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Flutterknight — Thunderhead
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Published: 2012-03-28 03:52:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 186; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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I randomly started drawing a pony, and ended up with this. I call him Thunderhead. I think I may also have finally managed to make a pony with wings that don't look terrible.Edit: I tried to fix the legs, but couldn't manage to do it without making it look horrible, so I think I may make a vector of this one and fix it there, where it will be MUCH easier to fix.
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*NOT TRYING TO BE A DICK OR INSULT YOU. THIS IS BETTER THAN I COULD EVER DRAW. THIS IS JUST CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM*
While the wings look fine, the proportions are off. If that pony was standing he would be leaning forward a lot. The rest of my criticism could be considered design choice so I'm not gonna type out the rest.
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He's supposed to be flying, actually, though I may have made the neck a bit long.
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I was referring to the legs actually. Probably shouldn't be writing criticism in my current state though.
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Okay, so what's wrong with the legs? They look right to me, so I must be missing something.
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The front legs are way shorter than they need to be/the back legs are too long. I did some very rough math and found that the front to rear leg ratio on this one is .62 while on one of your other works ([link] ) it was .80. This was very rough and probably no where near correct but with that big of a gap you can tell something is wrong.
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Ah, well that makes sense then, also I just noticed that I think I may have reversed the joint on the front legs on accident, though I'm not certain. Also you reminded me that I *still* need to think of a name and cutie mark for that mare.
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