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Foxyrulz β€” Enough is enough

Published: 2019-04-18 00:35:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 3272; Favourites: 84; Downloads: 5
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Description Bluestar turned to leave the den, when Fireheart heard a furious spitting. He turned, his eyes wide as a white blur came up behind Bluestar. Had Cloudtail gone mad enough to attack his leader?!

It took him a moment to realize the white pelt didn't belong to his nephew; Frostfur stood there, back arched and teeth bared. Fireheart had never seen such fury in the normally gentle and level-headed she-cat's eyes.

Bluestar, it seemed, was also equally bewildered; she stared at Frostfur with a look of shock.

"How dare you!" Frostfur hissed, looking half ready to lunge at the leader like she was a ShadowClan warrior. "I've had enough of this, Bluestar! You treat us like dirt and refuse to lead your clan like the leader you were, but you do not get to treat my kit this way!"

Brightheart stirred in her nest, mumbling. Fireheart realized what he saw in Frostfur's eyes; the same look he'd seen in Goldenflower's when he spoke to her before. That was the fierceness of a mother's love for her kits, stronger than all of Lionclan.

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OK I HATE HOW THE ERINS DIDN'T GIVE FROSTFUR ANY EMOTION TO THE FACT HER DAUGHTER BECAME A CHEW TOY!

And I also find it hard to believe she'd be okay with her being named Lostface, just to spite their warrior ancestors. Yeah it was the first series where cats were named after their injuries, BUT THEY HAD A CEREMONY. THEY OBVIOUSLY CONSENTED TO IT OR WERE AT LEAST PRESENT TO IT!! Bluestar named Brightheart purely out of spite to Starclan while she was unconscious and it was uncertain if she would live or not.Β 

Bluestar's treatment of her clanmates, ESPECIALLY BRIGHTHEART, is horrible and unjustifiable to me, no matter what you say. "Oh, but she was sick!" MENTAL ILLNESS DOES NOT EXCUSE THE PAIN YOU INFLICT ON OTHERS.

Ok so AU time! Thunderclan gets more and more tired of Bluestar's crap and start looking to Fireheart as a leader. They decide to keep Bluestar as a 'leader' to save face with the other clans, but Brightpaw being named Lostface (directly after they found out that Swiftpaw was dead) was the straw that broke the camel's back. Speckletail, Frostfur and Goldenflower lead the revolution against Bluestar, all of them having kits suffer because of her treatment.

They demand that she steps down as leader and retire to the elder's den, as well as pestering Fireheart to go see Starclan and at least try to get his nine lives (Not caring about the whole leader-needs-to-be-gone thing bc they just want a competent leader.) Before the fight with the dogs, they put Bluestar with the elders, no longer seeing her as their leader. Then everything happens as normal.
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ELROart [2021-10-28 01:45:13 +0000 UTC]

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Eevee-Star [2021-08-27 13:00:10 +0000 UTC]

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ELROart In reply to Eevee-Star [2021-10-28 01:44:29 +0000 UTC]

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Eevee-Star In reply to ELROart [2021-10-29 14:43:41 +0000 UTC]

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ELROart In reply to Eevee-Star [2021-10-29 17:04:30 +0000 UTC]

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Eevee-Star In reply to ELROart [2021-10-29 17:24:45 +0000 UTC]

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Angeygirl [2021-01-23 03:09:23 +0000 UTC]

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Starstriker-K9 [2020-05-04 20:47:47 +0000 UTC]

what the actual, hell. this is so perfect, i’m gonna cry. i love you for drawing the scene.

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Foxyrulz In reply to Starstriker-K9 [2020-05-05 02:24:25 +0000 UTC]

awww thanks for liking it

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AviRayburn [2020-02-02 01:08:52 +0000 UTC]

LET THE BACKGROUND CHARACTERS HAVE CHARACTER, ERINS!

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JillianeCobre In reply to AviRayburn [2021-09-15 11:21:50 +0000 UTC]

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Foxyrulz In reply to AviRayburn [2020-02-02 01:29:45 +0000 UTC]

YESSSSS

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AviRayburn In reply to Foxyrulz [2020-02-02 01:42:58 +0000 UTC]

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Foxyrulz In reply to AviRayburn [2020-02-02 04:24:44 +0000 UTC]

I'd have to say Jayfeather! I'm constantly tired of everyone's bs, I have every reason to distrust my ancestors and call out bullcrap as I see it, and I have very poor eyesight (I'm legally blind without my glasses)

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AviRayburn In reply to Foxyrulz [2020-02-02 16:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Manchester's pretty badass, yeah

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darlingfoxes [2020-01-26 03:50:58 +0000 UTC]

mind if i redraw this scene

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Foxyrulz In reply to darlingfoxes [2020-01-26 03:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Of course! I love this pic

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TobyandMavisforever [2019-12-13 08:20:24 +0000 UTC]

So, Frostfur's kit that was effected by this was Brightpaw/Lostface/Brightheart, Goldenflower's kit to be effected by this was Tawnypaw/pelt, but what about Speckletail's kit?

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rubkalove In reply to TobyandMavisforever [2021-02-12 18:58:42 +0000 UTC]

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TobyandMavisforever In reply to rubkalove [2021-02-12 19:08:56 +0000 UTC]

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rubkalove In reply to TobyandMavisforever [2021-02-12 19:10:23 +0000 UTC]

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Foxyrulz In reply to TobyandMavisforever [2019-12-13 12:10:30 +0000 UTC]

Snowkit’s death was treated as nothing more than an omen, an attack on Bluestar from Starclan. It was during Bluestar’s whole mental breakdown phase where she basically neglected the whole clan except on her β€œgood days”

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TobyandMavisforever In reply to Foxyrulz [2019-12-13 12:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, Snowkit! I got Speckletail's kit mixed up with Dappletail's for some reason.

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Foxyrulz In reply to TobyandMavisforever [2019-12-13 12:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Dappletail and Speckletail both had deaf kits, but Dappletail’s went missing a long while ago. Another thing that hurt speckletail was the fact Bluestar told her Snowkit couldn’t be a warrior and would have to be sent to the elders den with his mother when she retired despite the fact that
A. Speckletail had already given Snowkit training to help him understand tail and body signals, which could at least help him do patrols
B. Brackenfur was fully ready to train Snowkit as his apprentice, even after finding out he was deaf.

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TobyandMavisforever In reply to Foxyrulz [2019-12-13 12:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Holy daze, Bluestar's depression was way worse than I thoughtΒ 

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Foxyrulz In reply to TobyandMavisforever [2019-12-13 12:31:11 +0000 UTC]

You want a list of the stuff she pulled during her mental breakdown?
A. Tried to get her clan to fight the other clans for no valid reasons. Like when she wanted to attack Windclan because she thought the dogs came from them despite lack of evidence, and didn’t care if her clan mates got slaughtered in a needless battle
B. Spent literal moons in her den refusing to speak to her clan at all and only speaking to Fireheart due to her own paranoia.
C. Refused to appoint any apprentices to warriors because β€œwhy should she care about traitors” despite the fact that these apprentices were well past the age to become warriors
D. Made Cloudpaw, a much younger apprentice, a warrior over his peers because not only was he Fireheart’s kin but because he denied that Starclan was real, which drove Swiftpaw to try and find the dogs
E. Verbally abused Fireheart despite him being the only one helping her at this point. Anytime he disagrees with her she yells at him and starts to accuse him of being a traitor
F. Dumped all her duties on Fireheart, who was a young inexperienced cat who had been repeatedly been forced into duties he was really too young for
G. Renaming Brightpaw to Lostface β€œto get back at Starclan” which spits in the face of her trauma. Brightpaw lost a close friend and was brutally mauled by dogs in an attempt to get Bluestar to finally make them warriors, only to be given a cruel name and also being shipped off to the elders den

AND THATS TO NAME A FEW

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TobyandMavisforever In reply to Foxyrulz [2019-12-13 12:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Yikes. No wonder Fireheart had to lean on the likes of Sandstorm, Greystripe and especially Whitestorm for support.

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OvaDovaCat [2019-11-24 21:37:38 +0000 UTC]

Can I draw something about this?

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Foxyrulz In reply to OvaDovaCat [2019-11-24 23:24:29 +0000 UTC]

YESS
Tag me if you do

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Lizthewolflover [2019-04-22 21:26:01 +0000 UTC]

Exactly! I love this for many reasons!

1. Frostfur and the clan is shown to be upset with Bluestar
2. The line "Mental Illness does not excuse the pain you inflict on others." (YES)- looking at you, Ashfur*

*I guess Ashfur wasn't mentally ill, but just emotionally unstable- which still doesn't excuse him.Β 

"I'll kill your family to show my love for you" ~Probably Ashfur, 2008

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Foxyrulz In reply to Lizthewolflover [2019-04-22 22:34:09 +0000 UTC]

YES YES YES

I AM SO HAPPY PEOPLE GET THIS

And Bluestar was Frostfur's mentor! How did she not feel angry that her mentor did that to her daughter!

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Lizthewolflover In reply to Foxyrulz [2019-04-22 23:57:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh!!! I forgot all about that... That's even worse! :/Β 

But yeah, I have to say one thing that I'd really like to see fixed in the Warriors series is the depiction of horrible acts being rational. "Loved too much" is just so infuriating tbh. I believe that line was a huge part of why a lot of people defend him.

Honestly it's kind of sad how easy that happens- no matter what the group or fandom majority people happen to mod together to defend characters (Not sure if you have ever seen Buffy the Vampire Slayer, but the episode "Seeing Red" big horrible thing happens but a huge majority of the Buffyverse fandom defend the guy and do a lot of the classic "Victim Blaming" moves/lines)

Whatever the case, this is my canon now. "What? Bluestar never stepped down from leadership? Ahh, you must be mistaken! Let me show you to the real canon events, shown by Foxyrulz!"

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Foxyrulz In reply to Lizthewolflover [2019-04-23 01:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the 'loved too much' excuse is stupid. Like if Ashfur got into Starclan for loving too much, by that logic Mapleshade should be in there too! She loved her kits so much she was driven to murder!

I've watched a few of the first season of Buffy, but haven't got that far.

Omg you're so nice! I might draw Bramblestar not letting Rowanstar take Violetkit next, because that whole scene was heartbreaking and pointless

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Lizthewolflover In reply to Foxyrulz [2019-05-01 05:26:33 +0000 UTC]

Agreed! Mapleshade kills cats thinking she's getting her kits to StarClan by killing the cats that helped cause their demise due to her dreams she thought were an omens of sorts, each dream coming back as a sort of confirmation its working, while Ashfur tries to burn three cats alive in front of what he thought was their mother, along with trying to help kill their grandfather due to his rage of loving too much.. Like, seriously. Come on.Β 


And yes! Its a really great show! I hope you continue it! Who are your favorite characters? (Feel free to do that in a PM if you'd like! cleaner comment section xD lol)

Oohh I'd love to see that! ❀ and of course! imma say if I like something! 

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Foxyrulz In reply to Lizthewolflover [2019-05-01 11:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Ashfur is creepy and horrible, Yellowfang is stupid for letting him in. Poor Mapleshade did all that killing to help her kits get to Starclan, and she never gets to see them again

I like Angel! his actor (David something it's been a while) is also in another show I love called Bones!

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Lizthewolflover In reply to Foxyrulz [2019-05-02 11:12:49 +0000 UTC]

Ah yeah! Angel is a cool character ^^ my favorite is Willow. She's such a cinnamon roll lol! You know a spin off show goes along with Buffy starting at season 4, and its really cool to see! I'm currently rewatching the series to get to watch them together (order of episodes is online)

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Foxyrulz In reply to Lizthewolflover [2019-05-02 11:20:41 +0000 UTC]

Willow... that's the redheaded witch right? God It's been years

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Lizthewolflover In reply to Foxyrulz [2019-05-03 04:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah ^^

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AskWarri0rs [2019-04-22 20:25:52 +0000 UTC]

I loveeee this AU



I mean Frostfur did chase Ravenpaw away from her kits when he was rumored to be bad.

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Foxyrulz In reply to AskWarri0rs [2019-04-22 20:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

Why was she so ready to attack a harmless apprentice over a rumor, but when her leader and mentor renames her daughter a horrible name after a traumatic accident?

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MapleLeafSunset [2019-04-18 07:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh the emotion in the piece is amazing, I love the AU !!!

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Foxyrulz In reply to MapleLeafSunset [2019-04-18 11:14:50 +0000 UTC]

OMG THANK YOU!!

I've got another AU I'll post soon, where Rainflower gets called out on her crap

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MapleLeafSunset In reply to Foxyrulz [2019-04-18 11:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh. That is absolutely beautiful, I need to see this

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Foxyrulz In reply to MapleLeafSunset [2019-04-18 20:22:45 +0000 UTC]

I'll post it soon

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MapleLeafSunset In reply to Foxyrulz [2019-04-19 05:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Cool !

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