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Published: 2010-03-05 19:35:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 297; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Why are you standing there?With your reflection set aside?
Your silhouette will turn to white
and swallow you whole
and i will be alone, with your memory
wrapped tight around my finger.
Yet here I am now, stuck to the ground.
Im attached by a string to your affection,
swinging off the edge by a strand of attention.
You should let your gaze wash over me;
turn to me and breathe on to my skin,
but im untouched now,
tortured as you study me.
Yet here I am now, stuck by your side.
Something is poetic here, hanging in the air.
You feel like a magnet, pulling me closer.
Your beauty controls me now
and as you grip my heart, i read your eyes.
i am entranced now,
your mind wrapped tight around my own.
Here I am now, resolute by your side.
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Comments: 2
ExplosiveChalk [2010-03-07 01:43:57 +0000 UTC]
i honestly don't quite know how to explain it, but i absolutely love your choice of words. just simple words and phrases really make an impact on me, such as "swinging off the edge by a strand of attention." excellent work!
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ForYourself In reply to ExplosiveChalk [2010-03-07 20:16:23 +0000 UTC]
Haha thanks muchXD it's not often I get comments as extensive as yours. It means alotXD
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