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FlashKenshin77 — Tears of Snow I - I've Just Seen a Face
Published: 2014-05-03 01:31:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1313; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 7
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Snowdrop, a young blind filly meets Icy Mist, a young disabled pegasus that moved to Cloudsdale. As they become closer, she unravels a certain secret that he begs her not to tell others. Can she save Icy from his father?Another one of my fanfics... if you haven't seen Snowdrop, I recommend you do. That video hit pretty hard and well, yeah...
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The story was pretty cute, but at the end... boy, what a dark turn!
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It gets better! In... both aspects, sadly...
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I'm questioning if that's possible, but I'll just keep reading and find out.
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So... what does the emoticon mean?
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I didn't wanna spoil anything, and I was happy that you were gonna continue reading...
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Well, I shall admit that I did enjoy reading your tale. The language is quite excellent indeed. I can, perhaps, object on the way that snowdrop was written of as if she were not blind, but that is not such an issue.
A question, though: is it possible for a young boy/girl not to know the word "friend"?
well done. I shall certainly follow this story of yours.
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I think I d slip a few times, but I know overall that I did keep her blind, but in certain instances, like her home, I'm sure that she'd know where things are just by counting the steps or feeling. Or at least that's what I've done...
And most certainly, I knew a few people back in 3rd/4th grade that sat alone. There was one that would eat in the far corner for no reason... I tried to talk to him but he never made any attempt to talk.
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Yes, and you are quite correct in your assumption, but what I had on mind is certain instances when you wrote that "she looked".
There is certain phrases you can use that would give a nice touch as to how a blind mare could conduct herself, but I will leave that for your imagination ^_^
oh, I see now. a poor child, they were, but at least you did your best ;D
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Aye! I've done mah best... whether it works or not.... that's up to the readers
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and you did well *le bows* ^_^
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If I may, ahem..."yay..."
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hahahah not bad at all ^_^
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Just randomly found it and wow, this fic is amazing! Keep up the great work :3
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Haha thanks! I'll do my best.
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Thanks
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This is a nice piece. A piece worth favoriting for my collection.
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