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Character designs I whipped up for the chapter one re-do! It takes place over two days instead of just one, so I needed different outfits for Louis and his mom.This is everyone who lives there at the time (might add one more but I think I'm good; kinda want more than one couple but eh idk) - not sure if they'll all be shown, but I thought I'd just get that dealt with instead of having to draw random characters in the background, for consistency's sake. Haven't bothered naming anyone really (Louis' mom's name is Beatrice, and I'm gonna name Priest-McGee at some point; just never did it the first time).
felt real bad drawing Tianna's parents ngl; I'm sad now
BONUS: Here's some other stuff I've been working on! Some packaging and a few panels I like from the re-do so far.
Already on page 32 of the new one - which was about page 13 comparatively in the old version. So uh yeah; I'm so damn excited to share it when I'm done since it's like.. actually a story instead of essentially an illustrated summary! I'm sure some of you think chapter one is fine as it is but you're gonna like the new version so much more, I guarantee.
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Silval58 [2018-12-16 07:03:29 +0000 UTC]
I thought the first guy's shoulder armor was a goomy at first. XD
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flyteck In reply to Silval58 [2018-12-16 22:43:56 +0000 UTC]
Lmao
its based on Arceus, so he'd probably be highly offended by that statement
I can see it though
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NightFury1425 [2018-12-16 03:28:02 +0000 UTC]
That’s cool. Are we able to see these characters in the future?
I was actually wondering if anyone here knows why the images from the comments or from the descriptions won’t appear? All that I keep getting is an empty screen with the deviant art logo only showing. I wasn’t able to read the image from the description. I think it’s only happening to me but I was hoping someone knows the solution to it.
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flyteck In reply to NightFury1425 [2018-12-16 05:08:00 +0000 UTC]
Probably not - if you're ever curious about one of the not super minor characters (Louis' mom, Tianna's parents, or MrPreistGuy) you could ask them something on the ask though!
sta.sh/0bwafz4q5mk
Does this work? Wix is dicking around with a lot of stuff so idk if that's why or not. Works fine for me and it has some views so some people must be able to see it.
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NightFury1425 In reply to flyteck [2018-12-16 05:17:07 +0000 UTC]
Okay. I totally forget that Tianna’s we’re there. I need to re-read your chapters again.
I tried the link that you provided but it won’t show. I guess it’s only on my deviant art app that it’s happening but it’s not just this recent one that you posted. I can’t even look at the comment drawings for the Trick of the Night Q&A. I have to go through safari and search it up.
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flyteck In reply to NightFury1425 [2018-12-16 05:26:29 +0000 UTC]
They're briefly in the prologue and I think they're in one panel of chapter one - they're pretty minor but I know a fair bit about them because if their relation to Tianna.
Thats really weird! Maybe it's your browser or something? Hopefully they start showing soon x.x
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NightFury1425 In reply to flyteck [2018-12-16 13:09:28 +0000 UTC]
Okay thanks. Sorry, I forgot to put *parents after Tianna. I don’t know if you got but by reading your response you got. Sorry again.
Yeah. I think I am going to have to call someone for help. I was reading online that you can call the help desk if the problem keeps happening. But it’s not the website or browser it’s the app that’s doing it. Thanks, I hope they start showing up too.
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TheTRUEgge [2018-12-16 03:01:43 +0000 UTC]
The person in the purple dress in the middle (right of orange dress) kinda looks like Anise’s illusion form from a distance. I like these designs!
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flyteck In reply to TheTRUEgge [2018-12-16 05:05:51 +0000 UTC]
I mean she had to get the idea for that hair from somewhere, right? Thanks!
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TheTRUEgge In reply to flyteck [2018-12-16 13:03:43 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I had wondered if that was why they looked similar! Neat
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BridgetLovejoy [2018-12-15 23:47:53 +0000 UTC]
*Sends the Patrick gif where he yells “WHO ARE YOU PEOPLE”* xD
Seems like hardly anyone lives in Lacebark (not that I envy them lol), but I see a few people have scars like the priest dude.
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flyteck In reply to BridgetLovejoy [2018-12-15 23:56:20 +0000 UTC]
It is indeed a very small population. It's always been small, but a lot of people died during that attack and there hasn't been much in terms of new people so yeah.. extra tiny.
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BridgetLovejoy In reply to flyteck [2018-12-16 00:00:37 +0000 UTC]
Why do they choose to stay there if it’s so dangerous though? D= I’d be outta there if I lived there. (Which I guess is how Louis felt)
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flyteck In reply to BridgetLovejoy [2018-12-16 00:08:52 +0000 UTC]
There's not a whole lot of places to go because of how cut off they are - they're also a pretty tight community and most of them were born there. Some people did leave though - I'd be out of there too, lol.
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BridgetLovejoy In reply to flyteck [2018-12-16 04:58:06 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I guess that makes sense. I would say old people are stubborn, but there’s not really any old people except kinda the white shirt guy.
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flyteck In reply to BridgetLovejoy [2018-12-16 05:05:20 +0000 UTC]
Most of them are in their 30s-40s, with the youngest being in their mid/late 20s. Some young people are pretty stubborn too though.
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BridgetLovejoy In reply to flyteck [2018-12-16 11:31:00 +0000 UTC]
But Louis is 14 right? Tianna must have been lonely with no one else her age around. =<
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flyteck In reply to BridgetLovejoy [2018-12-16 12:56:08 +0000 UTC]
They still hung out a fair bit. He was 7 when she was born, so they grew up together. They were both born there.
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