that has no power, no emotion and has no interest to even try to be with you" "You are wrong there, Emphasis succeed where you always failed" "AND WHAT IS THAT?!" "He had more of a soul you ever could! He knew what meant to live, what means to work and what means to not hold a grudge" Impeldron just stood there silenced, dropping on his knees... Aklamos approached him "Impeldron...if you truly love me... stand down and give up this butcher's quest..." Impeldron just stood silent looking to the ground "Please give me the sword... and Stand down" Impeldron proceed to do as asked and Aklamos then proceeds to hug him and he begins to cry... But then a beam of energy passes between both of them... killing Impeldron, and leaving Aklamos wounded... then a a demon proceeds to pick the sword and laugh evilly as Aklamos looks to see the attacker it is reveal to be the same demon Impeldron defied long ago... Msaliti Grimscum, who's remians were reanimated by Aklanarok to serve as his new vessel. As Aklanrok's shadow appears. "I told you not to harm my sister!!" "Relax boss, she is hurt not dead she will heal up" "That does not excuse you!" "Whatever you say... All that matters know is your revenge ins't it" and so the demon proceeds to kill the reaming Guardians... The wounded Aklamos degas herself toward Emphasis trying to heal him, but Msaliti simply crush his head... As Aklamos watches in horror to see all the Guardians dead Aklanrok reappears in his all and powerful glory, and he proceeds to blast off Msaliti "And you will stay dead this time for once again betraying me" he proceeds to heal his sister and grabbing the Defiler. "Rest Sister... I have a Universe to remake" and so Aklanork simply puts Aklamos to sleep with a wave of his hand... Then he disappears...

However this was in another Universe and not from the main one we know... the one watching all of this, is Impeldron as he was searching for the Shadow realm... As he sees this, he just feels digested with what he could do, and he promises himself never to become that monster.

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 15:33:31 +0000 UTC]

That's quit a story. Imp really does have quit the kill streak

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Montiessor In reply to GShepherd17 [2016-05-30 17:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Soooo... Did you like it?

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GShepherd17 In reply to Montiessor [2016-05-30 19:35:55 +0000 UTC]

It's fine. Though if it were serious I'd, of course, have to ponder on imp killing the guardians and all that jazz. But if you wanna write it, go for it. Just don't make it a novel

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