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Fionnade — The Wolves
Published: 2005-08-12 00:24:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 10863; Favourites: 689; Downloads: 222
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Their enchanting voicesCry to the crystal moon
As light of silver
Descends with grace
The pale river sparkles
Suddenly alive
It shivers uncontrollably
Chilled by their cries
Time is frozen
The moment slowly fades
The wolves prowl restlessly
Calling to each other
A song of wonder
Fills the air
None have heard it before
Though it is as ancient as the moon
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Comments: 92
That was beautiful. It describes a wolves cry perfectly in my opinion.
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i love wolves and no one can stop me and i MEAN NO ONE!!
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very nice. well written. i could see the images of what you were saying in my mind.....you have talent.
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PURE PEOTRY!!wolves rule!!hunters that hunt wolves suck!!
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As a hunter, I take offense to that.
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i'm soooooooo sorry i didnt meen it it's just if you hunt for ffood i understand..but i think that people that hunt for like fun..i cant stand it..espiaccially people that hunt the grey wolf..soory i didnt mean to offend u 
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Apology accepted, but please, THINK before you type something. It may come back to haunt you.
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k thaknks!!! i had a mega sugar rush that daY
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tHIS IS WONDERFUL!!!! i love wolves their so awsome!!
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Simply Beautiful and elegantly written. I 
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ummm could you send me the steps on how to post like a poem or somethin please?ive been here a while but i still dont understand.when you have the time you can tell me.
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WOLVES AWSOME!!!!
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np! i made my own poem but i dont think its that good but idk what other ppl think! its called "hunting with the wolves" you can check it out... if you want to and tell me what you think! and once again np.
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i love your poem, and i was wondering if i could use some of the words in a little short story i'm writing? i'm only writing it for fun, so.. what do you think? 
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Indeed, something so short yet full of visualization. How the wolf does see things in a different view than us...beautiful work.
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Very beautiful and emotional writing, I felt suddenly trapped inside a wolf's body and could admire the scenery you presented! Wolves are my favorite animal as they represent so many things.
"Their enchanting voices
Cry to the crystal moon
As light of silver
Descends with grace"
This part keeps echoing in my mind, just chilling and breathtaking. Take care!
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Wow amazing poem, i love wolves they are the best animals alive and you showed that through this poem brilliant work
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I'm not as good as a poet as you...wow...Although I still take great pride in my literature. Keep on working on your poetry!
Cheerful
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Fantastically written and wolves are my fav animals so that's a plus!
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It's really awsome. I'm writing a story and i was wondering if you could help me with my story. I need help. So please reply. I'm new here and i was wondering if you could be my friend. Anyway, please reply.
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i could help if you want?
what is teh story about?
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this was awesome! i love poems and wolves! lol they r beautiful creatures aren't they? ur poem is awesome! im watching and faving!!!
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very nice. a favorite and a watch. I have a poem about wolves too, soon to be more, also one about llamas....lol well comment please?
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I really like your poem, it's very cool. You should be an author or something.
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Nice, I like this piece you've written. Maybe you'd like mine perhaps? I write poems too. Again very nice^_^
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