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FluffyPocket — Asset Number 1 Deemo Reel Done
Published: 2009-10-25 19:13:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 906; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 32
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This is going to go on the demo reel that i am currently working on right now. I like they way it came out looks pretty good to me. I can't wait to start on the other stuff that i have to work on next month.Related content
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This one is kinda strange. On the one hand, the smoke and many parts of the phone are damn awesome. But on the other hand, the wood texture is kinda low and looks aweful, the cup is not that great as well and the lighter looks kinda strange. Could need some more work, but DAMN this smoke is awesome O.o
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That's amazing! The smoke looks great, really realistic. My husband didn't want to believe me it was 3D. Great Job!
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That's soo cool you showed you husband. Heh...Glad you think it looks real.
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well we both appreciate good art!
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WHY THANK YOU! :3
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you're very welcome!
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Looks great so far, the telephone and ciggie are spot on. The only thing that I don't like about this is how smooth and shiny the surface of the mug is. It would benefit from a very subtle bump map just to break up the way the light dissipates on it's surface. Great render
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Thank glad you like it 
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cool lighting mood, u need to add some dirt shaders, cause its lookinh quite clean and untouched now, rest is gr8
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This is a great render! I love the feel of everything in the piece, and the framing is nice. The only thing I might add a little more character to is the cigarette box, I can see that it's just a cube with one little tiny raised edge in the back. A lot of the time a cigarette box wont close that nicely after its been opened, so maybe if the lid was still bent a little it would appear more realistic. But that's only a nit picky little thing, overall this is really nice. 
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Thanks for you critique and I've actually thought about this before your totally right. But for right now I think I'm done with this scene. Thanks for taking your time to critique me though really appreciate it.
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yeah great smoke did u add latter in ps or particle system?
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Nope...it's just a transparency for smoke, just has an alpha that I made in photoshop and put it on a clear plane.
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very cool, great render. Just curious, what did you use to make the smoke effects?
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It's just an image with and alpha.
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