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FirstAwesomePlatoon — Clusterbomb grenade
Published: 2013-11-24 23:19:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2518; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 8
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PV2. Clusterbomb is suprised by SFC. Reign. If he does not double time it, the whole base is in for a surprise.Related content
Comments: 6
I very much enjoyed this comic. Liked the idea and even made me laugh. The only problem I really had with it was that on the ponies, you can see the jagged edges of the outlines and such. I recommend that you make the picture a tad bit smaller in the future, or even update this one if you really want. It is a very minor problem though, definitely not one to worry too much about, as it really didn't take away any of the humor, and it still had a clear message and visual. Great job and I'd love to see more of your work in the future /). (PS: Sorry if you don't like the length of this critique, it had to be a 100 word minimum)
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The jagged edges are caused by the picture being to small, and I'm zoomed in more then I normaly do.
Vectors are made around 3000x3000, and have really smooth lines.
I can't make pictures that large with my program. I have to work around the 1500x1500 range. If I where to get a more advanced program I could make smoother lines, and even draw faster. Making the picture smaller would make the jagged lines more jagged. thank you for the critique, I like long ones, It shows you actually looked over the picture and took in the work I did.
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When in the Army, "10 seconds" means "5 seconds".
...dangit.
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