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Flashpelt1 — OC: Bloodstripe

Published: 2012-03-08 18:16:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 668; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 3
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Description yup so here is my entry for *lewisvel1 s contest! i was supposed to make a character as evil as i could, and what better then a cat who betrays both his clans and murdurs cats in their dreams. so here is my entry read on if you dare!

Name: Bloodstripe
Gender: Male
Clan: Bloodclan/Shadowclan
Back Ground: Thought Bloodstripe waas born in shadowclan he eventually left through several reasons. First off, every cat in the clan feared him because of he blood-red stripes and his strength. Even his father hated him, and through this he was treated differently than his sister Tigerlilly; whom he grew to hate as he realized that she was being treated beter off than he was.
One day after a brutal 'training' battle with his mentor. (who tried to kill him in that battle) Bloodstripe (bloodpaw then) wandered Shadowclan territory, eager to proove to his clan that though he was much stronger than them he was just as loyal as his sister. While wandering he bumped into a Bloodclan cat whom he started to fight with as he attempted to force the tom off his territory, throughout the battle the Bloodclan tom continuousely tried to talk Bloodstripe into joining Bloodcla, for his power would not be hated there. In the end of the battle Bloodstripe agreed to leave his clan to join Bloodclan so that he could prove his loyalty to cat who would apreciate him being in there clan.
After liveing in Bloodclan through his apprentice-hood, he earn his Bloodclan name which was instead of being like a normal warrior name they simply removed the word 'paw' so his name remained Blood.
Though most of Bloodclan feared and respected him, their leader did not. so he decided to take Blood and his friend (who had been the one two talk him into joining Bloodclan) on an attack mission against Sahdowclan. Bloodstripe quickly agreed to this, as he was eager to show his old clan how powerful of an allie he would be.
The three toms waited on shadowclan territory and met a patrol. The Bloodclan leader told Bloodstripe to kill one of the Shadowclan members to prove his loyalty.
Though the Patrol they came across happened o be made up of Bloodstripes, Mother, sister and father, Bloodstripe killed his father, Blinded by the anger towards his memories of brutal treatment, then killed his Mother, for she had treated him as if he was not her kit. But he couldnt kill his sister, for she had been the only one to she any form of kindness to him while he had been in Shadowclan. Instead, he turned against his new clanmates and fought them as to save his sister. but while his back was turned as he fought his new friend, his sister killed him, in blind rage toward him murdering his mother and father.
Now he lives forever in the dark forest, haunting the dreams of Shadowclan cats. Wounding them in any way possible for the pain that clan caused him. and since it was his sister who killed him, he no longer feels any mercy toward any-cat for every cat he has ever known has only hated him for one reason or another. And sometimes an unlucky Shadowclan warrior dies at Bloodstripes claws in their dreams.


yup..... ive had this character since like 2010 but im just now posting him here XD i actually had a story about him going for a bit on wattpad but removed it when i got writters block and gave up because it had gone in a direction i didnt want at that time.
This pic took me about 5 Hours to draw and the description about 1 hour so 6 hours total
wish me luck!
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Comments: 3

Shadowwolf4545 [2016-09-01 02:59:57 +0000 UTC]

As hard as it may be to believe, I feel sorry for this unfortunate character. His moment of mercy was his last.

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Alyxeir [2012-03-09 02:26:34 +0000 UTC]

Nice character! Not to be a grammar nazi, but you spelled "treated" wrong...

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Flashpelt1 In reply to Alyxeir [2012-03-09 02:50:49 +0000 UTC]

lol i noticed XP i was tired at the end XD

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