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Published: 2006-01-09 08:53:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 123; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description I need to get it out
But it stays within
No matter how I shout
I feel it beneath my skin
(Ever there, Always near)

Creeping, roaring, seeping, searing
     Burning me away
Weeping, scouring, reaping, fearing
     Be this as it may

I have been
And now I am
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Comments: 5

Stone-Tears [2006-01-14 03:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, it's hrd to get a good rhyming parttern. With this one the sudden change has a strong effect.

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Fooled In reply to Stone-Tears [2006-01-14 09:40:28 +0000 UTC]

glad you liked it. thank you for fav!

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Stone-Tears In reply to Fooled [2006-01-14 22:24:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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Sockerdricka [2006-01-09 14:52:40 +0000 UTC]

This one's good. or.. should I saw, I really like it.

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Fooled In reply to Sockerdricka [2006-01-09 18:21:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you glad someone did. and thanks for the fav.

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