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Florintech — Android 21 and Pikachu! (contest entry)
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Published: 2018-12-20 06:11:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 6087; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 0
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Here's a picture of a 10 yr old Android 21 (dragon ball fighterz) and his pet female pikachu, Lemondrop. They just got done with a fun experiment and they're all messy but hey, at least there's candy!!!Submission for a fun contest held by the group www.deviantart.com/tf-tg-conte…
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This is a pretty cute picture, though like others have said already the pose is a little awkward if you stare at it a bit. Some of the details are nice though, like the colors of the vials matching the splotches of stuff on 21's face. Don't really get why Android 21 has a Pikachu, but sure.
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Hey there, thanks for taking a chance on our group.
So not a ton to say here. The idea itself here is just straight genderswap. Considering you even have a description mentioning they just got done with an experiment seems like a shame you didnt incorporate that into them swapping genders. Beyond that Pikachu is seemingly just thrown in for no reason.
The anatomy is also kind of off on 21 particularly the lower half. Im assuming you arent super familiar with sitting people cross legged. (Not that I am, Im aware its really hard) The feet in particular are too small but just the overall size of his lower body is off.
The background is maybe a bit overdone but I do like the colored pencil parts to make the main image pop out. All the stars and clouds and whatnot are too much though.
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So uh... you drew the wrong tail on pikachu, females have the heart shaped endings while males have the straight line with a black bar so that's one mistake, but also the face on that pikachu is kind of horrifying, like a fat guy in his 20's with the chin hair to boot on its gullet which I now realize is Yajirobe. There's definitely a lot to work on overall, the proportions are very off in an uncanny valley way, the main one to note would be 21's legs and feet which just look tiny and poorly proportioned compared to his torso and head.
It's also just kind of a cute picture with not much original about it for the category, though I do like the touch of the cartoon drawings behind them. It fits with the 10 year old thing and I think you actually did a really nice job on the background overall. That being said, there isn't really much to talk about overall. Just keep working on your proportions and think of more things to make your entries stand out for next time cause just putting two characters together randomly while cute, isn't all that original or interesting. Thanks for entering.
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Wow. Thank you. Thanks sooo much for your input. I'm still fairly new to drawing digitally but I definitely did not notice most of the stuff you pointed out till now. I knew 21's legs were off but that was after I was done with the drawing and posted. My bad on that. Also I didnt grow up with pokemon so I never even knew female pikachus existed, sorry about that too. I'll work hard on my proportions and backgrounds as even I know that those are my biggest weaknesses. I wish you'd expand more on the "originality" aspect and there not being much to talk about cuz the contest emphasized on gender swap FG Characte.rs. THANKS AGAIN FOR YOUR CRITICISMS. I'LL TAKE THEM TO HEART😄💜
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Basically by originality I mean something that makes your changes or sequence unique. A good example would be to take a look at TheEverything's art entry which uses a novel format and a unique game to make an entry that is very unique or the animation someone did for the contest. Just drawing a character tg'd or tf'd is the minimum and originality is a score for those that go above and beyond if that makes sense. Hope that made it clearer. And thanks for taking the criticism well.
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