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HOLY TANGY ORANGE JUICE!!!
Am I reusing the same joke?
Yes, and I'm doing it shamelessly.
Goodness I love Rose in the fourth panel. You have no idea.
The more I draw Rosie, the cuter and cuter she is to me. I'm beginning to like her a lot more than Talori. Seems like her evil plan is working! DX She's the most manipulative, false, conniving, and self-serving little girl I know. And I love her so much.
I felt really sloppy while coloring this one (both in the shading and in the background). And I just feel like Cam looks terrible ('cause she's supposed to be a voluptuous and pretty woman, but I never got that to translate on paper). But then I did the explosion, and I felt a little better. XD
If anyone didn't get it, Talori sneezed and it made the ghost/demon/thing go BOOM!
NLMO is being so neglected (and the masses ask: "What is NLMO", and I say: "Exactly"). The more I do Graph Paper, the less I want to do NLMO. :\ Which sucks.
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Again I love how Rosie thinks. XD I love the third panel. X3
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Yeah, it was a phase. I plan on redoing this chapter someday.
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it looks good, but i wuickly got used the manga anime style
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I love this comic!
I do have on "issue" though. The way you changed the drawing style (the eyes especially), I just really don't like it...:/ Maybe it's just me.
Awesome comic though.
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Yeah, I did change. :\ Sorry about that.
I just felt very limited and restricted by the anime style, so I switched it up to cartoony style because I felt I could do more with it. It's still a work in progress, but I'm still fixing my cartoony style up so it'll hopefully be just as good as the anime style. :3
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I love Rosie! "Robbers broke into the house! Robbers of the SOUL!"
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sneeze of destruction xD
I love rosy in that dress, too cute!
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Seriously, I love Talori and Rose to death! They're a deadly combo. XD (oops, bad pun again... ;;
Awesome pages~!
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lol, but I love bad puns!
Thanks a ton!
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FEAR MY SNEEZES FOULD BEAST.
It's funny how characters will do that. Akiro totally showed Hideo up. lol
I think with Cam the problem is short hair and your style automatically comes off as more boyish, and she already wears plain clothes, so you're really going to have to emphasize the face and body. I think giving her more delicate eyes and possible higher cheekbones my help. Her torso down is proportioned now, but I'd play with the arms and nexk a little--width, length, angles or rounded...see what works. If that doesn't work, I'd also consider playing with her nose. Maybe give her an upturned one rather than a downturned. It'll change the aesthetics of the face and would fit her personality.
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Ooo, thanks for the suggestion. That really helps.
I've already tried to practice a new face for her on my next page, keeping you advice in mind.
Thanks a bunch!
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I love the bright colors you use on all your pages 
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O_o That takes a violent sneeze to Dragonball Z measures.
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Ooo! A new record for sneezing! XD
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And here I thought my sneezes were loud, they don't blow up demons though.
Good pages and nice looking explosion
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That's a shame. :\ I'm sure it'd be a useful power.
Thanks a bunch!
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I love Rosie's expressions here, they are...Wonderful! So, faved...
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lol. Wow, Talori has a violent sneeze, and Ve seems to inadvertently given Rosie an alibi.
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Don't you just love how things like that work? XD
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Ahahahah xDDD KABOOM went the soul robber! Rofl, I'll bet everyone was impressed by that!
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xD YES!!! Everyone looked like this, "OO;" at the end of that page rofl <3
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oh there really is one...
WHAT A COINCEDENCE
8D
Hahhaa I love Rosie
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