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Yup! It's finally here!
Page 1 of Forgotten's chapter 2. This is actually the first time I've gotten to chapter 2 of any comic I've created 
Kinda weird, I have to sayI know, not a lotta words...but that's because a scene like this doesn't need em. And in case you didn't notice the black gutters, yes, this is still Naruto's flashback/retelling of what happened on their mission
Page 2 will be out sometime...but not until I can catch up on a few other things first.
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well its a great effect that you did think of it. :3
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Amazing coloring and great page <3
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WHOHOOOOO?! An update 
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The way you colored this page is freakin epic...!
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if he hurts hinata...*points gun at JN's head*
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*points gun at you* That's the whole point! Naruto feels guilt because Hinata DID get hurt! Just keep reading.. you'll understand..
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i know it is, buuuut D:
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I know... It's sad.. Hinata will pull through.. but with no memories.. or the memories repressed. Thus the title.
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But she'll get them back.. otherwise no happy ending!
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awsome page^^ i'm so glad u finnaly begon on the chap.2
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I like the colouring, drawing and all. But I thought Hinata would be more scared than Naruto.
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Yeah, she was, but this only shows the point where she's noticing a change in Naruto. Kinda hard to have surprise and fear in one frame XD
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You have to remember this is a story told from Naruto's point of view, he wasn't really noticing how Hinata reacted to seeing those girls be ripped apart. He was mainly focused on how he thought Hinata would react to him going Kyuubi.
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Very nice, and...FINALLY! Gah, I was about to start throwing rocks at your window. not that I know where you live...I'm not a stalker! -shifty eyes-
jk, jk.
My only critism: If Hinata just saw two girls get ripped apart, shouldn't her face in panel one be more...horrified?
Just my two cents.
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lol so THAT'S what that noise was...
Yeah, she was horrified. But this page only shows the point where she notices a change in Naruto. The horrified stuff came between chapters XD
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Okay. Thanks.
Oh, and your furniture looks great from behind the bush in your front yard. XD
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As I told , you have to remember this is a story told from Naruto's point of view, he wasn't really noticing how Hinata reacted to seeing those girls be ripped apart. He was mainly focused on how he thought Hinata would react to him going Kyuubi.
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Ah. Sorry. -palms forehead- Didn't think of that.
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It's okay. Now you know right?
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nice art work on this one ^^. cant wait for more ^^
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Awesomeness
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yeshhhhhhhhhhh! love it! finally the page is out! TT-TT.
is it made in manga studio debut 4? i just got mine today
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lol nope, just good old Photoshop CS3 Extended
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grrrrrrr! it costs like 500$! manga studio is only 50$, see the difference? 
you: "Yeah, photoshop CS3 rocks!"
Me: TT-TT grrr...
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lol I got mine from my friend so it was free
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lucky you *Glare* gimme! XD.
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finally it took a while but the fruits of your labor is deeply appreatiaed good work keep it up
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WOOHOO!!!!1 Finally! Been waiting for this for awhile. Awesome job.
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Yes yes, The new chaper begind, for end, i am a long time a wait this chaper, is so very good, i am wating the next page, really, your doujin is a very very good.
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Awesome! The baddies remind me of Tonberry
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What's about to happen!? AAAAAARRRGGG I can't wait!
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