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Published: 2004-03-14 01:42:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 54; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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A cliche rant from a girl whose fallen in love for the fourth time.Woe is I?
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Comments: 6
metalmistress [2004-04-16 18:03:24 +0000 UTC]
Desire helps diseases spread.
Convulsing underneath the bed.
my favorite part. lovely imagery...as always.
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voices [2004-03-17 16:40:36 +0000 UTC]
this the strongest out of the 3 poems uve recentely submitted, liked the structure, liked the rhyme (weird for me)
fallen in love for the fourth time, man, havent ever fallen in love, then again dont think i have the metnal capcity to do so, but i dont mind, as long as the sun shines, and drips into my ornage juice.
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fragilefacade In reply to voices [2004-03-18 04:30:12 +0000 UTC]
I guess I should stop thinking too much when I write my poetry. I didn't think at all when I wrote this one. Usually, that disappoints me, but I guess I did good?
You know how people say "It's better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all?". It's pure bullshit, for lack of a better word.
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