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Firekitty8 — Mirage part 8
Published: 2014-05-17 09:47:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 736; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 14
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At last its up. I really am sorry it took so long what with my nan being in hospital and requests. I've only got one more request to do but single pictures are quicker to do than a comic.What happens when you disobey the changling queen Mirage soon finds out
Note I am changing Divine Greath to Divine Wreath since not many may know he's named after someone also the definition doesn't suit him
Edit That's a scar on Mirage neck it was getting confused for blood
Cover fav.me/d6lcll6
part 1 fav.me/d6lnd34
part 2 fav.me/d6omstn
part 3 fav.me/d6pqazi
part4 fav.me/d6tgvdd
Part 5 fav.me/d6xrrxg
Part 6 fav.me/d72nd6v
part 7 fav.me/d770zmj
Part 8 your here
part 9 fav.me/d7m7v3t
Chrysalis belongs to Hasbro
Mirage, Shielded Virtue, Ruby Wreath and Divine Wreath belong to me
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Comments: 8
great work 
lol XD love Chrysalis face in first panel XD kick some royal butt Mirage
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Thanks
Yep I tried to do the shocked face for chrysalis.
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you welcomes^^
and i think you got it very good XD
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Let me put on my critique glasses.
*puts on glasses*
*ahem*
The story seem pretty good. But the graphics need improvements, and grammar and orthograph need checking and correcting.
But overall, it's still good. Don't let my critique deter you from carrying on with doing fancomics/fanfics
P.S.: Is this your first time doign fancomic ?
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thanks for the critique it means a lot
i understand you i am planning to cheak it over. it is my first proper fan comic
dont worry your critique doesnt upset me nor am i going to stop it.
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