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#digitalpainting #grass #green #landscape #oil #river #stream
Published: 2015-08-24 09:13:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 368; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 10
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This is an artwork that I've sort of been working on whenever, It's done in digital oil paint.Please comment
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Comments: 7
Hello there!
To begin I want to say this piece is very calming while looking at it. The grass is well blinded. You did not force yourself to paint every single blade of grass. That making it look more realistic than in would have been with every single blade. The water is dynamic and well painted. Water is always difficult so you can be proud of yourself. Although I wonder a bit if the water should not have been more transparent. (That would have been very hard to, so it is not that relevant). The mountains are in a fading colour giving the picture a wide range and depth. But you could have started with it on the hills. On the border between them and the mountains you feel a hard cut between colourful and colourless that comes out too strong. The stones in the streamm are well shaded but the one most far away looks like it is either swimming in the stream or floating.
I hope I was helpful nad not offensive.
Have a nice day.
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Thanks for the critique, I will work on those things in the future as this is a work in progress piece, your my very first critique so thank you so much!
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to be honest ! I think you have improved a lot ! what catches my eye is that you still use very simple colours ! variation can lead to amazing things!
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Thankyou! Yeah I've been practising. That's a good tip actually, I'll need to apply it next time
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