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Published: 2010-03-12 02:30:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 115; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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A boy prepares for the fall,A nameless figure above them all,
And I watch as he weeps,
For my mistake he must leap,
He's so far above us all,
Like a sun shining down,
Too bad it's about to set,
With no moon to take its place,
And oh how I will miss his glow,
There's an empty place upon his throne,
It was never truly his home,
And I watch and I weep,
My feet give away,
And I'm falling now.
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Comments: 7
TalhinxovxL3v1tat10n [2010-03-14 14:19:51 +0000 UTC]
man.
i see this as your story of a boy until the last line where the boy becomes you. Then again this could have been your intention or not, still, this is an extremely good and emotional piece.
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ForgetingDecember In reply to TalhinxovxL3v1tat10n [2010-03-14 14:37:01 +0000 UTC]
thanks for complements and faving it and i have no clue what my intention was i never really know what i write until its been wrote.... im not sure if that makes sense.
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TalhinxovxL3v1tat10n In reply to ForgetingDecember [2010-03-14 18:50:14 +0000 UTC]
lol it makes sense i do the same thing
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ForgetingDecember In reply to TalhinxovxL3v1tat10n [2010-03-14 19:38:17 +0000 UTC]
is there anything i could say that wouldnt make sense to you???
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TalhinxovxL3v1tat10n In reply to ForgetingDecember [2010-03-14 19:39:32 +0000 UTC]
not really
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ForgetingDecember In reply to TalhinxovxL3v1tat10n [2010-03-14 19:40:15 +0000 UTC]
¿Qué tal este?
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TalhinxovxL3v1tat10n In reply to ForgetingDecember [2010-03-14 19:40:48 +0000 UTC]
lol lets talk on fb
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