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Fivey — Hello Sunshine
Published: 2019-05-19 20:48:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 9812; Favourites: 512; Downloads: 5
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OMG. Deviantart actually handled uploading this beast!
Anyway. I am back from my hiatus and I am back to work. Here is my first "hello I am alive" piece.
I love doing animations so much ;---;
First time publishing something more dynamic.
My part of Art Trade with SonicAimblu19
Doing animated Trades to gain some more skills again XD
Sadly I have to slow down. I need to finish all my commissions first. I will probably open some trades in summer vacation
I hope you like the final result as much as I do! If you see any bugs, or generally have any advices just let me know in the comments or a note.
Animated in Adobe Premiere
Frames drawn in fire alpaca
Background Drawn in Paint Tool SAI
Still version:
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Comments: 49
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First of what i have to say is that the animation is very SMOOTH, it gives my eyes a holy vision, and the movement, it definately likes in the real life. Secondly, her expression is truly cute and beautiful, it makes me feel happy and joyful as well, it looks like she is gonna do somethings that are good to her (maybe will make her feel happy?). Thirdly, I just love the background, it looks like it’s really sunny there, i can feel the heat through this screen, beautiful-made, well-done! And the camera angle is just unique, there is nothing to say about it! Also, the character looks the same as SonicAimblu’s OC, this does make your version cuter (cuz hers is already cute!). That’s it, brighthouse’s out!
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Thank you very much for the critique!
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Less critique critique na na na na na ana ana an a na ananan na and more WOO WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!! It looks beautiful! And the walking is cute! The smears in the lines are good!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! IT'S MAGNIFICENT! I can't tell the difference! 5 STARS FOR THE GIRL IN WAITING OF DEVIANTART! I GIVE YA, I TELL YA, 5 STARS! I swear myself should not shout at her again. Seriously, I meant to...
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"Hello Sunshine" is a lovely animated running sequence, the blue sky compliments the pale character design and falling color shards fill the background nicely.
Unfortunately the bright sun, takes the spot light away from the character, as your eyes tend to wander back to the sun.
The lines while slightly sketchy are nice and move from frame to frame.
The walking animation is however unnatural, the body is stiff and walks in one spot. The moving of the arms gives the impression of punching the air, adding with the lower body movement, it is as if she is walking on a treadmill.
In order to give an impression of running the arms would need to sway more and twist less side to side. The twisting of the torso makes the body sway side to side even more.
The angle of the pose is unflattering and doesn't add to the drawing.
I do hope you find this critique to be fair
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This is VERY FAIR!
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Thank you, I do try to be fair, when a critique becomes unfair it also becomes hurtful.
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Welp, sometimes i forget the negatives
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this looks awesome! i love the motion of her hands~ and you chose a really interesting perspective too ;v; great job! 
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I have been meaning to comment on this for days, and I can finally sit down and write my thoughts on this beautiful piece!
By the tiny experience I have of animation, I know it's difficult to execute and it takes a lot of patience. You accomplished something gorgeous, you even fully shaded it with a background! I say a job well done.
The animation overall makes me happy, with all the bright colors and her smile. Besides, it's a beauiful day for a stroll outside which increases your mood more. ♥
Well done Fivey, I hope to see more animations from you in the future! ;; u ;;
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate your comment! ;A; <3 <3
I really want co create more of these in future!
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Are you accepting trades? I'd be interested if u are
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Jaka urocza animacja! Taka radosna, powiedziałbym, szczególnie że przed chwilą zobaczyłem to: Connection
Do pełni szczęścia brakuje tylko muzyki z czołówki jakiegoś anime.
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This is soooo cute! And I love the colouring ;v; Great job Fiv
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aaah sooo beautiful hhhh u did an amazing job !!! ^^
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OMG IM SO SPEECHLESS NOW 😳😍💞THIS IS SO CUTE *0* AND AMAZING ,your animation is getting improve , im very speechless because the way you draw her so much cute T0T
THIS IS MY TOP ONE thank you thank you for using my charracter <33333
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Awww. Thank you so much! It is really nice to hear that <3 <3
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Now i do on my part <3 im on my way
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