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Hehe I love that last panel when her cheeks are stuffed it makes her look so cute!!
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Very cute... just one problem. It should be "If you're interested." Gotta watch that spelling!
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I have been wondering the past few days when the next page would come out.. and now I'm happy! ^^
I remember when I said seeing your comics come out are like christmas presents or birthday presents.. and it still feels that way! ^^
That reminds me.. my birthday is on the 20th.. that's next Friday..
I was gonna have that as a deadline for... erm... well nothing..
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What program(s) do you use to make your comics? I've tried in the past, but mine were all hand-drawn... Beautiful work as always!
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I really like this comic. But I have a few crits if they don't bother you.
1. Your drawing quaility has gone down since you started these. For example in that second panel...Her hair is just a stringy blob...and you never used to do that. I understand the pressure to get these out so your readers can keep up. But as its stands its not as high a quaility as the first pages.
2. The pace right now is going really slow. This particular story line with the mixed up foals is dragging. The story of the circus and the one about the ghost was much faster! This page for example covered one on thing. She woke up (which was shown on the last page) and she saw that the paper had the winner announced. That is not much action for a comic.
3. I love however the color pallet you have choosen to go with...The soft yet dark pastels are loverly.
4. I also love the fact that you are so wonderful at continueing this great project!
5. I think my favorite part (silly i know) are the talking bubbles! I love how tey are see through and so perfect. You have really mastered them!
I get excited still on every page I see...I can't wait to see what happens next.
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"The pace right now is going really slow."
Art is nothing to rush through, you know. She can take however long she wants to complete this.
I'm sorry to kinda snap at you like that, but it's the truth...
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I was not talking about the art and how long she wished to post each page. I meant her story was dragging and becoming boring. And its none of your business anyway. Her comment area allows for critiques and that was the advice I was giving. So next time ask what is going on before you snap and then look foolish.
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Ooh, luna's design has changed a bit since the comic first started... I like her stuffed cheeks their very cute ^^
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wait... I grabbed first comment! *first comment dance*
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