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I'm still fiddling with this one... It feels like she needs something more to her. The pose is kinda boring...Her right arm is behind her and her left looks kinda limp. I dunno. It looked fine while I was inking. Now she just looks like she needs a bit more. I do like the top and her little dress tho. Seemed cute. Trying for a bit more detail to clothing and such...not doing to well...lolAh well..
Maybe I'll color her soon.
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Comments: 29
forest7kiti [2004-10-07 19:06:33 +0000 UTC]
are there wings the... i think they might have been...
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redfez [2004-06-18 21:50:01 +0000 UTC]
cute
I really like it, even if her left does look a little limp
are we gonna see a color version?
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risky [2004-06-15 19:48:34 +0000 UTC]
I like the pose though. Very nice detail on the shirt. Good job. Hope to see the colored version soon.
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mrdata [2003-06-29 09:50:38 +0000 UTC]
OMG!! this is so cute it is scary... her cutness factor borders the mathematical impossible...
her eyes follow you.. no matter from where you stand.. they look at you.. those beautiful... yet sad eyes. she makes you feel guilty from her sadness..
the pose is excelent.. i havent seen many people around who can draw that one... taking into account the inner bone structure... the expansion and relaxation of some muscles in her legs as she sits down that way.. the perspective is quite good. your clothe development is impressive... im sure that if that dess existed girls would buy it...
the upper part of the dress is what draws me the most... is it fabirc there like a net, translucent material? or just fabric with sewed stripes? then there is also. all the detail on the borders of the dress.. quite impressive..
the folds look so realistic.. the left arm was drawn so well.. again. not many people understand the way those muscles and bones change as the arm moves (I myself am one of those who don't understand) her hair is so elaborated... so fluent. as if wind passed besides her... caressing every flick of hair... or maybe she sat so fast. that her hair is still accomodating... the innertia of the hair, and the friction of the wind made it look that way when you drew her... either way... it is an awsome fluidity you gave to her hair...
I love this drawing.. I haven't seen if you colored it.. but if you did.. im sure it is as impressive as other color works i have seen from you.
keep on drawing such great quality artworks.. i look forward to take a look at your entire gallery with more detail.
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gunmouth [2003-02-13 22:23:40 +0000 UTC]
Very nice picture You think it needs something? Hmmm... well, color would be nice
Maybe you could put a book in her hand? I dunno.
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kratier [2003-01-10 20:18:43 +0000 UTC]
This is a great pic. The legs are the only problem I see, and possibly the breasts too large for such a build of a female.. But overall this is good.
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drd69 [2003-01-09 00:13:00 +0000 UTC]
I kinda like the simplicity of it to be honest.
Is really nice tho.
Look forward to seeing what you have in store for us!
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kurotenshi7 [2003-01-08 05:34:04 +0000 UTC]
Her arm does look a little limp (although I didn't even notice untill I read your description ^___^) but the clothes are really really cute... I would wear it.
The inking is super awesome as well
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san-renard [2003-01-07 16:00:51 +0000 UTC]
She's excellent! I like the propotions of this and the inklines are so smooth! =3 fantastic work! ^_^ it looks well when kept as ink only, and that sketch-lines from previous ideas are visual is good, an Art teacher once told me that, that way the person looking at it can see more of your idea, and choose to leave it out of the pic, or include it (the way they see it that is)
Fantastic work!
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ryusuke [2003-01-07 14:50:04 +0000 UTC]
As everyone else has been saying, this is a great work in progress. I look forward to seeing it done, as does everyone else.
The dress is very cute, and all of the suggestions you've received are valid... though the one about the fold, depending on how you shade it, I could almost see it looking fine. My only suggestion about the hand being limp, would be maybe have her clutching the dress a little?
That might require too much work, after inking, though. You'd have to show the tension in the arm as well as changing the hand.
Otherwise, a very nice drawing. ^_^
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lisatails [2003-01-07 08:16:38 +0000 UTC]
I agree with shortymv and arshesnei's suggestions but otherwise it's a fine looking picture ^^ I love the inking! It's so good... O_O
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shortymv [2003-01-07 07:50:45 +0000 UTC]
SO FREAKIN ADORABLE!!!!!! I can tell you right now can i do fan art of her!? I want!!!! leas: PLEASE!!! Anyway, the front arm, might be better if her hand was like open like she is touching the floor??? and the legs are kinda wide, trying to do a zoom in effect I guess? i suck anyway butthis fan art I might do get my creativity back up and running!!
Love you and the pic!! Keep up the great work
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snowkatt101 [2003-01-07 06:46:40 +0000 UTC]
I duno but i like it ! keep workin at it! I wanna see it in color(snuggles/hugles) ^^ it's awesome non the less!
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sashamya [2003-01-07 05:45:56 +0000 UTC]
require more calli art! for all calli art is good...
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himizu [2003-01-07 05:23:56 +0000 UTC]
she doesn't look that sad. a single tear down her cheek would really bring out the sadness. but don't change it on my account.
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drewburt [2003-01-07 04:01:11 +0000 UTC]
oi me she's a cutie! The clothing is all schnazzy. good times....
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Marker-Guru [2003-01-07 03:47:04 +0000 UTC]
I love her hair and eyes and the detail in her clothes . i really like the top i think it will look really awesome finished
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yumi [2003-01-07 02:49:04 +0000 UTC]
her thighs look great, good job forshortening, and I love the detail in teh outfit awesome!
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Onirin [2003-01-07 02:25:16 +0000 UTC]
awww she's cute ^^ I love her eyes, and the outfit is beautiful
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ally [2003-01-07 02:20:37 +0000 UTC]
i think this really looks cute. ^_^ i love the clothing design - it looks beautiful and it's gonna be simply amazing once colored. :3 hehe kinda makes me think of a a design we'd see in ragnarok online (...i'm obsessed what can i say. i see RO everywhere! X3). is that a wing behind her back? you should keep it - because it makes this even more adorable!
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voodoo-prophet [2003-01-07 02:19:51 +0000 UTC]
very nice ... I like the piece can't wait to see when its done
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arshesnei [2003-01-07 02:18:16 +0000 UTC]
This is very lovely, if you want a suggestion on fixing something, I have a minor one. If you notice on the viewing left hand side you have this rather large fold. Well the fold doesn't quite work because if it folds that way there should be a back part of that fold but instead you have a large gap and more garter showing.
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lcherolis [2003-01-07 02:15:59 +0000 UTC]
Wow! I love this work! You have a great style! I want to see more!
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