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Description Not for the faint hearted sasuke fangirls, may have a tiny spoiler.

“Sasuke-kun?” Sakura Haruno asked timidly as she opened the cell to Sasuke Uchiha’s cell. Ever day since Naruto brought Sasuke back Sakura has come into his cell and brought him food, drink and tried to talk to him.
As she knelt don’t before him and placed the tray of fresh ramen before her love, she stole a glance up into his black eyes shed dreamt about for years on end. That’s when he saw it in her eyes. Her sparkling green eyes shone so intensely with her love, her unyielding love, as his face dropped as he stared into her eyes he saw something he thought he would never see again, someone willing to do anything to help him, to protect him, to be with him.
The Uchiha smiled back at the blushing kunoichi and placed his hand on her chin, lifting it up so he could look her full in the face. Heat built up in his face as she moved closer to him. Every time they got close enough she would try to kiss him, and again she tried. For the first time in around 13 years he didn’t pull away.
He gasped the back of her neck and pulled her into him roughly. Fan girl after fan girl tried to glomped him again and again and after all this time, Sakura’s patience had worn off. In his tiny cell all there was, was a single mattress on the cold dusty floor with one single sheet, Sasuke pulled the young kunoichi onto of him as his tongue madly danced along side hers.
The young pink haired girl felt as though all her wishes had come true, all her day dreams, all her wishes, all her hopes and dreams, were now crashing down on her for this moment with her love. Sasuke twisted her around and began kissing down her neck, slyly pulling a kunai out from her belt.
Sasuke stopped kissing her and held the kunai at eye level then looked down at the horror struck girl. With a smirk he cut open her shirt and continued to kiss her body.

Hours later Sakura woke up holding the Uchiha prodigy in her arms, in pure bliss, their naked bodies entwined. She smiled at her love and reached over him to grab her watch on the ground beside him. As she leaned on him he turned into a puff of smoke, all that was left of him was a pillow. Tears filled her eyes, “ A substitution?” she cried as she jumped for her clothes and dressed in a hurry.
She reached her belt and realized her keys were gone Sasuke had used her.
She realized that she had just given her innocence to the only man, who could never love her. A condom was discarded on the floor next the mattress. Clear signs were every-were of what had happened between the two. As tears poured down her face she ran to the door and pulled on it madly but with no difference. She forced chakra into her hand and punched into the steel door. The room consisting of a chakra barrier only broke her wrist. She cried out in pain and fell back on the mattress. “I can’t believe what I did! I let him escape I cheated on Naruto and betrayed Konoha!” she screamed as she burst into uncontrollable sobs, ‘Naruto is coming,’ she thought with a hiccup as she looked at the door. Every morning Naruto would bring Sasuke breakfast, just like she always brought Sasuke dinner.
Her blonde boyfriend chose that moment to open the door to Sasuke’s cell. Sakura jumped to her feet and dove into his arms.
Naruto dropped the fired eggs and bacon he was carrying for Sasuke when Sakura jumped into his arms, her makeup was smudged and pushed around her face, he pulled her back from his to examine her properly “Sakura-chan? What hap-“ he stopped when he saw her properly, her shirt was cleanly cut down the front, she had hikkies around her neck and along her chest, not even ending when her skirt began had her navel, white stains were all along her skirt, and next to the bed a used condom wrapper was on the floor, the same brand Sakura kept in her wallet for when she was ‘married’.
Naruto let go of his girlfriend, dropping her onto the mattress before turning out of the cell to leave her there, he turned back at the weeping woman with an thick mask, hiding his emotions, before dropping a diamond ring on the ground in front of him, then opened the door for her to leave.
Gathering herself up she picked up the rest of her belongings, then her to be engagement ring. It was gold with lines of diamonds all around its base, the words ‘eternal love’ engraved on the inside. She put the ring into her pocket and ran from the Hokage tower, where Sasuke was jailed.
Sakura ran to the Hyuuga complex to find her friend Hinata. As she neared the training grounds of the Hyuuga estate she saw the young Hyuuga heiress talking to her ex boyfriend, Naruto.
“Hinata-Chan, could I talk with you?” Sakura chan asked her friend, avoiding looking at Naruto.
“Umm,” the Hyuuga mumbled looking back and forwards from Sakura and Naruto. After a small nudge from Naruto she stood and walked away from Naruto to talk with Sakura.
“Hinata-chan, please help me! I need to find Sasuke,” she begged grabbing Hinata’s shoulders, “he could be anywhere and I don’t have the time to search for him, please use your Byakugan to help me find him!” she begged the puzzled Hinata.
After a moment Hinata said the unthinkable, “no Sakura-chan,” after a little moment of playing with her fingers she continued, “you really hurt Naruto-kun, I can’t help you hurt him any further,” she said stepping out of Sakura’s grasp and looking anywhere but the pink haired ninja.
After a minute or so of gaping at Hinata, the shy Hyuuga that never said no, never was mean and was always helpful, “Hinata,” Hinata could help but notice the drop of the ‘chan’ “I know you’ve always loved Naruto, im sorry if I hurt you by dating him but I need to find Sasuke-kun for a different reason, please don’t do this,” Haruno Sakura begged.
Hinata’s eyes flared as the glared back at her friend for the first time, “true I’ve always felt for Naruto-KUN even when everyone hated him, including you Sakura! Don’t try to pretend with me that you loved Naruto, he loved you and I bet you didn’t even take his emotions into consideration when you slept with Sasuke! And don’t think im so naive to think you are not going to go find your beloved, Sasuke-kun,” the name she used an imitation of Sakura’s voice, “to re-enact last night, and destroy the last bit of sanity Naruto-kun still has after you broke his heart! I wont let you hurt Naruto-kun anymore, if you want to leave for the traitor Uchiha, then do it without my help,” Hinata ended furiously walking away from the young girl and sitting back with Naruto shaking.
Sakura was in shock, utter bewilderment that Hinata would snap so badly at her. She snapped out of her confusion and began to run once again on her search for Sasuke. She ran into the Konoha forest a couple of minutes away from the Hyuuga complex when her prey found her.
She was in a small clearing in the middle of the Konoha forest, Sasuke on the other side smirking at the distraught ninja. “Come back for seconds?” the arrogant Uchiha asked as he stepped towards her, “sorry but I wouldn’t bother,”
“You bastard!” she screamed pulling out a handful of shuriken’s, adding massive doses of chakra into them and throwing them at her supposed love. She never expected to see it, Sasuke’s face dropped as he was impaled but the ninja stars.
She stated forward when soft breath blew across her exposed neck as the Sasuke in front of her turned into a tree trunk, “the site look familiar lover?” he said from behind her tauntingly, “you couldn’t kill me even if you wanted, you didn’t even want to then,” he said turning her around.
A kunai was in hand as he twisted her around she placed it at his neck.
Sakura held the kunai firmly placed on Sasuke’s neck, his katana was pointed directly at her heart. She hated him for what he did to her, for ruining her life the way he did, but because she had loved him for all those years she couldn’t seem to move.
“All this time Sakura, and you still think I could love you?” Sasuke asked casually, “I could have any girl, in any village if I wanted, why would I go for the most desperate, unattractive girl that clung to me?” he asked the teary girl, poking her abnormally large forehead with his index finger, slightly containing his chakra, bruising her with little force “what on earth makes you think your special enough for me to love you? Or even like you?”
She shifted her weight and adjusted her kunai before saying softly, “Because I always loved you,” her hand beginning to shake.
“Well,” he continued with leaning forward into her kunai making a thin line of blood drip from his neck and Sakura loosened her grip on her weapon, Sasuke pressed his sward deeper into her clothes, “you wasted your emotions, I can’t love Sakura, I won’t love. And even if I could one day, I would never waste it on you,” he spat at her.
“If you hate me so much, why am I still alive as such a hindrance?”
Maliciously Sasuke swiftly swept forward, his sward driving into Sakura’s chest. With his trademark smirk he kissed her on the lips then pulled away from the just as quickly. “Why do you even bother?” he asked in his bored tone looking into the green eyes of the kunoichi.
“I-I l-loved“
“No,” Sasuke simply whispered as Sakura dropped her weapon, as always unable to injure him. With a final thrust he drove his sward further into her chest, until the hand he held at the handle was touching her chest.
Blood began to cascade from his sward. * Cough * the warm taste of metal began to fill in her mouth until it slid down the crevasses of her mouth until her hole chin was covered in blood. Sasuke lent towards her, whispering into her ear, “I never loved you, and no one ever loved you because you loved me. Now you will die, unloved… like me.” And the he lent back and swept his sward out of her chest and walked away as she fell to the ground, in a pool of her own blood.
With that he turned away from the dead girl and left Konoha.
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Comments: 454

ace2009 In reply to ??? [2012-04-01 03:46:46 +0000 UTC]

i think she would be better off with gaara at least he could match sasuke's strength if he ever came after sakura. plus he is so damn hot

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Ptea118 In reply to ace2009 [2012-04-03 20:25:38 +0000 UTC]

OMG YOU ARE FREAKING AWESOME (and totally correct)

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ace2009 In reply to Ptea118 [2012-04-04 13:16:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks. gaara is a good guy unlike sasuke

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Ptea118 In reply to ace2009 [2012-04-05 01:39:29 +0000 UTC]

definatly i love gaara

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ace2009 In reply to Ptea118 [2012-04-05 19:12:04 +0000 UTC]

plus he is the kazekage he has a lot of power

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Ptea118 In reply to ace2009 [2012-04-06 15:26:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah and there would be a reason for him to like her cause she saved kankuros life and played a big part in saving his

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ace2009 In reply to Ptea118 [2012-04-07 07:33:43 +0000 UTC]

yep on fanfiction there are tons of gaasaku stories

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Ptea118 In reply to ace2009 [2012-04-07 18:09:49 +0000 UTC]

really i will have to check them out, i haven't seen too much gaasaku sasusaku and narusaku drown it out i guess

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ace2009 In reply to Ptea118 [2012-04-10 17:29:41 +0000 UTC]

cool

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firerubydragon In reply to ??? [2011-11-26 06:41:39 +0000 UTC]

he is 16 in shippuden. and yes he is. he is more liekly to be gay than be a manwhore seeing as he hates every woman who pines over him.

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ace2009 In reply to firerubydragon [2011-11-26 14:02:13 +0000 UTC]

i agree with you on the gay part after all he did kiss naruto twice

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firerubydragon In reply to ace2009 [2011-11-29 06:02:05 +0000 UTC]

lol <3 yes, yes he did!

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ace2009 In reply to firerubydragon [2011-11-29 14:51:21 +0000 UTC]

that was funny as hell i was laughing my ass of when i saw that

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7gjcmskj11 [2011-10-15 22:41:27 +0000 UTC]

This Story Is A God You Are The God of Gods

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firerubydragon In reply to 7gjcmskj11 [2011-10-19 09:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, its lovely to be reminded

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SasuSakufan1012 [2011-10-11 01:59:12 +0000 UTC]

you tyally rock dude

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ipooted77 In reply to ??? [2011-09-28 02:46:48 +0000 UTC]

man chick i hate to admit but thats exactly how my sasu- cakes turns out man hes mental i think he needs a hug brb!!!!!!!

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itskeuchiha [2011-09-01 16:58:54 +0000 UTC]

i loved that!!!! its so true to sasuke!!!

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BlueEyedKitty In reply to ??? [2011-08-30 22:36:49 +0000 UTC]

My god that was a surprise!
But wow its nice to have a change like that and I loved it and loving people having a go at sasuke .
That was really good and i want to read more like this now! hahaha
It was very good, great work!

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tenten20102001 In reply to ??? [2011-08-15 02:51:19 +0000 UTC]

wow i really didnt expect that ending i cant believe it and i really dont like the thought of her and naruto as a couple anyways

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xXFrEaKiShDeViLXx In reply to ??? [2011-08-13 07:57:31 +0000 UTC]

i know i'm writing a comment again BUT what the fuck sasuke????? you're so cruel i don't like you anymore!

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xXFrEaKiShDeViLXx In reply to ??? [2011-08-13 07:48:35 +0000 UTC]

THAT BITCH USED HER!!! I'M GONNA KILL THAT MAN!

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Ptea118 In reply to xXFrEaKiShDeViLXx [2012-03-23 23:48:54 +0000 UTC]

im with ya lets kill sasuke fo bing a freaking doushe

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xXFrEaKiShDeViLXx In reply to Ptea118 [2012-08-11 00:00:14 +0000 UTC]

yes! asshole. -.-

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NarutoRocks17 [2011-08-10 19:35:27 +0000 UTC]

Holly shitt...Sasuke kills sakura?????!!!!!

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Ptea118 In reply to NarutoRocks17 [2012-03-23 23:49:16 +0000 UTC]

are you really that suprised i mean he almost does in the anime too

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greengrass29 [2011-07-10 21:05:09 +0000 UTC]

..............................................tht was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!no offense to sasusaku lovers but tht's what possibly would have happened.sakura let's her feelings get in the way of things and quite frankly i felt for her in the end.BUT.....i personally like sasusaku n i like the way u wrote this srry if i offended anyone.

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firerubydragon In reply to greengrass29 [2011-07-15 18:56:35 +0000 UTC]

go for goldim glad you like it and its your opinion who cares if people get offended

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greengrass29 In reply to firerubydragon [2011-07-18 01:34:15 +0000 UTC]

thhnnxx ^_^

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1FairyTail1 [2011-06-12 11:20:11 +0000 UTC]

I accuatally cried when i read this XD

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firerubydragon In reply to 1FairyTail1 [2011-06-13 12:30:36 +0000 UTC]

awesome ^__^

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Otaku556 [2011-04-12 19:37:54 +0000 UTC]

so sad! D:

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PurplePrincessZ [2011-03-19 17:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Good job, I'm a SasuSaku fan also, but that's just because I hate it when they put them with Hinata or Naruto, I guess. But it's nice, really. I like how you made it like this. Shows people what can REALLY happen. >D

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PlatinumMoon1624 In reply to ??? [2011-02-27 21:43:51 +0000 UTC]

AWE! POOR SAKURA!

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Lunarstream In reply to ??? [2011-02-19 23:23:23 +0000 UTC]

how do you post your fanfictions on this?

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FunStuff13 In reply to ??? [2011-02-07 04:30:01 +0000 UTC]

interesting and yet i dont like it at al
does that make sense?

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firerubydragon In reply to FunStuff13 [2011-02-07 06:15:51 +0000 UTC]

yeah ive had that before, you just dont like unhappy endings, specially when your expecting a good one.

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FunStuff13 In reply to firerubydragon [2011-02-08 01:59:06 +0000 UTC]

oh ok ^^
please dont take it offensively

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firerubydragon In reply to FunStuff13 [2011-02-08 06:19:46 +0000 UTC]

no offence taken

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FunStuff13 In reply to firerubydragon [2011-02-10 01:44:54 +0000 UTC]

ok gewd ^^

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AtlasGuideMeHome In reply to ??? [2011-01-31 12:10:52 +0000 UTC]

Damn. That was, uh, different. Hinata was pretty pissed off, and a bit OOC. Sakura was OOC, I think, as well. She loves Sasuke, but I think wants the well-being of everyone, too.

I always thought the manga would end with Naruto changing Sasuke (hell, that's one of the main themes in Naruto), Sasuke killing Madara for using him and whatnot, or a giant battle between Naruto and Sasuke, them both going back to Konoha.

Plus, why would he go for "any girl"? He's known Sakura forever, and even if he just wanted a booty call it'd be more realistic that it would be Sakura anyways.

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firerubydragon In reply to AtlasGuideMeHome [2011-02-01 02:47:26 +0000 UTC]

well we allknow that the quiet ones usually sna, so the possibility of hinata snapping is quiet a possibility expesially since hinata has watched sakura breaking naruto's heart for years now, i personally think its possible.
also since when has sakura ever actually tried to hurt sasuke, even for the better goodm she tried once and faltered. she could never hurt him and i think thats going to be her downfall.

also as for sasuke becoming good, think about it, he is one of the main reasons why this war began, he is killing dozens of his own citezens, and thinking selfishly and is set on revenge. one tsunade could never allow him back after everything he has done -cough- he declared war-cough- he wont be able to survive no matter what naruto does, and if he does, he still abandoned his village and because a missing nin, therefore konoha lore is not to accept people who have abandoned there village, wich sasuke has done so much more. logically speacking he can never return.

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AtlasGuideMeHome In reply to firerubydragon [2011-02-01 22:39:59 +0000 UTC]

I guess we just differ in opinions then.

It's a shonen manga, though. It's NOT INTENDED to be logical. We've got ninjas running around, with fucking pink hair. Also, on the storyline side of things, we've got duck-butt running around with transgender pedophiles, crazy for power. When he finally DOES get what he wants (killing Itachi), he realizes it ISN'T what he wants, and blames Konohagakure for everything. He even goes against his brother's will for his own twisted view of things.

I don't care if SasuSaku doesn't end up happening, I really don't. But I do think Sasuke will, you know, make up for stuff. Tsunade (or whatever Hokage) will understand that (with a price, heh). I don't expect her/him to just drop everything and forgive him for being a GINORMAGANTIC douchemuffin, but I don't expect he/she to ban Sasuke from the village. Plus, the civilians don't know what's going on half the time.

Bottom line:

~Logic my ass. Kishi can do what he wants.

Kthxbai.

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firerubydragon In reply to AtlasGuideMeHome [2011-02-02 01:57:41 +0000 UTC]

well your entitled to your opinion, we'l just see what happens

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DDDiamond In reply to ??? [2011-01-30 18:10:47 +0000 UTC]

HOW CAN YOU SAY YOU HATE SAKURA SHE IS AN AMAZING PERSON! I DON'T GET WHAT DO BAD ABOUT HER! SHE LOVES SASUKE AND I KNOW SASUKE DOESN'T LOVE HER BUT IT DOESN'T MEAN THAT YOU HAVE TO KILL HER! UGHHH!!!

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firerubydragon In reply to DDDiamond [2011-02-01 02:48:36 +0000 UTC]

no she is not, she is a stupid girl who has more brawns than brains, and all throughout the first seaosn her entire vocabulary revolved aroun "idiot naruto" and "sasuke -kun!" the bitch deserved to die and she should grow a personality

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Miss-Tea-chan In reply to ??? [2011-01-25 18:49:32 +0000 UTC]

well it's true i would like to see sasusaku together but i think your story is more realistic.

I mean it's more likely that sasuke will stay evil and never come back; and even if he did come back i don't think he would go for any girl.

So, well done good story i enjoyed it

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writergurl162 In reply to ??? [2011-01-19 05:13:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow... I can't decide whether I hate or love this, but I added it to my favorites anyway, lol.

I love the way you wrote it, and it has such a twist compared to a lot of other SasuSaku stories, so I guess that's why I liked it so much.

You did a good job!!!

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puddingkiller In reply to ??? [2011-01-16 18:15:33 +0000 UTC]

I really do like this.... but it's sad anyways it's a really good story, but not my preference but good job!

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raja-uchiruno8 In reply to ??? [2010-12-18 11:51:32 +0000 UTC]

especially when sasusaku, sasuhine.etc.

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