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Published: 2008-12-06 19:04:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 268; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 3
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One hand kept warm by another,One pair of lips meeting the other,
Two sets of eyes gazing into one soul,
Two share it, two lives become whole,
Three words passed and felt twice,
Three more kisses, three times as nice,
Four feet walking perfectly in step,
Four dirty shared secrets still kept,
Five fingers running through eachs hair,
Five dollars between two, they don’t care,
Six months ‘til they’re five hours from here,
Six more anniversaries for them to share,
Seven days of the week for them to be one,
Seven sparkles in four eyes reflected in the sun,
One beautiful reason for love to be true,
And for them to prove the world was made for two.
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Comments: 19
SlowlyDisintegrating In reply to FlatlineOnSteroids [2009-01-05 03:41:40 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
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RealDandy [2008-12-08 15:44:59 +0000 UTC]
Wow I absolutely love it...man you got some serious talent, plz keep them coming!
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FlatlineOnSteroids In reply to RealDandy [2008-12-10 14:21:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much.. I definitely will try to
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RealDandy In reply to FlatlineOnSteroids [2008-12-10 19:46:45 +0000 UTC]
Sweet! And You're welcome!
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wackee101 [2008-12-06 22:23:04 +0000 UTC]
its cute kind like the whole one then two then three... goo work
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Amyxdaughter In reply to FlatlineOnSteroids [2008-12-08 22:08:16 +0000 UTC]
Yur welcome. As always, me pal.
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pearwood [2008-12-06 19:12:53 +0000 UTC]
Cheesy? Perhaps, but also profound in a lighthearted way.
Let this one sit for a while, then come back and work on editing and tightening.
I like it.
(I like you.)
Steve
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FlatlineOnSteroids In reply to pearwood [2008-12-06 22:31:02 +0000 UTC]
That usually works.
I like you too Steve
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CSnyder [2008-12-06 19:09:57 +0000 UTC]
ah, very cool, not extremely cheesy, i like it
its fun
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