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Published: 2003-10-22 21:24:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 12
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Description She is an angel; beauty;
The glimmer in my eye.
Her allure had paused the earth;
It gave a lasting sigh.

But deep within her vision,
You know her smile deceives.
Her dance is just a dance and,
An ace falls from her sleeve.

He hugs her when he’s hungry.
She loves him when he’s gone.
Their closeness makes us jealous.
We feed in to their con.

He is an angel; beauty;
He says he will not lie.
His tender heart had healed our wounds.
He saves us as we die.

But deep within his shadow,
Lies what he’d never show.
She sees him as the sunshine.
He sees him as the snow.

He hugs her when he’s hungry.
She loves him when he’s gone.
Their closeness makes us jealous.
We feed in to their con.

© Sylwia Wielgosz 2003.
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Comments: 19

trit0n [2004-01-20 19:19:50 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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fragilefacade In reply to trit0n [2004-01-20 21:01:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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GoatMilk [2004-01-04 20:23:25 +0000 UTC]

really love the penwork, you should upload more of your handrawn art (not that i dont like poetry, i write a lor of it myself)
~kiz

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fragilefacade In reply to GoatMilk [2004-01-04 22:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that isn't my doing. It's 's. But thank you, on her behalf.

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poet-of-da-north [2003-11-04 13:36:08 +0000 UTC]

thats so pretty! ;_;
these lines are my fave (actually i love the whole thing!!!)
Her dance is just a dance and,
An ace falls from her sleeve.

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fragilefacade In reply to poet-of-da-north [2003-11-04 17:14:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

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poet-of-da-north In reply to fragilefacade [2003-11-04 22:19:04 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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acidangel [2003-10-30 23:25:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow! This is beautiful! Ill fav it!

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fragilefacade In reply to acidangel [2003-10-31 00:52:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. <3

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shatteredone [2003-10-24 23:35:56 +0000 UTC]

wow. utterly stunning!

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fragilefacade In reply to shatteredone [2003-10-24 23:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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blameshiori [2003-10-23 09:11:03 +0000 UTC]

*kisses*

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fragilefacade In reply to blameshiori [2003-10-23 10:14:39 +0000 UTC]

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phaze05 [2003-10-23 01:13:11 +0000 UTC]

We feed in to their con.

last line does it for me...

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fragilefacade In reply to phaze05 [2003-10-23 01:22:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment, Love.

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CeruleanMoon [2003-10-22 23:43:21 +0000 UTC]

wow that is so beautiful. I wish I could write that good.

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fragilefacade In reply to CeruleanMoon [2003-10-22 23:47:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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auddwaggin [2003-10-22 21:32:29 +0000 UTC]

HELDELANCE! GLORIA!

Holy fuck that's beautiful <3

the ironic part is that I'm about to upload Heldelance's ref sheet o_o

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fragilefacade In reply to auddwaggin [2003-10-22 21:33:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm so cool.

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