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Published: 2010-08-30 02:46:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 393; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 9
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This is for the contest: [link]This is a character from her Manga: M U S I C.
Program: PaintToolSai
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Will-Graham [2010-08-30 05:22:33 +0000 UTC]
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herro yus i is a random person just critqueing
this is adorible <3 i love the hair ffff. the only thing wroung is that the shoulds are to in. maybe i little more out (like to the pink tails). and maybe the eyes and motuh. the eyes are a bit to far appart and the mouth is to low e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="Noes!"/>. one more thing the only thing left is to put more wrickles in the shirt.
but other then that i love this. i gotta love the stars on the check <33333 but let me just say ur very talented C:
i hoped this helped! (im not good at this xD)
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FizziBerry In reply to Will-Graham [2010-08-30 05:50:58 +0000 UTC]
Thank you All that you pointed out is correct. I forgot to check my mistakes before posting %_%
I'll try to fix it tonight [beside shoulders, Im too lazy XD]
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FizziBerry In reply to Will-Graham [2010-08-30 17:02:48 +0000 UTC]
Eh, I'm too lazy still I thought I did some stuff on diffrent layers so what I thought I would do won't work out.
But thank you for the crit!
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FizziBerry In reply to Chani--chan [2010-09-01 22:23:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks <3
I'm glad you like it, the design on her was adorible, she was so much fun to draw.
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