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Foxpower93 — A body, two souls and a fluffy tail part. 1
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Description Somewhere, in a normal classroom, a normal class starts, it was a Tuesday morning and the time was warm for the season in this little Canadian city. Despite the fact the students barely come back from their vacation there was a cheery atmosphere, the teens were telling each other happy new year and compare their gift, completely normal… well almost. In this class there was one boy named Jeff not fitting the perfectly normal sense, sure from outside he look like all the others, bushy brown hairs, in average height, wearing glasses, brown hair, he didn't get lot of friend because he had some… let say personal reasons to stay away from the other, but in his closest friend there was Zoey the school female athlete idol.

"Hey, how was your vacation this year Jeff?" ask Zoey to Jeff who sited at his desk

"No much Zoe" he answer using her nickname "The usual, family party at my house, I didn't receive too much gift most was money I might spend on games"

Jeff was living in an old house a bit on the outskirt of the town, it was bigger than most of the suburb house, but yes farther.

"No! I want us to spend the money on a new ball the one we get is old and messy" say a girl voice only Jeff could hear "Oh! And sweet please let buy lot of sweet with it! No! No! Tofu! Lot of tofu!"

Jeff only clenches his teeth and tries to ignore the voice he knew quite well. Zoey notices his reaction and immediately guess what it was, after all only the two of them knew about the abnormality of Jeff.

"Let me guess she is begging you to buy sweet?" asked the girl

"Yes that with tofu and a new ball" the boy answer sighing

Indeed behind his apparent normality Jeff was hiding a secret most of people on earth cannot comprehend. From the day of his birth until now his body hosts two souls. The one being Jeff the normal boy and the other being Mia a girl, or more accurately a kitsune a mystical beast able to take human form. It was like this for as long he can remember him and Mia used to play together when he was a kid, in his dream and also in reality, because back then she could time to time appear before him, but no one except him see her. Naturally his parents only believed it was an imaginary friend and after he get old enough they even pay a psychoanalyst so he get rid of her. All his family and friends never believed Mia was real, except his grandfather, who was the one telling him his body hosts two souls and Zoey that witness Mia doing in the years. His grandfather died several years ago from sickness and old age so at this day only Zoey and him knew the existence of Mia, reducing now the number to them two.

"Heya Mia, I'll make sure he buys you lot of tofu and some nice toys too for you" say Zoey holding her laugh into a giggle

"No, the money was given to me, I'll buy video games with it" answer the boy annoyed his friend took Mia side again

"Hey! They give the money to us, not only you we need to share and videogames isn't healthy, you need to go play outside more often." Argue back Mia "Come on lazy Jeff, buy a new ball and healthy tofu instead of boring video games"

They both shared the same body, but it didn't mean they both had the same opinions on everything. It was like twins, but with only one body most of the time they thought differently.

"It was written: to Jeff. Not to Jeff and Mia on the card though" say the boy, having tough time sharing his gift with his kitsune soul sister.

"Alright, if you don't want to I'll scribble in your note book" Say Mia

On this the right eye of Jeff turn red and he start to smirk, but from only the right side. Zoey immediately notice it and back off a bit. Those were the sign Mia had literally took over the right side of Jeff body and in most of the time, it only meant troubles for Jeff. Indeed, like all kitsune Mia was quite… mischievous when let loose. In the past she often took over Jeff right side and even sometime his entire body to pull practical pranks on teachers, his parents, his friends and even Zoey.

The right hand of Jeff reaches his backpack and get out a permanent marker and his mathematic notebook. With only it thumb it pop off the marker cap and get it closer of the precious notes. Jeff face was quite intriguing; the half with the red eye was smirking maliciously when the other half was panicking. Zoey on her side only stand back looking at the internal conflict happening before her eyes.

"Wouha! Mia, no stop please I need this for the next exam!" beg Jeff afraid side

"Will you buy tofu and a new ball so we can play outside?" asked back his smirking side

Both had the same voice, but the intonation was clearly different.

"I-I will come on Mia, don't do it" finally concede the left side

"Good choice" says the right side, but right after this the right hand turn the marker and drew on Jeff face three whiskers, before dropping the pen.

After this his red eyes took back it deep brown color showing Mia had let his right side go only letting a shaking from rage Jeff… with whiskers. Zoey that had witness everything was doing her best to not laugh hard and took the marker winking to Jeff before unleashing her laugher, attracting attention. The other student turn and well several of them start laughing seeing Jeff face, only the teacher seem angry, even though she was hiding the little smile she had.

"Jeff what is this?" She asked

"It my fault teacher" immediately said Zoey, showing the marker up "Sorry about that it just I didn't see Jeff for so long I couldn't help myself"

The teacher awkwardly smiles and tells her it was alright for this time asking Jeff to not let her does this and goes wash his face in the restroom. Jeff simply nods and walks out. That it how the two worked nowadays, each time Mia decided to do something too obvious Zoey would take the blame, it was an easy way for them to keep Mia a secret from the others and maintain the sane image of Jeff. They knew by experience that people tend to not listen whatever they tell them, so instead of taking a bipolar role Jeff put a gentleman or well prank victim facade it was better than the crazy guy one.

He gets in the restroom and start washing his face when he sees Mia reflection instead of his one putting her finger to mimic his drawn whiskers.

"Look we are the same, kyon~" she say laughing

"Hahahaha… really funny stupid fox" answer Jeff annoyed by her childish behavior

"Don't be this grouchy, it was just a little joke" defend herself the fox in the mirror

Jeff look at the girl with an annoyed face, only to see she was smiling back at him, they were so different, mentally and physically, her long light brown hair, her red eyes with hint of slit pupil and her modified Shinto priestess clothes, were they really meant to be in the same body at the first place? No, Mia was probably his best friend next to Zoey, he shouldn't doubt that, like his grandfather told him before it was fate that they were both tied this way. Jeff smile a bit amazed how such a childish joke could make Mia this happy.

"That is the Jeff I know" say the fox girl, glad to see her soul brother smile

"But seriously Mia you need to stop making this kind of joke in public, I'm in last year of high school and it weird for a guy of my age to let a girl draw in my face" explain Jeff

"That is because you refuse to buy me tofu with our money" reply Mia, crossing her arms under her breasts "When I take over your body I want to move, do something video games aren't helping and your body need exercise, you will die young if you stay on your butt playing with those machine all day!"

Jeff surprise himself thinking back to what his grandfather told him before passing away. The two of them fate, the way his body is simply an incubator for Mia, once he would die Mia will have her own body as a full fledge kitsune.

Immediately after this though he get bring back to reality by Mia words "Don't think that!" she had just said

"Hmm?" fake Jeff well aware they could both felt each other thought

"You are not an incubator Jeff, you are my soul brother." She said with a serious face she rarely shown in the past "Remember what grandpa said, for this life we both share your body and in the other we will both share mine and when it happen I promise to buy you any videogames you like, so stop having those bad thought ok? I'll be always there for you, just like grandpa said we will always be there for each other."

Jeff immediately felt bad to have thought that even if it was for a second, Mia would never wish him pain, for all those years she was the person he was the closer of, it was hard to be any closer of those two anyway.

"Yeah, sorry Mia you are right we are both soul siblings" Jeff answer smiling at her

"Yush! Now let me help you to wash your face!" she said and immediately Jeff reflection get back to normal, only so he can see both his eyes turning red and his pupil getting into little slits

"Aha! Kitsune technique 162! Kistu rubbing!" said Jeff now full controlled by Mia taking some soap and start rubbing his marked cheek

"You just make up the name and number, do you?" asked the boy inside his head

"Maybe" his mouth said with a light chuckle


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A few minutes later Jeff walk back in class, his face clean, but a bit red due to harsh rubbing Mia gives his cheeks. A few giggle and chuckle welcome him, before he makes it back to his desk, next to a window.

"Let me guess a kitsune technique?" asks Zoey, not really hiding her fun

"Number 162, kitsu rubbing" simply answers Jeff

"Ah yes I see it now" his friend simply reply

The remaining morning pass without big incident, during the pause Jeff fill up the hole in his notes with Zoey help and the English class was pretty calm even though Mia decide to mentally add "desu~" at each of the English teacher sentence. Jeff makes his best to not laugh during the class, despite Mia mockeries on how the teacher voice sounded childish. Lunchtime arrives and the two friends sit down at the cafeteria with each of them their homemade meal.

"Why were you laughing in your beard during Mrs. Peterson class?" asked Zoey curious of her friend attitude

"Oh, just Mia messing around as usual" answer Jeff biting in his special egg salad and tofu sandwich "She was saying desu each time she finish a sentence part, just like the kids in anime"

"I see" reply his friend giggling "She sure is energetic today"

"Hmm you are right" noticed Jeff "Any reason you are this hyper today Mia?"

"I don't know, I just feel full of energy. It party time! Mia is in the place!" answer the kitsune in his head

"She said that she don't know, but feel full of energy" tell Jeff to Zoey

"Oh? Well I'm glad for you Mia, but don't put Jeff in too much trouble. Ah! I know why she is this way." Reply the girl "It full moon tonight, that is probably it"

"Isn't this for werewolves?" asked Jeff doubting his friend

"For kitsune too Jeff, sheesh it not because all girls go crazy on werewolves you need to assume I am too" say with a sigh Zoey "From the old legend full moons give kitsune more power that is probably why she is hyper, I can't believe you didn't knew this. You are the one sharing your body with one after all"

"Eeeehh… right well I didn't knew thanks, but how did you knew this anyway?" asked the boy

"I do my research a long time ago, you know to help you both, I am your friend after all" she said going back to her lunch

"Oh I see, well thanks, seem you are hyper because of that Mia" he reply

"That's make sense! Wow Zoe you know so much stuff on my specie, even I didn't knew well I never meet any kitsune before so I guess I couldn't! Hey, Jeff let me take over your body so I can hug her!" asked the hyper active fox in only a few seconds

"Ah! Not in public Mia, people might misunderstand" refused Jeff

"Might misunderstand what?" asked Zoey unable to follow those two conversations

"No-nothing, just Mia wanting to hug you" said Jeff "She really is hyper today"

"I wouldn't have mind…" answer Zoey

"What?" asked Jeff, which was too bothered by Mia hyper speech to listen.

"Nothing, I asked if you would be ok with her" reply Zoey

"Oh well I'll manage" he simply answer

The remaining of the day was pretty normal, Mia keep messing around more than usual doodling stuff in his notes and making puns with people name, but it wasn't anything big. The last bell ring and the three walked home. Mia taking over Jeff mouth lot of time to comments on pretty much anything, the snow, the new shops and the dog that was scaring her. More the time pass, more she was messing around. It was bothering Jeff a little, but he decide to put it aside, after all she usually was calm… well more calm she had the right to be excited once in a while. When they reach the city outskirt him and Zoey split and he start to climb up the hill where his house was, it was a long walk and well the hill was hard to climb.

"Almost… at half of it" said Jeff panting, Mia was maybe right on the fact he wasn't exercising enough

"Let me do this!" said Mia taking over his body and start running "I'll climb this slope in a few seconds!!!"

"Mia wait, you are using my body energy!" Jeff try to tell her mentally but the kitsune was way too much into her running to listen.

Jeff body was running up the slope fast… really fast, so fast he overrun a car that had pass next to him a minute ago. Jeff was amazed to see his body running at this speed, was that even ok? Wouldn't it hurt his muscles to go this fast?! He couldn’t ponder about it too much because in a record time he was in front of his house.

"Tadaa~!" say Mia giving him back control over his body "it the kitsune technique 83 the Kitsu slop climbing!"

"Yeah sure" comment Jeff, unlocking his door and walking inside

He barely closes the door that he gets hit by an incredible feeling of dizziness and sleepiness. He immediately understood it was probably the after hit of the insane sprinting Mia just did.

"Gah! So… so tired" say Jeff holding himself into the wall to not fall on the floor

"Wouha! You are right I may have abuse just a tiny little bit" say Mia

Jeff stumbles to his room, he awkwardly climbs the stairs, open is door and heavily let himself fall in his bed. He immediately falls asleep and gets a black dream, Mia probably fall asleep too on her side. They both sleep until some grumble wake them up, their stomach grumbling. Jeff wake up, pushing his fluffy pillow aside he get up and walk downstairs, the full moon light was enough for him to walk through hallway without opening the light, he walk through the hallway his hair brushing his back when he realize something… a fluffy pillow? He didn't own a fluffy pillow. He slowly turn around and see something moving behind him was it him or his pillow follow him? He rub his sleepy eyes and look again… it was a tail… a fluffy fox tail. It took a few seconds before he fully realize what it mean. Without a second thought he ran to the bathroom and look at himself in the mirror only to see Mia looking back at him. Why was he looking exactly like her?!
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Comments: 176

ghost9801 In reply to ??? [2014-01-11 01:49:53 +0000 UTC]

okay ^_^

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LittleMissTG In reply to ??? [2014-01-10 19:52:39 +0000 UTC]

hmmm sounds like this is going to be a verry interesting story... I LIKE IT!!!

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Foxpower93 In reply to LittleMissTG [2014-01-10 20:58:09 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU!

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griever789 In reply to ??? [2014-01-10 14:56:40 +0000 UTC]

Hm a intresting dynamic with the two soul thing, the very eneragitic female side with the very introverted male side, I,m intrested in seeing where this goes and for a story beginning that is a great thing to acomplish.

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Foxpower93 In reply to griever789 [2014-01-10 17:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I really wanted to show how much Mia and Jeff were different even though they lived in the same body for all their lives

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griever789 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 17:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Hm kind of intresting that the other soul preety much screws up his social life since he can't really get close to people without his excitricies becoming obivious. Kind of describes a closeted transgender well, hav a hard time get close to people in fear their secret will be discovered

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Foxpower93 In reply to griever789 [2014-01-10 17:38:27 +0000 UTC]

Well I alway try to make my character have really human like reaction. If you read all my stories you will see most of the character have really logical train of thought (except for those affected by mind change) and there it was more the fear of him being see as crazy that push him shelling up, after all who would believe you share your body with a fox girl, no one would in this current world.

You may be right about the similar reaction to closeted transgender, but I cannot tell because I never meet one in my daily life, nor do I am myself. (If this message sound harsh it wasn't on purpose I just wanted to say I truly never see a closeted transgender person)

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griever789 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 17:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Meh don't worry I don't think it's harsh, just giving my impressions.

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Foxpower93 In reply to griever789 [2014-01-10 18:10:52 +0000 UTC]

ok and yeah I say that because sometime what I may write harsh things

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CPUIceHeart In reply to ??? [2014-01-10 14:37:12 +0000 UTC]

this is gonna be good, keep it up 

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Foxpower93 In reply to CPUIceHeart [2014-01-10 17:15:03 +0000 UTC]

don't worry I will

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blackviper1 In reply to ??? [2014-01-10 11:16:41 +0000 UTC]

Good to see you writing again 

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 17:14:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I think I get my inspiration back

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 19:08:29 +0000 UTC]

good to hear, can't wait to see where the laws of narrative causality take you.... i've been reading a bit to many fanfics 

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 19:22:41 +0000 UTC]

I see and well only time will tell

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 19:33:56 +0000 UTC]

True, I also found this nice web novel. Really enjoying it

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 20:58:27 +0000 UTC]

oh what is it about?

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 21:15:33 +0000 UTC]

It's called Worm, it's kind of a realisticish super hero story. Very good actually

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 21:16:54 +0000 UTC]

worm like the tactic game worm?

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 21:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Nope, not sure exactly what it relates to in the story. Probably due to the main character's power being the control of insects.


Which might sound weak but so far she has been pretty scary with them

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 21:37:21 +0000 UTC]

insects are the smaller but the most efficiency killer of this planet

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 21:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Yup, now imagine a swarm of them covering you, biting, stinging and forcing their way into you through your ears, mouth, nose and any wounds.


Trick that makes her really dangerous is that she is guiding the insects with a human level of intelligence, which means they'll target weak points.


Then you get to the other powers in the setting which is everything from Super-intuition to shooting emotion beams and more. It's actually rather interesting

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 22:16:28 +0000 UTC]

emotion beams? wow XD it look original that is for sure

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 22:21:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah a lot powers in the story are pretty original. There is even a guy who has a teleport which leaves behind a temporary clone (it disintegrates within a few seconds) which he uses to spam suicide bomb teleport attacks 

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 22:55:29 +0000 UTC]

oh?! clever

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 22:57:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah a lot of the powers are good because the guys using them are creative with them.


Then you have the Tinkers, their powers basically make them good with technology with a specialty. One who specialized in bombs managed to make a nuke sized bomb that was also a country wide EMP from various household items

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 23:05:53 +0000 UTC]

EMP bombs are so useful nowaday when pretty much everything is electronic

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 23:14:13 +0000 UTC]

True, especially when it is enough to take out half the electronic's in north america. Plus also nuking a city, kind of glad she got stopped before she used it

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 23:15:52 +0000 UTC]

would be nice you tell me the name before spoiling me the whole story XD

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 23:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Ahh sorry, don't worry that bit was all background so I haven't spoiled anything important 

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 23:23:31 +0000 UTC]

ok, so what is the name?

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 23:28:23 +0000 UTC]

Of the Novel?

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Foxpower93 In reply to blackviper1 [2014-01-10 23:54:27 +0000 UTC]

yes

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blackviper1 In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-11 09:15:42 +0000 UTC]

parahumans.wordpress.com/

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Ch1biKuro In reply to ??? [2014-01-10 06:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Its awesome! I truly love your work Foxpower93 ^w^

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Foxpower93 In reply to Ch1biKuro [2014-01-10 06:47:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks, was my first third person omniscient narrator I wrote in english, I hope it not too bad

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Ch1biKuro In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 07:01:44 +0000 UTC]

It was allot of fun to read x3 although I hope the turning into Mia was because of the affect of the moon and not because she accidently killed him o-o

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Foxpower93 In reply to Ch1biKuro [2014-01-10 07:29:24 +0000 UTC]

all this... in next part XD

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Ch1biKuro In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 14:44:41 +0000 UTC]

>w, much better than mine at least xP, you cant notice that much mostly because of this awesome spell check  

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Foxpower93 In reply to Ch1biKuro [2014-01-10 17:14:05 +0000 UTC]

spell check is a bless

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Ch1biKuro In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 22:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Yesh it is ^w^

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Foxpower93 In reply to Ch1biKuro [2014-01-10 23:24:04 +0000 UTC]

even word correcting some grammar, that is a great helping hand for me

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Ch1biKuro In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-11 00:28:05 +0000 UTC]

I noes, I was just kidding but I have been trying to think of something to wright for awhile now and every time Iv tryed I get a writers block But! and this is a big BUTT owo I have finaly got a good idea and my writers block is gone and yes it would be sad if you never wrote anything D: 

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Ch1biKuro In reply to Ch1biKuro [2014-01-11 00:28:52 +0000 UTC]

pretend this isnt here o-o

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Ch1biKuro In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-10 23:42:46 +0000 UTC]

Well I hope and wish to see more from you in the future ^w^ I think I have read all of the main types of Tg stories that I enjoy from what I can see/ find o-o now time to start writing my own!... im afraid o-o

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Foxpower93 In reply to Ch1biKuro [2014-01-11 00:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow well I'll try my best to keep writing them.

And don't be, I'm sure you can do great stories

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Ch1biKuro In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-11 00:05:15 +0000 UTC]

Yesh keep writing! x3 work slave, work! o3o

*points an accusing finger* Lier! you just want to eat my soul!

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Foxpower93 In reply to Ch1biKuro [2014-01-11 00:16:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm not a slave I love what I'm doing o3o'

I'm a kitsune I would prefer fried tofu and well I did start writing because I see other people here write, so don't be afraid and dare on or you might pass on this opportunity. Imagine I never start writing o.o' the horror!

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Ch1biKuro In reply to Foxpower93 [2014-01-11 00:29:03 +0000 UTC]

I noes, I was just kidding  but I have been trying to think of something to wright for awhile now and every time Iv tryed I get a writers block But! and this is a big BUTT owo I have finaly got a good idea and my writers block is gone  and yes it would be sad if you never wrote anything D: 

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Foxpower93 In reply to Ch1biKuro [2014-01-11 00:35:00 +0000 UTC]

good, I'll make sure to read it when you post it here ^_^

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