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Finally, the next page is done. Been working off and on with this thing for a long while now. As you saw from my journal, I finally sat down and focused on coloring and finishing it tonight. If you missed the show, you can still go to my livestream account through the link in my journal and look up the on-demand of it there.
Don't have much time at the moment, so I'll update this with links and some comments on the page itself when I do.
Enjoy!
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Naruto (c) Masashi Kishimoto
Art (c) Me
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heh thanks ^^ I will continue soon-ish lol
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Wow seems like you have a lot of things going on. I'm sure you'll do an amazing job. 
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when you start again to do this? Its very good but is unfinished... i whanted to see more... can you make me that?
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It's coming in the first set of comics that I'm preparing for. Check my past journals for an entry pertaining to that. It'll be titled with something regarding "Comics"
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yaaaaayy been MONTHS UPON MONTHS...when is the next one comin out
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Glad u like ^^ More to come soon
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plz?
But seriously- I'm loving this.
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Thanks ^^ MOAR to come soon
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aw, I can't wait for more <3 it's reall good
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Thanks :3 More will come soon ^^
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I wont lie. I hope you continue on with this story. Next to Naru/Hina chronicles and Naruto Tensei; this is one of my favorite naruto Fanfic's.
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hehe wow such an honor ^_^ Don't worry, I will most definitely be continuing this
Confused? XD Here's how it works.
I currently have a total of SIX comic series, including three original comics, and three fancomics. Each of them seems to have their own fanbase as well. So, in order to please everyone to the best of my ability, the system I've come up with will ensure that no fan goes too long without their favorite series, and that comics will come at a near-continuous rate.
The plan is to do 5 pages of each series in a block I'm calling "Sets". And, with simple math, 5 pages for 6 comics gives us 30 pages. That's well over a standard manga chapter ^_^ So, even if I posted updates daily, I can count on about a month's worth of comics right there. Obviously with a 3/7 day update schedule I'll have about double that amount of time.
But 30 pages is a lot to do, right? It is, but with approx 60 days per set to do them before the previous set runs out, that should be more than enough time to get the next set ready ^_^
So does that makes sense? I hope so lol
The ONLY drawback to this operation that I'm setting up is that I obviously can't pull the first set out of thin air XP So for the first set there WILL be a bit of a waiting time, in which I'll do the thumbnails for the entire first chapter of each comic, as well as the 30 pages. But after that it should all be gravy :3 Since doing a chapter of thumbnails for each comic sets me up with about 120 comic pages XD That's three whole sets right there.
Sorry for the long comment 
Thanks for your continued support ^^
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Well drawn and colored by the way. Good use of shading with Hinata. Makes it look life like. Naruto could have been drawn a little better though. Overall its good.
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You were doing great why did you stop making?I was hoping you would for a month and 3 weeks it was getting better and better I guess you don't have time to make anymore....
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Nah, I DO have time to make it, it's just the system that I'm setting up that's preventing pages from getting posted.
Read this journal for more info: [link]
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hmm... i like this style, you do some very clean panels...the only thing i could comment on is that Hinata doesnt look scared in that last panel, more sad, or angry
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Thanks ^^ And about that frame...Naruto says that he "must have scared her so badly" but that doesn't mean all she feels is fear. I tried to make her expression show the much more complicated emotions she's feeling. She's more scared FOR Naruto than OF him.
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i see, that makes more sense
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NOO!!!
next one!!
that's all i gotta say XD
really good.. really plausible too. 
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lol that's what a lot of people say XDD The first part, at least lol
So, I'll tell you what I tell them, I'll get it done soon XD It's just waiting for it's turn in this set lol I AM working on SIX or more comics all at once, after all
I'm glad u like it though ^_^
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hahaha..
well take u time^^
dont want u to overwork urself ^-^
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awe and just when it was getting good, going to be watching you for an update
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sorries
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This looks awsome!...The only thing i would change though is that i would make Hinata look more scared. Im mean im sure she would cry and all, but that truly would be a terrifying sight to see, and that fear should show in her face 
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lol yeah, I guess it kinda does look like that ^^ I guess my style lends to more subtle emotions. She's so scared and confused by Naruto's tranformation that it's physically and emotionally overwhelming her, causing her to shiver and cry. So she's not really just scared like you would be if a knife was flying at your face, but more emotionally scared for what's happening to the person she cares about most.
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yea i see your point
Oh p.s. Happy New Year!!
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Haha sorry i didnt mean to put an angery face on my comment...
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hurry upeee!!!!! i cant wait!!! ^^ . . . . . PLZ!!!
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ahh poor Hinata
Can't wait for page 3!
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FINALLY! *choir singing in background*
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hey please i relly like the story could you work a litle more faster ??? just asking i dont want to presure you ...
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lol I know I know, you guys are really excited about this story, huh? ^^ Whether it'll ease your patience or not, here's my plan:
I'm currently working on getting five pages of each comic sketched out. I'll then go through and finish each one as well, all before posting anything. That way, I can actually post on a set schedule, and you guys won't have to worry about missed updates. Plus, having around 25 pages done in advance allows me to work on more pages while I still have those first pages to post, which again helps me to keep the updates constant and on time.
Unfortunately, this plan does mean that I won't be able to start posting pages for a little while right now. But when I do start posting them, then you won't have to worry about another long wait. So I think that's a good trade-off, don't you? ^_^
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ok im glad to here thet actualy you posted a page were hinata kisses narutos seal and i cant find the first page so please could you send me the pages and another question theres another comic of hinata saying GO AWAY to his father i dont understand it if you have time explain it plaese SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLISH IM LATINA im still learning
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Ah, both of those comics are actually commissions. They're both just illustrated scenes from the person's fanfiction. So, sorry, but there won't be any more of those two particular things. The kissing seal one is only that one page as well.
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aww thats to bad i love the pictures but queston would you like to work with me i can draw to but i dont know how to draw peope so i was wondering if you could work with me like i write the story and you draw it IT WOULD BE RELLY COOL im just suposing if you want to i havw many ides NARUSAKU SASUSAKU NARUHINA INO SAI whatever you want pleaseeeee im beging you TT
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heh, I'm sure that would be fun ^^ Unfortunately I already have too much on my plate. Taking on anything else would just be too much, sorry
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Yeah, it's kind of hard to unsee what ever he was doing to those bastards.
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