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Published: 2012-12-02 21:29:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 50615; Favourites: 1004; Downloads: 539
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Description You have three days, Sparkle. [link]


All art is mine except for the background vectors that I modified:
"Starry Night" by SilverVectors: [link]
"A View of Ponyville " by hellswolfeh: [link]
"Ponyville Road View " by BonesWolbach: [link]

My Little Pony and all characters involved are copyright Hasbro & Lauren Faust.
Except for Majora's Mask, which belongs to Nintendo and it's respective owners.

Fonts used are Suplexmentary Comic NC & BDCartoonShout.
Created with Inkscape and Photoshop.
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Comments: 314

Foxy-Noxy In reply to ??? [2012-12-04 21:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the kind words. I do agree that I kind of missed portraying the first panel well. Regardless, thanks again. Glad you enjoyed my comic. ^-^

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Capt-Light-Shine [2012-12-03 19:53:25 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Overall, a good use of vectors, and good build up to the punchline. It is very simple in its presentation, but that simplicity is what adds a great deal of impact to the emotion of the comic.

It does play on Trixie's revenge, which is a step away from what I have perceived as the "typical" view of Trixie's character development. Instead of playing into the "Trixie is repentant now," you reached deeper within a very straight-forward concept: revenge.

You do break from her typical third-person speech pattern in pane two, though I am unsure if this is accidental, or playing on Trixie's use of first-person perspective towards the end of the episode. However, such a break from character makes it sound more... sinister, if that was your intent.

You may wish to add reflections in the ponies' eyes in the first pane, as they look like black holes rather than actual pupils.

On a final note, the three pane build up to the reveal at the end is masterfully executed.

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Foxy-Noxy In reply to Capt-Light-Shine [2012-12-04 21:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the critique! I am glad that you enjoyed my comic. I really wasn't happy that Trixie was apologetic near the end, so in my headcanon, this was the only possible option. XD

Thanks again, it means a lot. ^-^

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alexwarlorn [2014-03-17 05:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Twilight, "Except this isn't you Trixie. You were never fool enough to make yourself a slave TWICE." 

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ComicLover25 [2014-03-15 06:54:27 +0000 UTC]

You have chosen a teraball fate

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ComicLover25 In reply to ComicLover25 [2014-03-15 06:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Twily

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Krashface [2014-02-16 19:22:55 +0000 UTC]

...... BEN, were are you?

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toasteda [2013-10-17 22:00:40 +0000 UTC]

MAJARAS MASK, IS IT HAUNTED? AAAAAAH

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RoadieTurbo In reply to toasteda [2013-11-26 11:03:12 +0000 UTC]

its always been haunted/cursed though, the majora's mask is said to be the embodiment of a lost tribe's hexing rituals until the tribe in question realized how dangerous the mask was and hoped to seal it away to that it would never be misused by unworthy hands seeking power and destruction over the world. or at least that's one of the myths of the Mask...

the other myth is that it was carved by a traveler who came back a wish granting beast that had been injured so the traveler decided to help the beast and stay with it until its passing, at the beast's death the traveler decided to use the remains to create a mask to remember the creature and hopefully pass its wishing abilities through the new creation he crafted. now the rumor around the net is that the ancient tribe descended from this traveler and used the mask for the above purposes without knowing what the object had been made of or what its already magical properties were.

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SilverDashArt [2013-10-04 16:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Really well-made backgrounds and awesome reference! You deserve a fave!

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Clockwork-Jack [2013-07-03 04:51:51 +0000 UTC]

*Gasps* I remember that game! Nice comic!

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catperson100 [2013-05-20 00:37:24 +0000 UTC]

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xenosplicer117 [2013-04-24 03:29:53 +0000 UTC]

Isn't there a fic that uses the last panel as a cover

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Foxy-Noxy In reply to xenosplicer117 [2013-04-24 04:59:55 +0000 UTC]

There shouldn't be, as I made it and I haven't authorized use of it elsewhere. If you find it, could you link me to it?

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xenosplicer117 In reply to Foxy-Noxy [2013-04-25 03:19:45 +0000 UTC]

this [link]

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ITSOVER9000ish [2013-03-30 01:14:18 +0000 UTC]

OMC! The Marejora's Mask!

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Foxy-Noxy In reply to ITSOVER9000ish [2013-03-30 04:01:03 +0000 UTC]

DAT PUN. OH GOD DAT PUN. XD

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CommanderEX [2013-03-12 14:01:44 +0000 UTC]

I am sure Luna will protect her friend, after all Twilight not only saved her but also was her first friend, no way Luna will let Trixie use her Moon to kill her best if only true friend.

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konics [2013-02-19 10:59:31 +0000 UTC]

oh god

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SSBrosB [2013-01-27 05:01:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm scared to know if the moon has a face or not. O.o

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jjkgamer [2013-01-22 23:54:47 +0000 UTC]

So awesome!!!!!!! My fav Zelda game of all time

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Moonlight-Pen [2013-01-22 17:50:40 +0000 UTC]

Nice recolor

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lordsiravant [2013-01-22 03:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Heh...hehehe. Hehehehaha! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

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gamma102 In reply to lordsiravant [2013-01-31 00:34:28 +0000 UTC]

*slaps you*

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lordsiravant In reply to gamma102 [2013-01-31 03:26:12 +0000 UTC]

*breaks your face*

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gamma102 In reply to lordsiravant [2013-01-31 06:29:24 +0000 UTC]

AAARGH!

*Breaks your too*

... Well, s*yay*t. I hope I have insureance...

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crazyseandx [2013-01-21 05:56:58 +0000 UTC]

Otherwise(sorry for double comment), good thinking on using the idea of this sort of thing going.

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crazyseandx [2013-01-21 05:56:05 +0000 UTC]

Flaw #1) After using Majora's Mask Skull Kid was incredibly remorseful...at least, in my eyes.

Flaw #2) I think Miyamoto would..well...take it, Mr. Michael Scott.
Oh GOD NO!! NO!! NOOO!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

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CaraCitrine [2012-12-30 08:18:21 +0000 UTC]

I did not expect this. BEAUTIFUL. FANTASTIC. WONDERFUL. YOU ARE GRAND.

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jdts7 [2012-12-24 04:29:59 +0000 UTC]

PINKIE! we need you to play random instruments again!

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sonic500 [2012-12-22 10:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Whelp, there fucked.

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topofthemornintoye [2012-12-20 02:24:03 +0000 UTC]

"Twilight Equips Fierce Deity Mask" Awwww shits about go down.

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StandardBronyBrowser [2012-12-16 00:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Luna will not be happy.

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MKBrony [2012-12-14 23:30:52 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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InsaneBlogger [2012-12-12 04:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Wait a minute, if the moon's falling... WHAT HAPPENED TO LUNA?!??!??!!!

(Wonderful comic, loved the reference)

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Incredinic [2012-12-11 13:57:40 +0000 UTC]

This was freaking awesome.

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Cristazio [2012-12-10 15:36:19 +0000 UTC]

What about Luna? lol

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kawa11kun [2012-12-08 14:52:19 +0000 UTC]

It would be awesome if last panel were a wallpaper...

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kawa11kun [2012-12-08 14:50:57 +0000 UTC]

it would be awesome if last panel were a wallpaper

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metapsionic [2012-12-08 01:05:10 +0000 UTC]

Creepy!

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PJtheBrony [2012-12-07 20:10:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh god why...

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rphb [2012-12-07 17:41:19 +0000 UTC]

Okay that is one ugly mask, but I don't get the reference, is it supposed to be more powerful then the alicorn amulet, that seems unlikely

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Foxy-Noxy In reply to rphb [2012-12-07 18:24:54 +0000 UTC]

It's from a Legend of Zelda game. If they were in the same universe the Alicorn Amulet would be like a parasprite whereas Majora's Mask would be like Discord.

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rphb In reply to Foxy-Noxy [2012-12-07 20:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Discord would just snap his fingers and turn that mask into confetti. from a little internet surfing it seems to me that the mask are at most, and properly somewhat below Nightmare Moon in treat level.
Discord on the other hand is way way up there, he only used a small faction of his power against the main six, and the only reason they were able to defeat him was because he underestimated them. He could have destroyed them at any time, but he just wanted to play with them.
Nightmare Moon on the other hand used everything she had against them and didn't hold back.

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Ophiel004 In reply to rphb [2012-12-08 02:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh hohoho.. You REALLY don't know what you are talking about if you actually believe Discord stands a chance againist that..

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rphb In reply to Ophiel004 [2012-12-08 09:50:09 +0000 UTC]

I don't think you know what you are talking about, Discord is just about the most powerful fictional entity ever. He could take out Superman and all the justice league just by snapping his finger for instance.

He is quite literal the primordial god of chaos.

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topofthemornintoye In reply to rphb [2012-12-20 02:26:48 +0000 UTC]

Couldn't take down a bunch of ponies.

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rphb In reply to topofthemornintoye [2012-12-20 08:42:03 +0000 UTC]

He underestemated them and the elements, and seriously wouln't you if you were him. If he wanted to he could have just killed them outright or turned them into an assortment of cheeses. He played with them as a cat plays with a mouse because he thought it was funny and he never thought he was in any real danger.

Discord is whit is chaos powers properly the most powerful fictional entity that have ever existed. I don't think there are any supervillain in any comic book more powerful then him.

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NuclearMuffinCookie [2012-12-07 11:16:18 +0000 UTC]

Humiliating Trixie?

You shouldn't have done that.

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Gray--Day [2012-12-06 21:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, Foxy. And man, have things ever turned serious. Trixie seems to be like monster waves in tower defense games now - she'll come back every time you beat her and every time she'll be stronger until it's game over.

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