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foxtrot08 In reply to Barrowman2012 [2020-03-29 18:37:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you for the kind words! The Dad might feel regret that he is using his daughter the way that he is and convincing her to kill a human. He may be tiny and deserved to die, but he is still a human being and that will make him a little more fearful of his own daughters once he himself fully shrinks. So he kind of witnesses that both of his daughters just kind of "okay" with it and didn't care. 

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Barrowman2012 In reply to foxtrot08 [2020-03-31 06:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Interesting. I like the psychology of size difference, size change. So this stuff is the stuff for me.

If I saw this as a show on ID-Discovery Investigation with actors showing what the murderer did, I wouldn't mind that he gets what coming to him or her.

But I would never be for crush punishment, for me that would feel weird. So many thoughts I would have.
I have a feeling this is going to be a very interesting psychological story. I see you take notice of the small subtleties and changes in everything that shrinking/size difference/size change will bring in this setting. I look forward to the development and what they are thinking and feeling along the way, etc.

The world itself, by the way, is interesting. It scares the hell out of me if the government would force people like that to submit and in real life, I think many would do just that.

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foxtrot08 In reply to Barrowman2012 [2020-04-01 04:12:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it! I hope you will continue finding the story entertaining as that is what I aim to do. But I do have to give you a bit of a warning that this story is kind of dark, so expect to see a lot of cruel things. My personal favorite is Crush. So naturally, you may find that a recurring thing. But there will be a lot of variety that I am hoping to include so I can try and please as many audiences as I can.

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Barrowman2012 In reply to foxtrot08 [2020-04-01 05:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I have seen that now. Who knows. I will try. I'm more for the phycological stuff. The crushing of things is in my story like cars and also the occasional human in a battle. Not too often for me for a living creature. I like that these things have weight to them, a significant impact on the reader and things need to have a reason.

I see you try to do that. That gives the act more impact if you convince the reader that your characters are humans and the action is believable. The motivation is money and that he has done horrible things. The second is already enough and the first one strengthens it. Apologies for my bit over-analyzing.

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foxtrot08 In reply to Barrowman2012 [2020-04-02 19:36:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh no worries. I am very much open to any analysis, feedback, criticism, etc... So I really appreciate that you or anyone really to take the time to provide them. 

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