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Its been a while since seeing some flash animation around on the DA, this is definitely what you'd wish would happen to you one lucky night! ^O^
Smoking hot work though on that crawling babe though and nice to see your not only giving the chest its level of size and sexyness but especially the way you work the rest of her too with the very cute face and the way those blue eyes really capture your attention, very lovely.
And map props to anyone out there (and that includes you), who's able to work with angling and perspective in term of their anatomy. You can very easily see the way she's moving her from both the forearms to the hind feet and even the damn toes too! It might not mean alot this deviant saying this but great job on tackling alot of those tiny things to make the overall flash look so good!
One thing that I might try and chime in on is the hands and how they're placed. I think its mainly the right hand and how much its twisted in that's bothering me. It and perhaps the left hand could be adjusted a but more outwards if anything for the next time! Granted it could well be the angle or just the way perhaps you set her up to move like that but its not anything that ruins the pic, just a random thought is all.
In terms of a number of things you done so well though, have to say flashpinup , you really do know your stuff. Like it so much that the ground/grass moves along with her crawl and that's something I see alot of flash deviants might miss. You even tackle the movement of her shadow or even some toning on the skin to make the chest seem more rounded and hot damn that breast swaying is just too hypnotic! Good work as well with the hands on how they raise up and down and even the fingers move along with the weight. Its simple perhaps but something important that you did very well to cover
And back to the face, say once more how much I enjoy those bright blue eyes! They fit very well to the anime styling of the eyelashes and very cute job on the way the nose is drawn to make room for those nicely rounded lips.
All in all though, have to say this is some awesome animation work on your part flashpinup and it would be foolish not to encourage you to keep up on the amazing work. *nods*
Later,
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Wow. That's an amazing comment. Good call on the hand, the elbow and hand needed to move out more, and the elbow moved towards her body when it should move out from her body, when she pulls herself. So I fixed that.
To address the rest of what you said, thank you so much. It really made me very happy. 
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If anything that's wonderful news hearing you managed to modify and better your animation flash, good on you. Sometimes deviants aren't into listening to feedback like that but thanks all the same to hearing me out and seeing those changes that needed to be made. Now your animation is even more sexier then before. Do forgive me for the drooling though, lol.
Later,
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