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flutterflux — stuck here, down on earth.

Published: 2008-01-07 04:45:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 409; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Description I have mixed feelings about this one,
I sort of just got bored and started cropping
and then i had a few ideas as in wondering.
I dont know if I like it yet or not, undecieded. =]

Horse; haikuxx
Background; sxc.
brush; fonts; dafont.com
lyrics; triple black, down to earth.
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Comments: 7

equizotical [2008-02-20 06:00:04 +0000 UTC]

I luff it flutbut ^^ The only thing is the spelling of answer xP and it might look cool i you added a very faint reflection of the horse in the water to make it look more in place ^^

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ekkylesia [2008-01-08 01:11:10 +0000 UTC]

just 1 more critique to make it amazing!

try using a lower opacity on the scan lines so they don't stick out as much.
(also - answer is spelt incorrectly. hehe)

love it!

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horsiexstock [2008-01-07 12:35:10 +0000 UTC]

I really like it, especially your smudging and the splashes You could try the scanlines through the horse, too, and put up an alternate version, but I'm fond of it as is. Good job!

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flutterflux In reply to horsiexstock [2008-01-07 22:49:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks it took me so long to finally get the main and tail to be semi okay. =] and splashes i love in this picture, and thank you a TON for the critique I thought about that but at the time it just seemed right to leave it but it now looks a ton better. =]

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horsiexstock In reply to flutterflux [2008-01-08 02:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Stoooning Looks much more complete now. No problemo!

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Aestivall [2008-01-07 06:29:56 +0000 UTC]

its really great. if i can make a sugestion, since your background has texture to it, try to make the horse have the same texture too, or else he seems to stick out too much, and its obvious you cropped the horse in. just trying to help

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flutterflux In reply to Aestivall [2008-01-07 22:50:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the critique i thought about putting him under that layer but it seemed right now to at the moment but he looks more in place now, thanks again.

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