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Event 2: A Hard-Boiled Crisis
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Team Amber App: [link]
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Mission Details:
Master Zhu has lost his precious fireworks bag! Strangely enough, the contents, a load of fireworks, was left behind just inside of Creeping Forest. It MUST be retrieved and new-mother Peaches is on the job! After Sprout leaves Tao Village for a family visit to Sapling Village, Peaches is left behind to care for their egg on her own. Will the dangerous fireworks scramble the unborn baby pokemon?! Or will Peaches be able to juggle a mission AND child care??

Looks like it's time to call in some help!

Note: Because I did not join the guild in time, Team Amber was not able to participate in Mission 1, so there is no comic about it.

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Peaches' Adventure Log:
Prologue: Castaway - N/A
Mission 1
Mission 2 - Blood Bonds
Event 2 - A Hard-Boiled Crisis
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Another page done by yours truly XP

This was actually supposed to be colored by ForrellianLight of team Stormport, but she was unable to get it done. As such, I'll be coloring this one too asap. Kinda funny how all the uncolored ones are in a line like this.

Alrighty, so I think it's time I explained the main aspect of this part...Peaches fear of fire, aka Pyrophobia

I can't tell you too much of this one, cuz it has to do with the comic she originates from, Pokemon: RedAmber. But let's just say that Peaches has had a traumatic experience with fire before.

No...her parents NOR her siblings died in a fire lol In fact, it was thanks to Peaches herself that there were NO casualties of the fire that caused her fear. The root of her fear is the fact that because of that, SHE nearly became the only casualty of the blaze. The flashback frame there shows her as a Pichu, but that's more symbolic of how fire makes her feel....weak and helpless like a child.

She can handle small amounts of fire just fine, like a campfire or a Charmander's tail, even Zhu's chin flame doesn't bother her too much lol The main thing she's afraid of is the overwhelming and all-consuming HEAT that comes with fire. She feels suffocated by it and it causes her to freeze up completely. That's why when Luso squirted her with cool water it snapped her out of it a bit. She was still pretty shaken though, which is why she was startled by Slasher's attack with that burning stake, and as a result could do little more than block it from hitting her stomach or chest.

Some of you might also be thinking that she shouldn't be collapsed on the ground from one slash on the arm. The basis for that is I was trying to think along the lines of the pokemon games. A critical hit does double damage and ignores any stats or stat modifiers. Put that with the "fire element" added by the flaming stick, and it becomes a pretty huge blow to her HP. Peaches IS in her 40s on levels though, so she didn't faint from it.

Hmmm...not much else to say about this part except that I've never drawn more FIRE in my life lol

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Team Amber (c) Me
Team Heal Bell (c) Souzou-Kappukeki
Team Fireheart (c) DreamofSnow
Team Red Rose (c) Yume-jin
Team Stormport (c) ForrellianLight
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Comments: 30

RainbowFilled [2011-08-05 16:07:18 +0000 UTC]

;o; NOOO, OMG, PEACHES. HNNN, SLASHER NO SLASHING, YOU BIG BULLY! >_< THAT LAST PANEL HAS ME ALL RILED UP. LEMME AT 'IM, LEMME AT 'IM! >A< I'LL TEAR THAT WEAVILE TO SHREDS. *SHOTDEAD*

;_; Still, Peaches... o;o;o YOU MUST GET UP. FOR YOUR AND SPROUT'S CHILD, PLEASE GET UP!

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FoxxBrush In reply to RainbowFilled [2011-08-17 22:25:07 +0000 UTC]

lol her and Sprout's child? That sounds kinda wrong XDD

Haha well, from your reaction, the page did exactly what it intended

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Shippuden23 [2011-08-05 05:06:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this page was intense and a bit scary.

I think that’s a Deerling egg, am I right?

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FoxxBrush In reply to Shippuden23 [2011-08-16 18:41:05 +0000 UTC]

haha I'm not at liberty to tell you XP You'll see soon though!

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Dendris [2011-08-04 15:50:48 +0000 UTC]

YOU B*****D!!!
Wow, slow burning wood or what? XD (and yes I know it's raining X3)

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FoxxBrush In reply to Dendris [2011-08-17 22:18:29 +0000 UTC]

lol well, it's hard to tell, but he used his ice powers to keep the flames at bay while he held it XP

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Dendris In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-17 22:23:58 +0000 UTC]

Oooohhhh, I see...

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Sepent [2011-08-04 10:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear. D:

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MiaMaha [2011-08-04 07:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Aww....so Peaches has a fear of fire...D8>
...I totally want to say/spoil something, but I know I shouldn't. XD ANYWAY~!
Nooo, not the egg! D8> Come on, Peaches! DX

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FoxxBrush In reply to MiaMaha [2011-08-04 19:05:29 +0000 UTC]

yup, even the bravest Pikachu has to have a weakness. Of course, she also has a weakness for Pecha berries and Peach fruits XD But that's different.

Eh? What would you spoil?? *is all curious now* Tell meeeeeeee DX

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MiaMaha In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-05 00:49:59 +0000 UTC]

Aww. XD I sees, I sees!

Mua ha ha~ XD Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeell, all I can say is that Solitaire has a...problem with fire too. And not because she's part ice type. :'3 I'll be showing that in Mission 3, once I get to it~ .

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FoxxBrush In reply to MiaMaha [2011-08-05 21:41:37 +0000 UTC]

lol that's sweet ^^ yay for common phobias XDD

Heyyyyyy I have a brilliant idea for Mission 3, but I need cameos! Can I borrow Sol and Sol for it since they're awesome rogues? X3

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MiaMaha In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-05 23:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaaaay~ XD

8D Really? Sure, sure, of course! I would love for you to use them! And if I do get far with my Mission 3 comic, I would love to use Peaches and Sprout as well! X3

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FoxxBrush In reply to MiaMaha [2011-08-06 16:15:14 +0000 UTC]

Yosh~! Sounds good to me! I can't wait to play with the love-hate relationship in your team XDD

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MiaMaha In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-07 22:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee, I bet you're gonna have a lot of fun with that~ XD Good luck with your comics!

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FoxxBrush In reply to MiaMaha [2011-08-08 02:04:11 +0000 UTC]

lol yup yup ^^ I have a LOT of ground to cover for this Mission though. Good thing I'm writing it out, or I'd be sooooo screwed DX

I'm working on the story right now actually lol Thanks for the support though ^^ What are you going to be doing for Mission 3?

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MiaMaha In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-08 05:33:18 +0000 UTC]

Aww, good thing indeed! X3

You're welcome! : D
Hmm...I'm going to try to tackle the main mission! ;3 I have an overall idea on what I'm going to do, I believe, but I'm planning on fleshing them out and adding to them later.

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FoxxBrush In reply to MiaMaha [2011-08-10 15:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Can't wait to see it ^^ I'd do the main mission too...just because it seems so epic, but the way this group seems to be going, every mission just gets more epic than the last, and Mission 3 seems like a precursor to something huge. So, I thought I'd take it easy, build up my Team a bit more and get their stuff settled, and then when Mission 4 comes around I'll be ready to take on that storyline much easier.

Besides, SOMEONE has to do the side missions, right? XDD

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MiaMaha In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-11 00:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, I know what you mean. X3 Makes sense! ;D And that's true!

And I would do the side missions...if it wasn't for the fact that I can't think of ANY ideas for them. I want to reveal some story for Mission 3....but I can't think of any way to do that with the side missions. D;
As for the main mission, I have ideas, but the problem is...I don't even know if I'm going to finish it on time.
....so I really don't know what to do. Do the main mission and risk getting stuck....or do a side mission and find a way to reveal some story with them. XD

....eeeeehhh, too much thinking. I'll figure it out later.....XD

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FoxxBrush In reply to MiaMaha [2011-08-11 05:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Well, in my experience, it's very hard to become "stuck" on ideas, as you say it. It might seem like that if you look at it now, but no one but the guild leaders, maybe even just PK herself, know what Mission 4 will be. Chances are that when it arrives, you'll get inspired just as much as always ^^

Of course, the decision is up to you lol I have your team doing the side mission in my comic, so perhaps you'd like to match that instead? Though I think they need a big mission right about now too, to strengthen their new team formation.

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MiaMaha In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-11 06:17:11 +0000 UTC]

.....you know what...?
You're right....>:3
For all I know, the next mission may contain stuff that could really help me with my storyline, and even if it doesn't, I could create new ideas and go along with it....
Shame on me for looking at the negatives. D: I did consider what you said once before, but I guess I forgot all about it. Or pushed it away, to the daaaark corners of my mind. XD
Alright!!! Thanks for the advice and reminder. >:3

I also remembered that I already have a Mission 3 prologue planned out...and I think that prologue will only make sense with the Main Mission. :3 Even if I don't finish it on time, I'll can still keep working on it and look forward to revealing story and such.

Heh heh, thanks a bunch buddy~! You helped me out~ X3

Btw, what side mission are you doing, anyway? :3

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FoxxBrush In reply to MiaMaha [2011-08-11 06:32:25 +0000 UTC]

Haha you're very welcome ^^ The reason I'm doing side missions this time around is mainly because I have too many other storylines going on, and so it wouldn't make sense to put the big mission on top of everything. I just finished working out the storyline for Mission 3 here and I actually like it a lot XP

As for the side missions I'll be doing...well, my Team is only taking on two of them officially, but I've included all 3 of them in the storyline It's going to be SUPER busy for my team, and as a result, SUPER long lol But since I'm not doing an actual comic this time, I should be able to make it anyway. All that's left now is to type out the actual story itself, and then make Illustrations to accompany it I already have the first 2 pictures pretty much done, though I might have to reconsider how many pictures to actually do, because the more I do, the more the story will have to be broken up

But yeah, that's about how it's going to go down. Glad I could help you out!

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MiaMaha In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-12 02:53:14 +0000 UTC]

Ooooooh, I see! I totally can't wait to see it! ;3

Ooooh, cool, cool! I'm sure you can do it! X3
.....that's true. XD Be careful with the amount of pictures~! :'3

Welp, as I said, I definitely CAN NOT wait. I really want to see how you're going to include my team in it...XD Heh heh, good luck!

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FoxxBrush In reply to MiaMaha [2011-08-12 02:55:16 +0000 UTC]

lol including your team will be the funnest I wanna tell you more, but I caaaaan't. Gotta bite my lip for spoilers after all. I'm going to start posting things for Mission 3 tonight though~!

Good luck with your stuff as well ^^

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MiaMaha In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-12 03:24:37 +0000 UTC]

Awww, yeah! It would be better as a surprise~! >:'3
REALLY? 8D SQUEE, I'm gonna keep a look out. >X3

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FoxxBrush In reply to MiaMaha [2011-08-12 06:31:54 +0000 UTC]

lol well, I got caught up in writing and now it's midnight. I have the first two parts of the story done though, so I'll start drawing the first illustration and see if I can at least get one part posted tonight ^^ I still have to proofread it and stuff though. Man this is going to be a long story XDD At least 6-7 parts, even with just text. Though that's still pretty good, considering I only have to do a drawing or two for each part

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MiaMaha In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-12 08:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, I see. :3 Welp, I hope when I get on tomorrow, I'll see part one in my inbox. ;3
XD Aww, I bet. Wow.....but that's true. It's better than doing many, many comic pages full of panels~ XD
Heh heh, once again, good luck!

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FoxxBrush In reply to MiaMaha [2011-08-13 22:58:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I've been having trouble with a cold lately though, so I ended up sleeping most of yesterday XDD I'll be posting it for sure today though :3 Just gotta finish shading! It's turning out to be pretty long though OTL I mean, I did the first two parts on the text side, and it's already like 8 pages long XDD

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MiaMaha In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-08-14 16:31:37 +0000 UTC]

Awww...stupid cold...Oh geez.....wow......XD .......have fun with that~! XD

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Mechadrago [2011-08-04 07:06:56 +0000 UTC]

I like how intense this is getting

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