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Published: 2018-04-13 13:29:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 13590; Favourites: 850; Downloads: 50
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I know I am about 2 weeks late for that but...
Every single year I am drawing something for myself for my birthday
I wanted to do the same this year!
This time I drew my Kira in her bat version (I havent done that in ages)
I am so pround of this one!!! ;AAAA;
I really hope my mobian art can go this direction! I love how lights and perspective turned out on this one
Please do not trace, recolor or repost!
Art and character belong to me
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m0t10nl3ss-cyb3rh3x [2018-04-26 00:59:07 +0000 UTC]
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Hello there, a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/i/f… " alt=" " title="Fivey" />! This is
a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/r/t… " alt=" " title="TrickyTheSylveon" /> here. And to be honest, this piece really did catch my eye!
First thing I noticed was the lack of shading on the chains. Because of this, to me, the chains just seemed like they weren't... there... I would try adding some shading and lighting on the chains so that way they pop out a little more.
Now onto the positive things so that way I don't feel like a jerk. I really like the idea behind this. Your character looks the least bit concerned about being chained up, and I really love the blur effect, it makes the piece look a little more dramatic yet a little easier on the eyes in a way. Speaking of easier on the eyes, I like the colors that you used for your character. They seem to work really well with each other.
Well... I think that's all I have to say. I'm a bit rusty because I haven't critiqued in a while, but I hope this'll help you.
Keep up the awesome work, a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/i/f… " alt=" " title="Fivey" />!
-:iconTrickyTheSylveon
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Moonfrox [2018-04-25 00:47:42 +0000 UTC]
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Very, very nice drawing! I love the coloring, it's very clean and detailed. Also the chains look awesome and fit the drawing perfectly. I love the color choices of the character design, and her wings are gorgeous as well! However, I think the most impressive part of this drawing is her pose and expression, it's all very natural looking. Visually, the drawing is outstanding!
Though the design of the oc is great, it's not anything super special. Her outfit is definitely my favorite thing about her, though I'm not too hyped about the rest of her design. To be honest, I feel her design is a little too much. The wings, the long tail and hair, and her fox ears make it confusing to know what species she is.
Once again, it's obvious the artist here is very talented. Everything from the line work to the coloring is beautifully done. The simplicity of the background really makes the character stand out more and it fits this piece very well!
For impact I really can't say much. It's a great fan character and the art is amazing but I don't see anything particularly inspiring about this piece. Never the less, you're art is amazing and you should definitely keep doing what you're doing!
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CuteArtStyleKitty [2018-04-24 21:56:30 +0000 UTC]
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I always like critiques, because I spam people with my long messages that way. XD But talking about this picture was so needed! I ABSOLUTELY AM INTRIGUED with your coloring and shading! It almost gives the picture another worldly feel to it and the character looks so amazing and awesome, the chains just give her another cool effect! The point of view is also really cool because as you look down it feels it could travel on forever and ever. It really does feel like I'm in another world and I could jump in~ You did absolutely great and the whole picture is beautifully done~
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gdpr-17195694 [2018-08-11 00:06:31 +0000 UTC]
This is so beautiful. I love the colors and lights!
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SailorSetsuna [2018-05-16 23:09:49 +0000 UTC]
... jak...
No kurde jak xDD
Cienie są tak bardzo on point, kolory tak fajnie grają razem,, perspektywa mega. Cały ten art to cudo ;w;
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LindArtz [2018-05-09 01:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Very nice work!!
Congratulations on your much deserved DD!
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Tinselfire [2018-05-08 17:35:00 +0000 UTC]
Keep fighting the good fight. One day there will be another Sonic game as good as Sonic 3 and Knuckles and another cartoon as good as Sat Am. If so you make them yourself.
Stay strong.
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Fivey In reply to Tinselfire [2018-05-08 20:44:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much, but I don't want to work on Sonic games
I draw sonic characters just for fun and commissions, but I want to focus more on my own projects
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Fivey In reply to Lucain24 [2018-05-08 10:21:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for letting me know! If not you I wouldn't know ;v;
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Lucain24 In reply to Fivey [2018-05-08 10:25:08 +0000 UTC]
Cx no problem. Nicely done Fivey <3
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Fivey In reply to Lucain24 [2018-05-08 10:26:34 +0000 UTC]
I just realized that you are the one I owe that. Thank you!
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CreativeCarrot [2018-04-16 06:31:26 +0000 UTC]
Woah that’s beautiful
The shading is amazing!!!
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Coca-loca [2018-04-15 15:28:22 +0000 UTC]
this looks really amazing!! the shading on the hair is so beautiful omg ;-;
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DianaFoxyDysDark [2018-04-15 13:00:51 +0000 UTC]
That is really cool
Such an amazing masterpiece
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TotallyTits [2018-04-14 18:10:26 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness!
You did such a fantastic job! She is so beautiful!
I love your affects and lighting <3
Amazing meh dood!
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Evays [2018-04-14 11:49:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm in looooveee with the colors!! <3
That's it's a really masterpiece =w=
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AlmaKRowan [2018-04-14 08:23:32 +0000 UTC]
Okej -głeboki oddech-
wow.
Flow, poza, perspektywa, wow.
rób tego więcej a nie będziesz musiała martwić się o selfimprovement. serio. wow.
przeszłaś samą siebie i to tak ze trzy razy.
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Fivey In reply to AlmaKRowan [2018-04-17 15:48:09 +0000 UTC]
DZIĘKUJĘ!
Miło słyszeć! Nie masz pojęcia jak dużo te słowa dla mnie znaczą <3
Mam nadzieję że uda mi sie dalej iść w tym kiedunku
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TinyCamelCat [2018-04-14 00:19:32 +0000 UTC]
HOW ARE YOU SO GOOD AT ART!!??
HOW DID YOU GET THIS FAR?!
WHAT DID YOU DO TO GET THIS GOOD!?
HOW MUCH BLOOD, SWEAT AND TEARS WENT INTO ALL OF YOUR ARTTTTTT!!!???
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Fivey In reply to TinyCamelCat [2018-04-17 15:45:03 +0000 UTC]
STAHPPP
Thank you very much!!!
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TinyCamelCat In reply to Fivey [2018-04-27 14:42:27 +0000 UTC]
heh, i kinda went overboard with that comment
also ur profile is really cool...
(mine is a screenshot of my name on DeviantArt, soooo)
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Amaris-Tollkirsche [2018-04-13 23:32:48 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh!! Wow, Fives!! This is absolutely amazing!!
Kira is looking gorgeous in this piece ~ ; u; So great <3
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