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Published: 2008-06-04 00:26:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Page 1 of the comic..Related content
Comments: 5
Backgrounds: A
Poses:A
Sound Effects: What the skull kid said.
Paneling: Nya, B+
This is looking good. I was surprised by the background- there is one. Miku's face in the third panel nicely coinsides with the pose. You still need to get the "feel" for panels, but these panel are much better than any you've done. You should have an overveiw of a series when you first post it so that readers aren't lost when they begin reading.
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Feel... I have no idea what you mean. And an overview...i dont even know what it is. Yea.. i just sorta winged it anyway.
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You know what I mean. An overveiw is just where you tell a little about the series, like "the series Sketch is about artists whose works come to life." Feel is when you know what panel to use next.
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I only think ahead in games and stuff.. The panels just do what they do.
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This is a good start. What's your comic going to be about? Do you have this in color? The sound captions should be in bigger letters.
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