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Foxhawkarts — Pyukumuku by-nc-nd

Published: 2016-12-11 22:13:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2030; Favourites: 105; Downloads: 0
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Description Eyyy so it's been a while since i haven't upload anything (SORRYYY). This one is one of my favorite of the new pokemons in sun and moon. He's a tough little guy. This is still kinda rough but i wanted to upload it like that. Hope you guys like it! If you want me to draw your favorite pokemon, message me
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venomew2 [2017-06-15 13:30:25 +0000 UTC]

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Some of the shading looks a bit off, and don't get me wrong the lighting in this picture is outstanding but I think the tail (or whatever Pyukumuku's tail is) is a bit bright considering where it is regarding the light source. Also the side nearest to the light source should be a bit lighter, the edge closest to the "sun" (which is what I think your light source is) should have the pretty intense shine. I can understand why you didn't make it very intense as to not fade out the mouth but you know, just mentioning it.

On some of the spines the edges look kinda faded, this could be a stylistic choice but to me it stands out when looking at the rest of the body. Same thing with the mouth.

In the for-ground there are some bubbles that don't look like they're apart of the picture. It's noticeable but it doesn't make the entire picture look bad it just stands out to me.

Overall this looks beautiful. Plain and simple. Definitely one of the better pieces of pokemon fan art I've seen. Just noticed some things about it and saw you were asking for feedback.

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Foxhawkarts In reply to venomew2 [2017-06-19 12:25:13 +0000 UTC]

Honestly thank you very much ! I like that you actualy gave me advices instead of just criticizing I'm kinda stuck in a point in my drawings where i don't know how to improve and comments like yours help me destroy that blockage! I admit I shoudve put a lot more details to the background tho xD I didn't really know how to draw the bubbles either. Thank you so much, really apreciated

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venomew2 In reply to Foxhawkarts [2017-06-21 23:30:40 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I've reached that point too, every time I get a comment its always something like,"Oh wow that looks great!", or,"Great job I really like the -insert something minor here-" You never really get anything that tells you whats wrong with it or how to make it better. I couldn't just leave ya hanging there, especially when you're asking for criticism. Nice to see someone with the same problem!

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Bluekitten199 [2017-09-11 15:08:29 +0000 UTC]

With that little tail, it looks more like a sea bunny than a sea cucumber, it's adorable!!!>w<

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Foxhawkarts In reply to Bluekitten199 [2017-09-11 18:54:28 +0000 UTC]

Awww thank you ^<^

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AstralStarbolt [2017-06-17 01:28:57 +0000 UTC]

Adorable.

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Foxhawkarts In reply to AstralStarbolt [2017-06-19 12:25:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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AstralStarbolt In reply to Foxhawkarts [2017-06-19 13:59:16 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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cyberzilla00 [2017-06-14 02:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Adorably awesome!

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Foxhawkarts In reply to cyberzilla00 [2017-06-14 02:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you a lot

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LittleSpringroll [2016-12-17 17:30:41 +0000 UTC]

I love Pyukumuku! Let's all go Pyukumuku chucking together XD
Its eye looks a little weird to me, but that might just be because I'm used to seeing it without any light It looks very cute though!! And I love the coloring!

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Gimmickry [2016-12-12 11:09:48 +0000 UTC]

I love the shading in this: you've really captured the underwater atmosphere, I think! 

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Foxhawkarts In reply to Gimmickry [2016-12-13 15:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much I think it looks peaceful especially with the bubbles xD

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tinystalker [2016-12-12 04:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Cute, simple yet very detailed. I love it

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Foxhawkarts In reply to tinystalker [2016-12-13 15:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you very much I could have done way more details but i felt a bit lazy xD

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tinystalker In reply to Foxhawkarts [2016-12-15 17:37:57 +0000 UTC]

no, this is perfect the way it is.

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MysticSeraphKid [2016-12-11 22:29:23 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWH!!!

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CeriMond [2016-12-11 22:14:38 +0000 UTC]

This is adorable! Simply adorable. And very fitting for this Pokemon. 

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Foxhawkarts In reply to CeriMond [2016-12-11 22:15:37 +0000 UTC]

Awww thank you very much ! I agree with you xD

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CeriMond In reply to Foxhawkarts [2016-12-11 22:17:40 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome.
(The most adorable thing about this pokemon is that it will always get washed ashore..)

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