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Fishlover — Hello My Little Snowflake
Published: 2007-08-14 20:08:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 942; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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625 cuddling Moody.Plus on what ~mjangelvortex said in TLBT forum about this.. advanced critique please! ^^
625 © disney
Moody © me
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when I saw the title I thought of 625 calling Moody his little snowflake and I was overcome by the urge to say "awwww~!!" it is just too cute!
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fishlover nice choice on the drawing but did u no ur using my characters name
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I'm not using your characters name...
:devkioko-thepirate: calls Moody "snowflake" as a nickname which made a good title for this pic.
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take a look at my first deviation but hey i dont need to proove anything but nice pic though
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I really like the pose. :3
The only critique I can find are one-time-only things, such as the comparitive size of Moody and 625's arms (Moody's arms are both different sizes and 625's visible arm is smaller than both of hers). Nothing really continuous or anything I can really 'critique' on, per se. All I can really say is watch the size consistency (and that's a STRETCH.). 
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oh I see it XD I never notice these things until someone points them out thanks! ^^
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You used the snowflake nickname! ^^ That's so cute.
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Very, very nice....
as for advanced critique...
well, as always, it'd be very nice if you tapered your lines... I was thinking of makin a tutorial on that, I'll give you a link when its done.
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tapered the lines? I still don't know what that means
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i agree with vio ^^
your art is very pretty but it would look great with some tapering <3
its just when you erase part of the end of a line to make it look sorta pointy
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oh now I know what you mean! XD
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I'll get to the tutorial xDDD
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