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Published: 2018-05-13 03:59:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 933; Favourites: 140; Downloads: 0
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Hi! I'm here from ProjectComment !
Firstly, it's a beautiful artwork! I really love the neat lineart and the lighting. The shading on the hair looks amazing as well! I love the detail of that single lock of loose hair falling from her ponytail. I think that her back should be a little more "outwards" though, because of the spine / backbone, which would give some volume to the back. The part where her left arm connects to the body can be improved a little also. I can't find a reference picture to show you at the moment, but do try it out in a mirror to understand what I mean (basically, she needs more armpit)
But really overall, this is so amazing! The colors you chose can totally convey the warmth of the summer to me. I can tell you're a great artist from this so I'm gonna give you a watch! (Feel free to watch me back as well) Keep up the good work!
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omg, thanks for writing me all this, the detail of the back if I had noticed it after uploading it, but the error of the back is not, the truth is quite poorly proportioned thinking it better.
I do not know very well how I should do the work of ProjectComment is a system that I do not quite understand since English is not my native language, but I know that after reading your words I feel the need to do that too, maybe someone will be so happy like me.
many thanks
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Ohh it must be quite difficult for you if you are not so familiar with english. It makes me happy that you're happy too. ^^
Your artworks are very beautiful! Good job!
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Summer is coming and it is looking so good. This is a beautiful art piece of a young woman in the sunlight. You did a good job with the shadows and lighting.
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thank you very much for your words, look at the new version I made, maybe you like it even more
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You have some great potential. Keep up the good work!
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gracias aprecio mucho tu comentario
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I'm glad you like it so much, thank you
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Who doesn't love summer? Even I'm looking forward
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It is very normal for the people of my country to hate this season. all the time there is heat and in summer it gets worse XD but like you, I love this season
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I do feel their pain sometimes since at a rare occurrence, I may get awful heatwaves. One of them was 111°
Fun times
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