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Fluna — Rise - R4 pt 5
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Published: 2010-03-03 18:34:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 688; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 9
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To explain the confusing part (oh lord... I'm so sleepy I don't think it makes sense):
- Areim (in Rian's body) falls from the roof because he feels his body so heavy and can't make it stand up (his soul is also tired from going from a body to another, that's why he couldn't hold himself before in Diego's body)
- Rian (in Areim's body) runs towards him (because he's seeing his original body falling). Areim recognises that the one in his body is Rian.
- Areim sees his body, but with a little distortion (because Rian's body is taking over him, and the body can just see the 'monster' ilusion).
- Rian kneels down to help, Areim (Rian's body) acts insctintively, Areim tells Rian he isn't the one moving, that he should leave.
- It's late, Rian gots stabbed by the poisonous sting and faints poisoned.
End of the round.
Ms.J and Mr.K belong
Captain Rosko belongs
Invitz belongs
Rian belongs
Areim and Irais belong me
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Comments: 5
@3@' finally got to comment on your entry!
a very nice entry is was, Fluna! >u<
and well.... no point in wishing you luck in winning the match X'D as you've already done that.
SO I'LL CHEER YOU ON FOR THE NEXT MATCH!!!!!! GO FLUNA!!!!!! 8D
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It's okay, better later than never XD
I'M BRAINSTORMING IT
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