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Flutterflyraptor — My fourth vector of Fluttershy.
Published: 2012-08-28 07:24:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 3071; Favourites: 88; Downloads: 90
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This is my fourth vector of one of my favorite cartoon characters, Fluttershy
Please let me know how I did, I've been trying to improve, so I can make a My Little Pony game for my nieces
I wouldn't let them down.
Friendship is magic/Lauren Faust/Hasbro/2010.
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Looks good! I definitely see improvement in your vectors
As for some constructive criticism: the end of her tail might look better pointy, instead of blunt, this counts for the right edge of her ear. Where the right outline of hair touches her ear, I think the cutoff should be towards the ear, as if it goes behind the ear, now it looks as if the outline disappears into the hair, in quite a weird angle. The colors also do seem a bit different from the show, but I don't think that should be seen as a mistake, as a color scheme can be altered to the artists preference.
As always, please don't see this as me taking a verbal dump on your art, I'm just really bad at giving constructive criticism in a nice way. At least I think so, it just feels bad to say bad things about the work you are proud of, but I hope my words can help you improve.
Oh, and I love the way you made her iris, and the detail in her cutie mark. Keep up the good stuff!
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What Program did you use? (sorry you probably get these a lot ;-
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It's really more about the learning ~RockerMan503, and not so much about which program you use
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so your not gonna tell me huh? ;-;
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I mostly use Photoshop
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Damn... okay, thanks ^-^
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This is an excellent start at Fluttershy.
(pssst, you forgot the highlight and accents for the eye)
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Thank you ~ArtStude3n2 for the positive feedback
What is the highlight and accents for the eye?
Sorry, I'm new at vectoring, and I don't know what that is
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Its the little areas below the black area thaat has 2 different colors. You can look at any pony, and you'll see 2 little "rectangle" spot.
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Thank you ~ArtStude3n2 for the positive feed back
I didn't know what that was, and thanks to you I do now
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Thanks, and your welcome
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