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fluffelkuh — A funny grumpy cat
Published: 2017-12-29 09:34:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 262; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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Wow, I'm so in love with my new markers!I think it looks very good when I put colorpencil over the marker like I did in this piece.
If you like it, please check out my other cat drawings:
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I absolutely love cats, and this little drawing captures it perfectly. It not like the cat portraits of old (which I can honestly tell from the other cat art you listed in the description), it has a more sensible & humorous way of doing it. In fact, when I first saw this in one of the featured folders while I was handing out another critique, I was immediately reminded of Yellowfang from Warriors, which helps bring out the originality of this piece.
For things that I want improved, there is actually very little, which I've noticed in the previous critique I did for a member of ProjectComment. But the way you colored in the kitty & how those tabby stripes really go inwards would really earn you a seal of approval from me. When talking about the face, however, which most of my criticism comes from, it's mostly the ears that need improvement; the right looks well done, while the left ear looks a little more set back & should be more flattened like it's counterpart. Other than that, the other hole for improvement would be making the tabby stripes stay in between the lines, unless that's part of your style.
Yet again, this is just criticism, so don't take it too seriously.
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Thank you so much for your critique!
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I am a warrior of the critique CRITmas Ninja force e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
First impression: A great drawing of a not so common cat attitude e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Vision:
I like the few coloured spots in the drawing. The eyes and nose are highlighted by having used coloured pencils and makes this picture looking more real, more lively. As the cat is rather grey/dark grey, the yellow pastel tone of the background matches well and so the cat sticks out better.
Originality:
Usually cat drawings are very often, but it is rather rare to compose a grumpy cat drawing. Mostly cats are posing in some cute and adorable attitude, so this is quite unique in itself.
Technique:
Here I like the shading of the fur with the different grey colour hues. I also love the details of the facial hair and how you have made the whiskers sticking out by drawing them in thicker lines. You have drawn them black and white, that gives the drawing more realism.
Impact:
There is really something malicious in the eyes of the cat. It seems somehow disturbed at something, looking/being mad at the person who did so. Well, it has an option at jumping at the intruder immediately.
Overall this is a beautiful traditional animal painting. Keep up that great work.
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Thank you very much for that detailed critique!
Have a merry CRITmas, too and a happy new year!
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You are very welcome, have a great 2018 as well
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Just look at those ears. Definitely a very grumpy cat
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You captured the Grumpiness wonderfully the texture of the fur is well done
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