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Published: 2003-08-31 01:40:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 64; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Your skin is like brittle cloth,That breaks within my touch.
Like golden flames given to me,
But I don’t need that much.
Your voice is like the siren’s tune,
So pleasing. Soothing. Calm.
Just like the rattle of a snake,
Before it bites my palm.
Your lips are weapons for your plan.
You weave the web to trap.
You bind me in this love façade,
And sit me in your lap.
Your eyes are like a sea of blue,
Distracting from your frown.
Urging me to fall apart;
To slip; to fall; to drown.
© Sylwia Wielgosz 2003.
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Comments: 8
o.O ::licks your wording.:: wow, i should come here more often.. for art inspiration. 
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That's probably the nicest comment a writer can get (if I can even consider myself a writer). Thank you! ^^
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Your eyes are like a sea of blue,
Distracting from your frown.
Urging me to fall apart;
To slip; to fall; to drown.
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Great work kid. Keep it up.
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good work.. i like this... very nicely written.
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i could read ur writings all day and NEVER get bored. u are just so descriptive in the most beautiful of ways in all ur work. its marvelous!! once again fabulous job my dear.
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OooOOOooooOOo nice work, i luv it, it is very very well written
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the poem is just as beautifully written as the description 
- brittany
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Why am I the first to comment on this? Usually by the time I get here, Syl's probably bored with all the compliments she gets for her poetry.
Your style never fades.
Your analogies here are beyond beautiful.
"Your voice is like the siren’s tune,
So pleasing. Soothing. Calm.
Just like the rattle of a snake,
Before it bites my palm."
Wow. Where does it come from?
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