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She moved like a woman possessed, her body automatically reacting to Mat's bowed head and the goark's heavy kanabō. Without conscious thought she knew, somewhere deep in the bottom of her tumult soul, that now was the time to act.'The first rule of acrobatics is simple. Always keep your center.' Ty Lee's voice bubbled and bounced from the back of Azula's mind as she launched herself from the cliff's small shelter of rock. She vaulted and flipped, leapt and fell, desperate to close the distance in time.
'The second rule is harder. Always be mindful of your surroundings.' Her hands and feet were a blur of focused motion, never grasping a crack or pausing on a ledge for longer than a heartbeat before moving again towards the figures below her.
'The third rule is the easiest, but also the most important. Always know who you're performing for!' Though her audience below still had not noticed her, those further down the beach had. And with their sharp eyes and black bows they let fly a volley of arrows with only one purpose in mind-stopping her by any means necessary.
'All projectiles have one thing in common,' Now it was Mai's dry intonation that fired though her as she drew her sword mid-leap. 'They all arc. As soon as they've been launched, whether they're a huge flaming bolder or a tiny wrist dart, they begin to fall. If you can read that arc, if you can predict its path, then no projectile should be able to hit you. Period.'
Using her free hand to grasp a jutting piece of rock, Azula swung herself onto a ledge and crouched, watching the small cadre of arrows speed towards her. Her mind pulsed and fired, taking in their velocity, trajectory, and numerous other outside variables with a speed born from its parents Genius and Desperation. For an instant her sword flashed silver and white while bits of wood, steel, and fletching fell around her feet.
Below her Hama directed the goark to level its kanabō even with Mat's temple, taunting him one last time. She didn't pause to strategize, she didn't think every possibility through to its fullest-as Azula flipped down through the air, she did something that years before she had made a habit of taunting Zuzu for.
She simply reacted.
Grasping her sword hilt with both hands, Azula stabbed downwards. The blade tip sank deep into the heavy wood that made up the kanabō's shaft. The momentum of the blow, while not enough to wrench the weapon free of the goark's bloodbent fingers, brought both the club and its master to the ground. For a beat, there was silence. Then Azula's face grew a savage, satisfied grin, and she twisted the hilt of her sword with all her strength.
The sharp crack of a deadly war club splitting into two useless pieces of splintered wood was all too audible.
Hama yanked her hands up and the goark rose from the ground. Together the two were fast, but Azula was faster. She withdrew her blade from the wrecked kanabō and sliced shallow cuts against the goark's knees and elbows. She ended her combination with a solid kick to the chest plate, and the human puppet fell backwards, as useless and broken as the weapon he landed next to. Azula turned face-to-face with Matthias, still mostly supported by the rock wall and still holding his wounded arm with his good one.
"Five hundred paces to our left there's a bolder shaped like an egg. Can you set it on fire?"
Mat's eyes were unfocused. He opened his mouth mechanically, and then closed it again without ever having spoken. He looked vaguely towards Azula, but she could tell he didn't really see her.
The two goarks that had beaten him swooped across the beach, and he flinched. Azula spun to intercept them. The clawed goark reached her first, and she brought her sword up just in time to block its ten long, thin blades. The claws locked with her sword, and she struggled against the mute warrior for possession of the weapon.
From behind the first goark the second one appeared, using its longer reach to swing each of its war hammers around its partner's body, intent on catching her in the ribs. Azula dropped to the ground still holding her sword, managing to pull the clawed goark's hands just far enough into the path of the oncoming hammers so that they were crushed by the dual impacts. Hama screamed with rage as Azula swept her feet into the two goarks, sending them to the ground as well. She kept her legs swinging and used the momentum to leap up and at the fallen puppets. Her blade danced across their joints, rendering them useless.
Panting, she spun back to Mat. He was still dazed, as hopelessly useless as the cliff he was up against. "Koh-damn it. Snap out of it Musagetes! I've not fought this hard just to let them win now!" He flinched again, and Azula bent her sword behind her just in time to parry the strike of a goark's jian. She pushed the puppet back and threw herself at it, blade flying.
"Aren't you the famed White Phoenix? The Fire-Snatcher? Haven't you just been tip-toeing around us ants this whole time?" Azula disarmed the goark and snatched up its blade, using both it and her own to cut the puppet's joints. She spun both swords in a tight arc, felling the next attacker before it even had a chance to strike. "Is this how you really want to die? Aren't you better than this?"
From behind her came a voice, lost and weak. "I...I don't know what I'm supposed to do. I'm not sure if I ever did."
"Don't bother with what you're supposed to do. Know what you're supposed to be." Azula blocked an oncoming blow with both blades. This goark's strength proved too much though, and with only loose sand to brace against she was driven backwards into Mat's chest. Warmth rushed into her back, and his shaky breath blew hot through her long matted hair to brush against her neck. Still struggling to keep the goark at arm's length, she twisted her head upwards and to the side, forcing his sullen and terrified eyes to meet hers.
"Mat...Remember!"
(From TAS ACT II, The Duel [link] )
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So can draw. He can draw really, really well. So well, in fact, that I was actually unable to post this picture as soon as he'd shown it to me. Instead, I downloaded the file and saved it, deep in my hard drive, secreting it away in the same way Momo hides his best and favorite lychee nuts. I wanted the picture all for myself, because I somehow thought that if it became exposed to the world, it's magnificence would lessen.
...I don't know why either. I hadn't slept for a while...
REGARDLESS, here it is in all it's fantastical glory. ooh, aww, and compliment to your hearts content. God knows he deserves it.
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Comments: 49
IntrepidComic [2013-06-10 06:29:28 +0000 UTC]
I love the motion blur on Azula's leg and left sword, very intense.
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flamehead23a In reply to jedi7000nathan [2011-12-17 01:06:28 +0000 UTC]
haha, not quite. But that'd be an interesting match up, no doubt.
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jedi7000nathan In reply to flamehead23a [2011-12-17 08:31:29 +0000 UTC]
ya Azula as a Shinigami and fighting and flirting with Ichigo a very interest match up indeed
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tdlob [2010-11-18 06:30:58 +0000 UTC]
errrhhmmm... not to be an avatar fan boy nit-picker but why is azula using a bladed weapon?
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flamehead23a In reply to tdlob [2010-12-06 20:11:01 +0000 UTC]
that would be because after five years of solitary confinement in a modified Cooler, and with a slightly changed world-view, she's found herself unable to bend fire at the moment.
Though I can't imagine Zuko getting crazy good at swordsmanship without the same opportunity to do so being afforded to Azula as well.
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tdlob In reply to flamehead23a [2010-12-07 00:00:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the straight answer. I just find it a little odd considering she never picks up a weapon during the series and actually states the "playing with knives" is adolescent during the series.
I guess given enough time she could become adeuquate with a sword, but I don't see her really becoming a master. She has relied on firebending since her childhood, the sudden change is a bit of a culture shock.
(don't freak out, I'm just stateing what was going on in my mind)
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flamehead23a In reply to tdlob [2010-12-07 00:09:14 +0000 UTC]
No, I get you. If you don't mind, could you remind me when she said that playing with knives line? I can't recall it.
And I dunno, Azula seems like the type to make sure she masters anything she tries, no matter what. The thirst for perfection is a very defining characteristic for her, of course. If you recall, during day of black sun invasion she had a blade on her, and I imagine she was more than able to use it.
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tdlob In reply to flamehead23a [2010-12-07 00:31:30 +0000 UTC]
[link]
At 12:42 Azula says, "You waste all your time playing with knives, you're not even good"
"Playing" is the key word, it implys she feels like these weapons are little more than toys and that Zuko would have been better off improving his firbending. This also implys that she has never picked up a weapon to train with and has devoted all her training with firebending.
Where is she seen with a blade during black sun? I cannot recall ever seeing one.
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flamehead23a In reply to tdlob [2010-12-08 00:29:46 +0000 UTC]
at 12:42, funnily enough. (part II mind you, not Part I)
She's antagonizing Sokka into attacking, and as he rushes forward she mutters "come and get it" and palms from her sleeve what's probably one of Mai's bladed weapons. And like I said, Azula would never start learning something and then just stop, not until she was at least one of the best at it. Perfection defines her, or at least she tries to make it seem that way.
If you go a bit farther back, you see her pulling off a punch of acrobatic moves as well, probably taught to her by Ty Lee. That's sorta where I got the inspiration for this scene--removed from her unique talents, she falls back on what she remembers from her (former) friends, using that to her advantage.
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tdlob In reply to flamehead23a [2011-02-05 02:25:45 +0000 UTC]
Oh! You know what, you're right. now that I think about it she did palm a blade right as Sokka was charging. Plus, more than likely her being the type to master anything she truly set her mind to. More than likely right again, I highly doubt she would let herself become helpless on the battle field even without her fire bending, so the fact that she would seek alternate means of defense seems like a natural extension of who she is.
Regardless, it is still weird to see her running around with swords that aren't made of blue flames. XD
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flamehead23a In reply to tdlob [2011-02-05 16:44:51 +0000 UTC]
haha, well she's just in a bit of a slump at the moment, and is trying to find something to motivate her inner fire, just like Aang and Zuko had to in "The Firebending Masters" episode.
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liruichen In reply to tdlob [2010-12-04 16:44:01 +0000 UTC]
Dude(s) read TAS and your heart will know the answer!
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liruichen In reply to tdlob [2010-12-05 06:05:26 +0000 UTC]
Flamehead's fanfiction The Avatar Saga
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Capt-BA [2010-08-15 02:33:16 +0000 UTC]
You two need to collab a massive project, for real.
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flamehead23a In reply to Capt-BA [2010-08-15 04:28:38 +0000 UTC]
man, you've got no idea how fantastic that would be. I would love nothing more than to truly collaborate with someone on a project, but I have no real idea as to how one goes about asking that without sounding like either an obnoxious jerk or desperate loser.
I'm pretty sure I'm neither, but regardless I don't want to impose. :\
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Capt-BA In reply to flamehead23a [2010-08-15 16:46:35 +0000 UTC]
Step One to Successful Collaboration - TALK and find out of there's a project you both could get behind 100%. I know ~liruichen has a lot of ideas for how Avatar continues. Maybe you two could brainstorm up a new story you'd both be excited to work on.
You two seem to have similar tastes and complimentary styles - it would be awesome to see an epic action comic, even just a short one for starters.
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flamehead23a In reply to Capt-BA [2010-08-15 20:21:16 +0000 UTC]
true-true. Talking is sort of the jumping-off point for any collaboration. My problem is I can't help but feel like I'm imposing, whenever I ask someone anything more than a simple question. It's a problem I have in RL as well as on the net. How, if you don't mind me asking, did you and =daughterofthestars get started on that tactical forces project?
I totally agree that our tastes and styles seem similar, and we do seem to be building a rapport of kinds online, but I doubt either one of us would want to give up our individual visions for a post-series story. That said, something taking place before the series started, maybe about Iroh, or Ursa, or something, would be pretty damn awesome to collaborate on...
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Capt-BA In reply to flamehead23a [2010-08-15 23:11:46 +0000 UTC]
=daughterofthestars and I had been chatting for months before I even thought to ask. I was trying to do it on my own, had the whole thing planned out, and realized it was a bit ambitious on my own. I more or less pitched the idea to her and she loved it.
I'd just mention to him that you're totally up for a collaboration and see what he says. It can't hurt! Maybe throw him a few ideas and see where it goes from there. I never would have gone up to =daughterofthestars or anybody and been like "Hey, make my fanfic into a comic!" as that can never be done without coming off sounding like you're 12. But then, I'm gone for three weeks and I come back and =daughterofthestars has started turning my Book Four into a comic... for fun... hahaha... Let's just say I was pleasantly surprised.
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flamehead23a In reply to Capt-BA [2010-08-16 17:51:19 +0000 UTC]
yeah, guess I'll just have to bite the bullet, get over my neurosis and just ask....maybe after a few more weeks.
Yeah, I saw that comic. Man, you're one lucky lucy, no doubt. I'm pretty sure short of getting the creator(s) of your source material to acknowledge your work, getting your fan-fiction turned into a comic (for free) is every amateur author's dream. ;D
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Capt-BA In reply to flamehead23a [2010-08-17 02:44:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh totally!
Well, best of luck to you. If it helps you can tell him I suggested it. I'm always looking out for the fandom, and potentially awesome collabs need to be explored AT ALL COSTS!
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flamehead23a In reply to Capt-BA [2010-08-17 04:40:58 +0000 UTC]
haha, well, I won't stop you.
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liruichen In reply to flamehead23a [2010-12-04 16:43:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh my goodness, I've only just now read this comment thread. Holycow.balls, I would love to collab. I have no idea when I would have time to do something like that though, because my PhD life is a total desert. I get to sketching every now and then, but real art work of any kind is rare and the occasions few and far between. I would feel super horrible providing the level of dedication I am capable of right now to a project of any mettle, let alone something a friend was really into...what to do.
I really enjoyed doing this Azula piece, and random captures like this might be more possible than an entire comic...but who knows.
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flamehead23a In reply to liruichen [2011-02-02 23:48:59 +0000 UTC]
okay, how about this then. I've just kicked my personal branding drive into high-gear. I'm hoping to get my foot in the door...well, anywhere...but if I'm going to show I can write comics, I need someone to draw said comics I write.
would you be at all interested in some sort of short-panel sketchy-comic collaboration?
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flamehead23a In reply to liruichen [2011-02-03 04:24:11 +0000 UTC]
Well I tell you what. I'll note you my email, and we can start bouncing ideas around. I'm game for just about whatever.
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flamehead23a In reply to OomarGalor [2010-08-13 00:24:41 +0000 UTC]
haha. well that's either a compliment to 's artwork, an insult to your imagination, or a failing of my prose--or all three.
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Beshflorin [2010-08-12 16:35:55 +0000 UTC]
WOW awesome piece..btw flame this was one of your best and scariest chapters yet. The hairs on my neck were actually standing when I read it.
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flamehead23a In reply to Beshflorin [2010-08-12 22:46:34 +0000 UTC]
well if you liked this one, just wait till Act 3! (which I'm 40, 45% done with.)
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TarosMyr [2010-08-12 01:27:32 +0000 UTC]
I am "possessed" by this picture. It is made of awesome.
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flamehead23a In reply to liruichen [2010-08-12 02:27:58 +0000 UTC]
well don't do that--totally unmanly.
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flamehead23a In reply to liruichen [2010-08-12 22:47:06 +0000 UTC]
can knuckles actually blush? That's crazy man.
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liruichen In reply to flamehead23a [2010-08-12 22:54:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh sure especially if they were just used to punch my way through a crowd of bums trying to steal my wallet.
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flamehead23a In reply to liruichen [2010-08-12 23:03:22 +0000 UTC]
well now, I wouldn't count that as blushing. that's more like badassing. I think.
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flamehead23a In reply to TaiKaze [2010-08-12 02:28:22 +0000 UTC]
haha, I forgot to mention in the comments that I'm 45% done with the next chapter...
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