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flash526 — True Friend
Published: 2009-12-21 13:47:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 194; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 1
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Description True Friend
I sit and cry
I wish I could fly
Fly away from here
Fly to anywhere
My hearts been shattered
Worn and tattered
Lifes left it's mark
Upon my heart
A permanent scar
As big as a star
Through all the tears
And all the years
I realize
There's someone who cares
She listens and helps
She never shouts
She actually cares
She's a true friend
And will be till the end...
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Comments: 11

the-way-to-me [2010-01-06 18:31:57 +0000 UTC]

it is very good indeed

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flash526 In reply to the-way-to-me [2010-01-06 18:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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the-way-to-me In reply to flash526 [2010-01-06 18:37:44 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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YodaKittyRulesPie [2009-12-23 01:36:56 +0000 UTC]

awe, that's sweet

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flash526 In reply to YodaKittyRulesPie [2009-12-23 13:06:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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YodaKittyRulesPie In reply to flash526 [2009-12-23 23:53:39 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Dancefreack16 [2009-12-21 21:46:54 +0000 UTC]

This is a very sweet poem Gordon my very good buddy and friend here on deviantart.
Favoriting this.


Dancefreack16/Holly Marie Coeburn.

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flash526 In reply to Dancefreack16 [2009-12-22 00:48:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Dancefreack16 In reply to flash526 [2009-12-22 01:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Ya are so very much welcome and (Big Grin) right back at ya Gordon my very good buddy and friend here on deviantart.


Dancefreack16/Holly Marie Coeburn.

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Snowy-Ninja [2009-12-21 15:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Great way to cheer someone up... but yeah i do like this... Not sure i am likin' you sounding emo though... cant you do something more happy and alive?

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flash526 In reply to Snowy-Ninja [2009-12-21 17:14:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I wrote this and thought it turned out pretty good. Don't worry, I've got a ton of poems that are happy and such. I'll post them later

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