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Published: 2012-04-27 05:52:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Me being a jackass when coloring in the AJ-posed pony. Have a Lemonjack. I can almost guarantee this concept has been done before.
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FiddleArts [2012-04-27 10:21:43 +0000 UTC]

D'aww, Lemonjack's kinda cute x3
Like Alorpax said the front of the body is a bit too large - the front legs should start higher. And another little detail, the cutie mark should be either a little darker, or the body should be darker. Yellow on any other bright surface (like.. Yellow xD) doesn't really work.
Other than that, she looks great
Now get to work and draw more, keeping in mind what we said ^^
.. Or, you know.. Whatever you wanna do is fine...

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Flutterknight In reply to FiddleArts [2012-04-27 13:15:09 +0000 UTC]

Heh, one of these days I'll figure out the proper cutie mark contrast. ^_^

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Alorpax [2012-04-27 06:21:48 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, lemonjack! Haven't seen that before. You intentionally didn't add the lines?
The body is a bit too big or the hooves and the head is too small, and the front hooves should be just as thick as the hindlegs, if not thicker, since they're in front.

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Flutterknight In reply to Alorpax [2012-04-27 13:13:43 +0000 UTC]

If you mean I left out the lines in the mane & tail, yeah, I left those out because I couldn't remember where they went, and it was about 1am, so I was just looking to finish. The body ended up a bit too big because I was trying to make sure I didn't make it too straight, and forgot to curve the front properly, also I was livestreaming while I was making this, so I was slightly distracted. Also SAI started messing up toward the end of things, which didn't help. ^_^

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Alorpax In reply to Flutterknight [2012-04-27 14:47:50 +0000 UTC]

I meant the lines IN the hair, not the outlines. I guess I can understand that you wanted to finish it and just go to bed but if you didn't have enough time to finish it, you should've waited finishing it 'til tomorrow. No problem though, just give your drawings the time they need in order for you to finish them properly, you don't have to upload something every day.

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Flutterknight In reply to Alorpax [2012-04-27 16:01:26 +0000 UTC]

I would've waited til morning to finish it, but I have a bad tendency to forget what I was doing on something overnight due to my poor short term memory (the amount of unfinished art and half thought out ideas on my computer can attest to that), so I prefer to finish things all in one run if I have the option. I did try to add the lines but gave up when I couldn't remember where they went, and couldn't manage anything that looked good, so I just settled for the smoothest haired AJ clone ever.

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Alorpax In reply to Flutterknight [2012-04-27 18:53:38 +0000 UTC]

Make text documents, I usually forget stuff too so I make checklist and if you can't remember what stuff looks like, check references

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