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Published: 2019-04-23 00:44:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 0
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I made a character that belongs to a MYO event that has doneThis is Riyalis - Male
Age: around 24
(He does have accessories but I do not know what they are as of yet, I may make them on separate pieces and put them into the description here)
He was Born at Night and during the Winter, which specifies his pallet and the moon marking, I also gave him the rare fire ability if that's ok ^^'
Personality: (simple)
- shy but talkative
- he can get very annoyed easily
- he usually collects things in his spare time
- Prefers the night time over the day time
- very little bark
- can be very aggressive/protective
- Can be just a literal jerk at times
Crush: none yet
Family: unknown, he ran off at a young age
Likes:
- Being alone
- Collecting small usually interesting objects
- snow and drinks (hot chocolate, ice water, fruit drinks)
- space and anything that glows in the night
- pretzels
Dislikes:
- sunlight
- temperatures too hot or too cold
- when people bug him for no reason
- beef jerky
- people touching his fireflies
-------------- He may not be used in anyway because this species is not mine -------------------
Ears: Tipped - COMMON
Horns: Runic - UNCOMMON
Eyes: Normal - COMMON
Mane Styles: Mowhawk - COMMON
Tails: Lion - COMMON
Teeth & Tongue: Razor and Split - COMMON
Fireflies & Wings: No wings, common fireflies
Magic: RARE
Forehead Marking: Moon
Leg & Tail Markings: Half tail - UNCOMMON
One Bare - UNCOMMON
Link to the Journal that I made due to the Rare trait ----- www.deviantart.com/fracturedbl…
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Comments: 8
Yaztalich [2019-04-23 13:56:12 +0000 UTC]
I don't see any problems with the character, it's very well done!
However, since you stated the magic as rare, the Rogheery has to have it's whole body on fire,
since the reference sheet is showing it as uncommon ;v;
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FracturedBlue In reply to Yaztalich [2019-04-23 17:48:35 +0000 UTC]
oh is it? i had a hard time seeing what was necessarily on fire in the ref for it so i wasnt sure on how to draw it
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FracturedBlue In reply to Yaztalich [2019-04-24 21:19:36 +0000 UTC]
should i do anything to fix it? or should i not worry about it and make a new ref to fix it all
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Yaztalich In reply to FracturedBlue [2019-04-24 21:31:51 +0000 UTC]
depends on you. If you want to have the rare magic, I would advise you to change it.
But you could go with uncommon magic, then you don't have to change it at all. Just change the description.
It's your choice really.
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FracturedBlue In reply to Yaztalich [2019-04-25 18:31:58 +0000 UTC]
sorry about all the replies
But I believed I have fixed him? does it looks any better
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FracturedBlue In reply to Yaztalich [2019-04-24 22:20:23 +0000 UTC]
EDIT: OK nvm i think i can fix him give me a little bit but i still am sorry about my missunderstanding
and for all the trouble i have made, i can just get really confused easily and its usually my own doing and not anyone else
but i can fix him
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