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Published: 2010-02-04 13:50:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 2219; Favourites: 75; Downloads: 10
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If I diedI wonder who
Would cry
If I died
I wonder who
Would die inside
I wonder if
They'd talk about me
Or if they'd just go home
I wonder if
They'd tell stories of me
Or if they'd leave my name
To blow away on the wind
Would my friends care?
Would my family care?
Would my name
Tense the air
Or would it make them laugh
From memories past
If I died today
I wonder who
Would actually care...
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this is truly amazing.
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Sometimes I dont think anyone would care if I died...
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I'm sure that isn't true, there's always someone who cares
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Me too, I don't even know about you but I care
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I'm sure there are people who care about ya
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maybe one or two ppl at most
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i can go with three
even though that seems a bit to high
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ur poem inspired me to write one like it
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its not as good, but its ok
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i often think like this but soon tell myself that people will care, but the curiosity will always haunt my mind...
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Yeah. There's always that curiousity that makes you wonder what people would do or say, but you can't find out.
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yes, but with that curiosity comes though and with that though you are able to write stuff like you wrote above. I wish I could write like that, I try but yeah starting out in things is always hard i guess..
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Yeah. Curiosity can lead to some amazing stuff. I didn't really think that this was such a great poem, but I'm glad people like it so much.
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I think it's mainly the thought behind it which bought me in, but i also love it lol.
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oh btw love the writing haha
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Beautiful..I'm in a poetry mood and it almost feels like the very first one I opened could have spoken from my own heart..
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Awwww...I'm glad you liked it
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hmm... when you're forgotten noone cares anymore and if they do what's in it for you? You're dead. The only thing you can take comfort in is that you helped to build the future for the others and therefor it's important to build a good future, even in the smallest matter, but it's also important to enjoy life cuz otherwise the death of those before you would have been in vain ^^ thus keeping in mind that others die as well and it's best to help them enjoy there life while still remembering you have to live your own life and so on... Life's complicated yet simple: there's no meaning to life (other than procreation), so you better enjoy it while you can... Don't know if it still matters to the topic ^^ just wanted to chare my (current) point of view, and I don't want to start a discussion about life (maybe just a little)
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No no, it's fine. I love hearing what people think
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nice poem btw ^^
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Nice work, it's interesting of the idea you're thinking of
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oh,of course people would care, you're such a sweet guy
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OMG! This is so good!
I'm kinda scared of dying, because I think that people won't care about me, but I know that at least one person would. x)
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Thanks
Yeah. There is always going to be at least one person who would miss you and that cares about you.
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This is such a beautiful poem... one that really gets you thinking, which I love. Great job!
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No problem! I really enjoyed it.
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Thanks so much!!
Thanks for the 
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XD again, it's nothing. I looked through some of your other poems and you're GREAT!
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I don't feel like this, but when I get inspired to write something, no matter the mood, I gotta write it.
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well, i didn't mean you were in that mood
it's just touching
It is something everyone (as i think) ever thought about..
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Okay
And thanks. One thing I love knowing is that my literature was able to make someone feel a differant emotion
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